FREE Story Reviews :)

Hello! As the title suggests, I’ll be doing free reviews for whoever wants one.

All I need is the TITLE of your story and the name of the AUTHOR.

You’re free to leave as much or as little information as you’d like about your story, only criteria you need to fill (to get a review) is to include the title and the name of the author so I can find your story. :smile:


How many episodes will you review? :slight_smile:

Here’s mine:
Title: Dreams and Nightmares
Author: Dreamer
Chapters: 19

It depends! On some stories I may be able to give enough feedback only reading one, some I may need to read a few more :slight_smile:

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omg! thanks so much for doing this i’d love a review! :grin:

Title: Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane
Author: Marshmallow O.
Genre: Mystery, Romance, Comedy
Style: Limelight
Summary: It’s a race against time as you and your friends try to escape the mysterious sleepover that you were invited to… Read to uncover the Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane.


I’m changing my current one, so this will be my new one soon enough! :grin:

Chapters: 4 (More to come)

Create your own characters and Choices Matter!:blush:

Thanks for the review! You mentioned a few things I didn’t think about until now :slight_smile:

Feel free to check out my story. :smiley:

My story: © Tribe of Malapinchi
Author: Jannah Jackson
Genre: Thriller/Mystery/Horror/Fantasy/Adventure
Story style: Secret Surprise :wink:
Description: Toss into a land of the sun, magic, lies and dark secrets in Asia. Can you survive, solve the havoc and save everyone before it’s too late? CharacterCustomization
Episodes: 5/6

My episodes are rather LONGGGG… 20 mins about there just to give a heads up.

Hey, thank you for creating this thread. I would love a review.:slight_smile:
Author: S_Unique

Title: The Four Horsemen

Genre: Fantasy

Style: Ink

Description: 4 Sins. 4 Angels fell. 4 Horsemen rose. A curse was casted. And the battle of good vs evil is about to begin. CC/ Choices matter



Name: Retrace
Genre: Mystery. is where I placed it. but honestly, I have no idea. maybe drama
style: ink
description: mc’s mom has been shot and is in a coma. follow her as she tries to contact her dad. while listening to the story of how her parents meet. he was the son of a mafia boss and her an undercover cop. it is two stories in one

Title: Oblivious
By: The_saminator
Genre: Comedy
Episodes: 11 (on-going)
Description: When socially awkward Leanna catches the eye of equally awkward Kai things can’t get more awkward, can they?

Title: Bad Behavior
Author: Liyah

Partners in crime
By Vicky

Thanks sm for doing this I’d love a review

Title: Triple Threat: The Life Of An Assassin

Authors: Sapp & Bhaddie

Genre: Romance/Drama

Episodes: only 1&2 are out (ongoing

Style: Ink


Story: Sunrise -in blossom-
Author: Anna Yong
Short Desc: It was that one sunrise that made him realise he couldn’t let go. It was that one sunrise that made her realise she had to let go.

Tittle: MC: The Bar on 23rd
Author: Dr.Smile

I am so glsd you are using your free time to give us chance. Thank you so much! :hugs::hugs::hugs:
Story name Vip Brother:Love is…
Authors nameMegz_episode
Episodes 3
Instagram name megz_episode7997
How many episode you want me to review 3 are enough
Description A story about 16 celebrities who enter the house of Big Brother uder 24/7 surveillance for 2 months to win the prize of 500 000$, but before that they have to go through all challenges of Big Brother.
I would like you to promote my story.
Style LL
Cover IMG_20190223_164712
I would like to DM me on instagram if you can.

  • The title intrigues me. I like it

  • Great use of both zooms and spot directing! I like the way you showed a couple of characters before getting into the backgrounds

  • In the first scene, the one at school, were Lia talks to who I presume is her friend, her ‘‘NAME’’ instead of an actual name. I don’t know if this is due to the reader being able to customize the character later on or if it’s just a simple mistake, so I thought I’d point it out :slight_smile: (okay, we will customize the character. Got to that part now, though you may wanna consider giving the character a proper temporary name until we get to customize them)

  • Grammar is good. No mistakes that I could spot

  • Now I’m nitpicking, mostly because I can’t find much negative about your story but still wanna give you something… But you’re using a lot of commas, and in certain sentences they work, but in other sentence they really shouldn’t be used.

Take for one example when MC is reading her invite and says ‘‘There are, so many red flags.’’ In short, commas is used to indicate a short break in-between sentences. When adding a comma, try to read the sentence and decide whether or not the pause is fitting.

It happens again when James says ‘‘There is no way in hell that I’m going to lose this case, to Keller.’’ A comma is not needed and a comma shouldn’t break a sentence in half, making it an unfinished sentence.Think of it as using dots

  • I love how you said ‘‘bAd BoY’’ instead of bad boy. It’s so minor but it makes it seem like the MC has no regards for his bad boy tactics and I love that

  • Your chapter was at a great length. The plot was introduced well in the first chapter. All in all, I really enjoyed your story from beginning to end!

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This will be the worst review you’ve ever gotten, but I couldn’t find anything to comment on. Your story is very unique, the advanced directing is superb and proves that you’ve spent a lot of time on your story. Your characters are diverse, it seems to be a well developed plot, your grammar is great. You deserve much more reads, and that is all I have to say about it :slight_smile:

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awh! thank you so much for doing this! i really really appreciate it! :sob: i will for sure be incorporating all of the things you mentioned and THANK YOU for the not in the commas! i’ve read so many things online trying to explain it, but literally nothing helps :joy:

thank you so much for reading and i’m so glad that you enjoyed it! :star_struck::two_hearts:

Hey! I hope you’ll review my story! :grin:

Title: Rich Girls Cry Too
Author: Ava Josefine
Genre: Drama
Plot/Summary: Vera’s dream of becoming a famous musician feels closer than ever when a new, big TV-show about her school is being made. But things don’t turn out the way she expects them to.
Style: Limelight
Episodes: 6 (with more to come :wink:)


Thanks in advance,
Ava Josefine :dizzy:

Hello!! Thank you so much for taking the time to do these reviews. :blush:

Story Name : Queen
Author : Steffi
Genre : Drama, Romance
Status : 3 episodes at the moment, more coming soon
Style : Limelight
Instagram : @steffi.episode
Description: All her life, Devina was raised learning the ways of being a proper lady of the nobility. But her life is suddenly disrupted when a royal advisor visits and reveals to her that she is the next monarch of Artesia. WIll she reign? Or will she renounce her claim to the throne? Will she choose love or duty? It’s all up to you!!