Hello! As the title suggests, I’ll be doing free reviews for whoever wants one.
All I need is the TITLE of your story and the name of the AUTHOR.
You’re free to leave as much or as little information as you’d like about your story, only criteria you need to fill (to get a review) is to include the title and the name of the author so I can find your story.
How many episodes will you review?
Title: Dreams and Nightmares
It depends! On some stories I may be able to give enough feedback only reading one, some I may need to read a few more
omg! thanks so much for doing this i’d love a review!
Title: Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane
Author: Marshmallow O.
Genre: Mystery, Romance, Comedy
Summary: It’s a race against time as you and your friends try to escape the mysterious sleepover that you were invited to… Read to uncover the Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane.
I’m changing my current one, so this will be my new one soon enough!
Chapters: 4 (More to come)
Create your own characters and Choices Matter!
Thanks for the review! You mentioned a few things I didn’t think about until now
Feel free to check out my story.
My story: © Tribe of Malapinchi
Author: Jannah Jackson
Story style: Secret Surprise
Description: Toss into a land of the sun, magic, lies and dark secrets in Asia. Can you survive, solve the havoc and save everyone before it’s too late? CharacterCustomization
My episodes are rather LONGGGG… 20 mins about there just to give a heads up.
Hey, thank you for creating this thread. I would love a review.
Title: The Four Horsemen
Description: 4 Sins. 4 Angels fell. 4 Horsemen rose. A curse was casted. And the battle of good vs evil is about to begin. CC/ Choices matter
Genre: Mystery. is where I placed it. but honestly, I have no idea. maybe drama
description: mc’s mom has been shot and is in a coma. follow her as she tries to contact her dad. while listening to the story of how her parents meet. he was the son of a mafia boss and her an undercover cop. it is two stories in one
Episodes: 11 (on-going)
Description: When socially awkward Leanna catches the eye of equally awkward Kai things can’t get more awkward, can they?
Title: Bad Behavior
Partners in crime
Thanks sm for doing this I’d love a review
Title: Triple Threat: The Life Of An Assassin
Authors: Sapp & Bhaddie
Episodes: only 1&2 are out (ongoing
Story: Sunrise -in blossom-
Author: Anna Yong
Short Desc: It was that one sunrise that made him realise he couldn’t let go. It was that one sunrise that made her realise she had to let go.
Tittle: MC: The Bar on 23rd
The title intrigues me. I like it
Great use of both zooms and spot directing! I like the way you showed a couple of characters before getting into the backgrounds
In the first scene, the one at school, were Lia talks to who I presume is her friend, her ‘‘NAME’’ instead of an actual name. I don’t know if this is due to the reader being able to customize the character later on or if it’s just a simple mistake, so I thought I’d point it out (okay, we will customize the character. Got to that part now, though you may wanna consider giving the character a proper temporary name until we get to customize them)
Grammar is good. No mistakes that I could spot
Now I’m nitpicking, mostly because I can’t find much negative about your story but still wanna give you something… But you’re using a lot of commas, and in certain sentences they work, but in other sentence they really shouldn’t be used.
Take for one example when MC is reading her invite and says ‘‘There are, so many red flags.’’ In short, commas is used to indicate a short break in-between sentences. When adding a comma, try to read the sentence and decide whether or not the pause is fitting.
It happens again when James says ‘‘There is no way in hell that I’m going to lose this case, to Keller.’’ A comma is not needed and a comma shouldn’t break a sentence in half, making it an unfinished sentence.Think of it as using dots
I love how you said ‘‘bAd BoY’’ instead of bad boy. It’s so minor but it makes it seem like the MC has no regards for his bad boy tactics and I love that
Your chapter was at a great length. The plot was introduced well in the first chapter. All in all, I really enjoyed your story from beginning to end!
This will be the worst review you’ve ever gotten, but I couldn’t find anything to comment on. Your story is very unique, the advanced directing is superb and proves that you’ve spent a lot of time on your story. Your characters are diverse, it seems to be a well developed plot, your grammar is great. You deserve much more reads, and that is all I have to say about it
Hey! I hope you’ll review my story!
Title: Rich Girls Cry Too
Author: Ava Josefine
Plot/Summary: Vera’s dream of becoming a famous musician feels closer than ever when a new, big TV-show about her school is being made. But things don’t turn out the way she expects them to.
Episodes: 6 (with more to come )
Thanks in advance,
Hello!! Thank you so much for taking the time to do these reviews.
Story Name : Queen
Author : Steffi
Genre : Drama, Romance
Status : 3 episodes at the moment, more coming soon
Style : Limelight
Instagram : @steffi.episode
Description: All her life, Devina was raised learning the ways of being a proper lady of the nobility. But her life is suddenly disrupted when a royal advisor visits and reveals to her that she is the next monarch of Artesia. WIll she reign? Or will she renounce her claim to the throne? Will she choose love or duty? It’s all up to you!!