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#61

I just finished the first episode… And, wow. I wanted to write a revenge story just like that, but I screwed up badly.


#62

Even if your just promoting your story. I hope you give my first story a try. :heart:

Story Name: The Godmothers’ Heir
Description: A year ago a tragic shooting and two gang members try capturing you. Now a year later it’s your turn to find out why, but how simple is that for two teens still in highschool?

Genre: Action/Adventure
Sub-Genres: Mystery, Thriller, Drama, Romance
Some tags: CC, Choices,Trailblazer, Cliche-Breaker,

Instagram : @lee.lee_26 Link:https://www.instagram.com/lee.lee_26/?hl=en
Leave a follow :wink:

Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6065730015199232


#63

Name: Santa’s Naughty list (CHAPTER 6 IS OUT!!!)
Grammar mistakes: YES! I’m not native English speaker and it would be amazing for me!
Genre: Comedy
Chapters: 6
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5450332879585280
Story Description: MC is a spoiled teen and Santa Claus is a loser who lost Christmas due to his divorce with Mrs. Claus. What will happen when two of the worlds collide? (Parody) (Comedy, CC)
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#64

Hey!
I would love you to take a look at my story. It is my very first experience with Episode writing so any feedback is great!

Title: Teacher or Queen?
Author: Mystique

Extra comment: Only first TWO chapters out!

Thank you!


#65

Do you want me to point out grammar mistakes : yes
TITLE: KILL YOUR DREAMS
AUTHOR: Anna
LINK: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4905142231891968


#66

Tittle: Search for love.
Author Name: Sigma.fr
Intagram: Sigma.fr.writes
Story Description :Your life turns upside down when you try to escape from a toxic situation! Can you find the love you are looking for trying to escape?
Genre: Drama
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5548786201264128


#67

Hello~
Please please check out my story!
It would mean the world to me cry emoji
I would love some feedbacks/criticisms.
Title: Opposite in Harmony
Author: Pheebsnomenal
Genre: Fantasy/Romance/Adventure
Episodes: 4 right now, still going!
Description: Aimie is the princess of all angels and will she sacrifice everything, including her family to stand up for what is right? Or will she stand by her family’s side and never find true love? Her fate will be decided by YOU! <3
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Here’s the link
http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5322669636845568


#68

Story Title: In a Starry Night
Author Name: Fatima Al star
Style: Limelight
Genre: Romance/drama
Episodes: 3 (more coming soon!)
Story Description: Rose goes thorough a lot of difficulties that will lead her to find secrets that were hidden for years! Will she ever find happiness and love? (Choices matter)
Instagram Name: @fatima_stories
Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5756418218131456

Story cover

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Thank you!


#69

Author Name: Miss. Isabella
Story Name: Life goes on (Ink)
Genre: Romance/Drama
How much diversity on a scale of 1 to 10(I love diversity): 3 (more coming soon)
I really appreciate, if you take some time my sotry. :slight_smile:Thanks guys!
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Story link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6654538329489408
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#70

I hope you give it a chance :blue_heart:

Title: DD SHATTERED
Authors: @CeCeWrites.Episode and Jane
Instagram: stories_of_jane
Link: DD SHATTERED


#71

Hi,
I just published my story and I would love it if you would give it a read!

Story Title: In a Starry Night
Author Name: Fatima Al star
Style: Limelight
Genre: Romance/drama
Episodes: 3 (more coming soon!)
Story Description: Rose goes thorough a lot of difficulties that will lead her to find secrets that were hidden for years! Will she ever find happiness and love? (Choices matter)
Instagram Name: @fatima_stories
Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5756418218131456

Story cover

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Enjoy!


#72

Do you want me to point out grammar mistakes (yes/no):
TITLE: Thrill of the Hunt
AUTHOR: Azaria Sin or azariasin
LINK: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6661570308734976


#73


The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: The mermaid’s love

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