Get feedback on your stories, promote

Hey, This is the first time i’m doing something like this.
So If you want honest opinions and feeback on your story, just comment the full details of your story. But preferably not links, as they don’t work for me.

I will try to read 1 or 2 or 3 episodes, but you will have to wait! I will be adding you on my list. So if your not patient enough for this, then you can look for another thread!

If you want me to private message OR comment on this thread. Then include that into your comment, so i know. Also, this thread is for being honest, for example i might tell you something that you can do to improve your story, if you think you won’t like it, then hop to another forum - useful for you.

However, it may take some time, but i will ensure to get to you ASAP!
You can use this thread to promote your stories too, if you’d like! I just thought that people like to other to be genuine and helpful towards their stories.

I’ve also just published my first - revamped story, If you’d read it, it will make me more than happy. I don’t mind feedback given to me!

MY STORY (just in case you want to read/check out.)
Title - This Is Love.
Description - You move to New York for college, the least you expect is to meet a sexy, mysterious stranger. Is he what he seems, or is there more to him?
Genre - Drama.

Link -

NOTE - Episode 1 is only for customising your two main characters!


Thank you! I will start reading you stories soon.
:blush: :wink:

Share this thread with your friends, i would love to read all your beautiful stories!


@priya - The Princess of the light. DONE
@Ash8 - Hollywood spy. DONE
@Nessya - Secrets from hell - pm
@yiota.episode - Dancing on thin ice - ig
@anianju - Master of elements
@artemis37 - Mia
@Roy - Shado
@Ayaaaaaaa - My love from Japan
@ephialtes - You Can’t Escape Your Mind
@julianne7 - Magicka: The Shaper of Destiny
@v.h_episode - Loving a Liar
@mitsuki.writes - Striving For My Happy Ending
@FancyGirlGamer - A New World


Hey thanks for the thread.
I’d love some honest reviews on my story.

Here’s my story description-

Story name: The Princess of Light
Author: Priya
Genre: Fantasy
Episodes: 6 (ongoing)
Genre: LL
Instagram: @priya.episodestorys

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No worries, Your the first one on my list. I will approach you as soon as i can! :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:

Love the cover btw! :slightly_smiling_face:

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Thank you so much.
I’ll start with your story by the end of the day too. :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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Hey! I’d appreciate it if you could give me a review! Also, I’ll try reading your story! :blush:

Title : Hollywood Spy
Author : Magic
Genre : Romance and mystery (mystery comes out later in the story…)
Story style : Limelight
Story Description : A money-driven girl gets a job offer to go undercover as a model and spy on other celebs. Can she keep up with the love, drama, murder, protect her loved ones, and keep her secret?
Episodes : 20, more episodes coming soon
Link :
Cover :

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Of course and thank you! Love the cover :blush:

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I would like to ask you if you can read mine.

Story name: Secrets from Hell
Author: WNVT
Genre: Action
Episodes: 19 (ongoing)
Genre: Ink
Instagram: wnvt.epi

I would love your feedback over a pm, just in case I want more details

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Sure! I’ll add you to my list rn :kissing_heart:

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I am promoting my new story Dancing On Thin Ice.
Discription: Living in the codlest place on earth, your dream always was to become a figure skater. What happens when you meet just the right person to help you achieve your goals, but his son gets you in trouble?

It’s a story with main theme the dream hunting of the MC to become a professional figure skater.
A beautiful love story is slowly unfolding, between two people with hard past, trying to restore their faith in humanity.

I really hope you’ll enjoy the story, if you’re intersted in reading it here’s the link:

You can also find the story by writing the title on the search bar in the app.
Tag me in your screenshots and let me know your thoughts on my ig: yiota.episode

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I would love to read it! :heart:

I would love to read your story :hugs::heart: I m reading now! But where to send the screenshots? :thinking:

And i would love a review :hugs::heart:
Here is my story:
Author: AnjitaD
Title: Master of elements
Genre: Fantasy
Episodes: 3(more coming soon)
Description: Will you and your friends able to save the world from darkness as you uncover secrets back 500 years ago ? (Time choices points system, adventure, fantasy, mystery and action)
Style: Limelight
Link :

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Hello :heart: I’d appreciate it if you read my story
Title: Mia
Author: Artemis
Genre: Romance/Drama
Episodes: 11 (ongoing)

And also can you tell me how to find your story? I search it but I couldn’t find it.

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Moved to Share Feedback since you’re doing story reviews. Make sure to check out our Forum Tutorial for more info about creating topics, and feel free to PM me if you’ve got questions. :wink:

Thanks for the thread!
Here’s mine…

Title: Shado
Author: Roy
Description: After tragedy, Roy returns to civilization a changed women. She begins her crusade, determined to put things right, with the help of her trusted people,waging a one-woman on crime
Instagram : roy_episode
Style: Ink
Chapters: 7 and ongoing


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Title: My Love From Japan
Story Description: While starting a new life in Japan, you made two hot celebrity babes falling for you. Who will win your heart? And how long will your perfect life last? (2LI, LL, Choices matter)
Genre: Romance and Drama
Status: Ongoing with 4 chapters
Style: Limelight

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Title: You Can’t Escape Your Mind

Author: Dayana

Genre: Thriller/Drama

Style: LL

Description: His soul, his body is connected to a young girl whose mind lives in a world of pure darkness. Depression and Anxiety can take you far away from the beauty of life and so can people. Who will save her? And most importantly how?

Episodes: 3

Status: More coming soon!


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Thank you so much for this! I’d love to know your opinion on my story. So many people sugarcoat reviews but I would really appreciate your honest opinion! I have added your story to my list to check out :heart:

  • Magicka: The Shaper of Destiny
  • Instagram: @episodejulianne
  • Description: Iris is a Shaper - a messenger of destiny sent to earth by the Fates. She’s never questioned her role before… Until she meets Thalia, a human with some unusual abilities. LGBTQ, CC, choices matter (three endings).
  • Style: LL
  • Link:

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You cover is absolutely amazing :open_mouth: I love it!

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Thanks, for this thread!

Title: Loving a Liar
Author: Vanessa H.
Genre: Romance/Mystery
Status: Ongoing
Style: LL
Story Description: Angel’s a different person since something had changed. Evil, unkind, and no interest in other people’s feelings. Can love change anything? [Choices Matter; CC]
Published Episodes: 3


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Hi, thank you for doing this! :yellow_heart:
I’d like to have an honest review on my new story below!
You can post your review on this thread.
Thank you! :blush:

Title: Striving For My Happy Ending
Author Name: MitsuKi
IG username: @ js_mits
Genre: Fantasy
Chapter: 3 (Ongoing)
July died suddenly, only to find herself waking up in the world of the ‘Reaching You’ online story! Even worse, as the antagonist who will meet her death! (LL, limited CC)


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