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Hello,
I can’t write at the minute because my macbook charger broke and can’t get a new one until the new year so i thought i’d offer story reviews!

i’ve been a member of the community since 2015 haha

if you want a review leave your story name and link below and i’ll read the first 1-3 chapters :heartpulse:

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Hello! Hope you’re doing fine! :hugs:
If you wanna see or learn more about my story, you can check out my Instagram. :blush:
Here is my story.
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Title: 𝕸𝖞 𝕹𝖊𝖎𝖌𝖍𝖇𝖔𝖗 𝖎𝖘 𝖆 𝕸𝖔𝖇𝖘𝖙𝖊𝖗.
Author: Sonder. :woman_technologist:t2:
Instagram: @sonder.author
Genre: Drama, Romance
Style: Limelight
Story Description: 𝑀𝑒𝑒𝑡 𝑤𝑖𝑡𝘩 𝐿𝑒𝑛𝑘𝑎 𝑅𝑒𝑑𝑠𝑡𝑜𝑛𝑒 𝑎𝑛𝑑 𝑁𝑌 𝑚𝑜𝑏𝑠𝑡𝑒𝑟 𝑁𝑖𝑘𝑙𝑎𝑢𝑠 𝑅𝑒𝑒𝑐𝑒. 𝐿𝑒𝑛𝑘𝑎 𝑖𝑠 𝑎 𝑠𝑡𝑟𝑜𝑛𝑔 𝑤𝑜𝑚𝑎𝑛 𝑤𝑖𝑡𝘩 𝑎 𝑔𝑜𝑜𝑑 𝑏𝑎𝑐𝑘𝑔𝑟𝑜𝑢𝑛𝑑 𝑎𝑛𝑑 𝑁𝑖𝑘𝑙𝑎𝑢𝑠 𝑖𝑠 𝑎 𝘩𝑎𝑟𝑑 𝑚𝑎𝑛 𝑡𝑜 𝑟𝑒𝑎𝑑. 𝑊𝘩𝑒𝑛 𝐿𝑒𝑛𝑘𝑎 𝑟𝑎𝑛 𝑎𝑤𝑎𝑦 𝑓𝑟𝑜𝑚 𝘩𝑒𝑟 𝑂𝑊𝑁 𝑒𝑛𝑔𝑎𝑔𝑒𝑚𝑒𝑛𝑡 𝑝𝑎𝑟𝑡𝑦 𝑡𝘩𝑒𝑦 𝑓𝑖𝑛𝑎𝑙𝑙𝑦 𝑚𝑒𝑒𝑡. 𝐴𝑛𝑑 𝑡𝘩𝑒 𝑚𝑎𝑛 𝑙𝑜𝑠𝑒𝑠 𝘩𝑖𝑚𝑠𝑒𝑙𝑓 𝑖𝑛 𝘩𝑒𝑟 𝑠𝑐𝑒𝑛𝑡. (𝐿𝐿) 𝐶𝘩𝑜𝑖𝑐𝑒𝑠 𝑤𝑖𝑙𝑙 𝑏𝑒 𝑚𝑎𝑡𝑡𝑒𝑟 𝑎𝑛𝑑 𝑡𝘩𝑒𝑟𝑒 𝑤𝑖𝑙𝑙 𝑏𝑒 𝑜𝑛𝑙𝑦 𝑜𝑛𝑒 𝑙𝑜𝑣𝑒 𝑖𝑛𝑡𝑒𝑟𝑒𝑠𝑡. (𝐼 𝑓𝑖𝑛𝑑 𝑠𝑡𝑜𝑟𝑖𝑒𝑠 𝑤𝑖𝑡𝘩 𝑚𝑢𝑙𝑡𝑖𝑝𝑙𝑒 𝑙𝑜𝑣𝑒 𝑖𝑛𝑡𝑒𝑟𝑒𝑠𝑡𝑠 𝑢𝑛𝑟𝑒𝑎𝑙𝑖𝑠𝑡𝑖𝑐.)

𝖳𝗁𝗂𝗌 𝗂𝗌 𝗇𝗈𝗍 𝖺 𝗎𝗌𝗎𝖺𝗅 𝗆𝗈𝖻𝗌𝗍𝖾𝗋 / 𝗆𝖺𝖿𝗂𝖺 / 𝗀𝖺𝗇𝗀𝗌𝗍𝖾𝗋 𝗌𝗍𝗈𝗋𝗒. 𝖳𝗁𝗂𝗌 𝗂𝗌 𝗆𝗈𝗋𝖾 𝗅𝗂𝗄𝖾 𝖺 𝗌𝗍𝗈𝗋𝗒 𝖺𝖻𝗈𝗎𝗍 𝗁𝗈𝗐 𝖼𝖺𝗇 𝗍𝗐𝗈 𝗌𝗍𝗋𝗈𝗇𝗀 𝖼𝗁𝖺𝗋𝖺𝖼𝗍𝖾𝗋𝗌 𝖼𝖺𝗇 𝖿𝖺𝗅𝗅 𝗂𝗇 𝗅𝗈𝗏𝖾 𝖾𝖺𝖼𝗁 𝗈𝗍𝗁𝖾𝗋 𝖺𝗇𝖽 𝗁𝗈𝗐 𝗐𝗈𝗋𝗄𝗌 𝗍𝗁𝖾𝗂𝗋 𝗋𝖾𝗅𝖺𝗍𝗂𝗈𝗇𝗌𝗁𝗂𝗉.

𝗖𝗵𝗼𝗶𝗰𝗲𝘀 𝘄𝗶𝗹𝗹 𝗯𝗲 𝗺𝗮𝘁𝘁𝗲𝗿 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝘁𝗵𝗲𝗿𝗲 𝗶𝘀 𝗮 𝗽𝗼𝗶𝗻𝘁 𝘀𝘆𝘀𝘁𝗲𝗺 𝘄𝗵𝗶𝗰𝗵 𝘄𝗶𝗹𝗹 𝗰𝗵𝗮𝗻𝗴𝗲 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗽𝗮𝘁𝗵 𝘆𝗼𝘂’𝗹𝗹 𝘄𝗮𝗹𝗸.

Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4728753642864640

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Hey, thank you for doing this, :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: I’d love an honest review :heart:

Title: Sealed with a Kiss
Genre: Drama, Romance, Mystery
Episodes: 3 (more coming soon)
Description: Working as a criminal lawyer, Aria is more than happy with her normal life. What‘ll happen when she gets thrown into a world full of glitz and glamour overnight?
Instagram: @tsukino.creates
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Link:

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The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: Reveal: Sealed with a Kiss

Hey Lovely
Thanks for this❤️
Hope you start with ur story soon :heart:

Title: The unseen diaries
By: Mansha
Instagram: mansha.writes
Genre: action / Thriller / comedy / fantasy
Episodes: 4
Style: limelight
Description: Creatures of unspeakable unseen horror lurk beneath the town Lakeville as a teenage girl Kate Devon fights them. Love and dangers are part of this town
Cc available, 2 LI
COVER:

LINK:

Hello @nylahlovesu1
I’d love to have u review my story. Here are the details :heart:

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5273039194488832

Hi :relaxed:

I would love to get a review!
Here are a few details about my stroy:

Title : Craving For The Risk
Genre : Romance (with a lot of drama)
Style : Limelight
MC : Female

Description : The second Ruby and Carter’s worlds colliede he turnes her life up side down… Could he be the risk she craves for? Or will he be her downfall?

Author : MyEpisodees
Instagram : myepisodees

Includes :
CC (MC + family and LI)
Point system

If anyone could take the time to read mine I would absolutely appreciate it!

Story: The Unwanted
Genre: Mystery
Insta: @evilyn.writes
Style: Ink

Description:
15 years since we’ve been deemed useless and deported to Earth. Now, we reunite to solve the supernatural murders and as past becomes present, our mistakes become fatal…

Advanced directing/ overlays etc.

Link: https://episodeinteractive.com/s/i/5431076573085696

Thanks :hugs:

Thank you, for doing this, beautiful. Hope you enjoy reading my story.

Hi
I’ve read the first 3 episodes of your story and I really enjoyed it! It’s well written and seems like a good plot!
Only thing i would change is the intro maybe just write ‘choices matter’ you don’t need to go into detail also if you don’t plan on including art scenes i’d think about adding customisations or limited customisation

Hi, so sweet of you! Here is my story, I know there is a glitch in the second or third episode, I am going to fix it before 2021. :upside_down_face:

Reveal: He - soon She
Author: @emma.writes.episode
Style: Limelight
Chapters: 6
Description: When your boyfriend delivers you shocking news, you question everything you once knew. With your career in jeopardy, you realize that the true bombshell hadn’t been revealed.


Hi, I would really appreciate a review from you! :smiley:

My author name is Anyi E., and my story would be called The Gifted. :heartpulse:

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4662543543107584
(:fire:if the link doesn’t work for you, search by “The Gifted Drama”)

Thanks for offering, lovely! :two_hearts:

Instagram: @epi.sam.writes

Title: The Art of Criminal Profiling

Genre: Mystery

Style: Limelight

Chapters: 6 and more coming soon

Description:
Can Valentina, a successful FBI agent, decode a series of bone chilling mysteries before it’s too late? If not, she may just lose everything and everyone she cares about.

Customization:
Full customization

Choices:
There are numerous point systems with choices that matter.

Mini games and sound are incorporated into the story.

Hope you enjoy :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: The Art of Criminal Profiling

Thanks for the thread and would love a review!
Here’s mine:


Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6336400499867648
IG: @miziwhoami for sneaks/updates/ other projects

Interested.
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This is so nice of you! I’d love a review :relaxed:

My story is called strike a chord, and here’s the information and link :relaxed:

Story title: strike a chord

Author: Eljen
Instagram: Eljen_episode

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5194735144861696

Hello! Thank you for reading! I’m glad that you like it! :blob_hearts: :blob_hearts:
There is no CC, because I use body parts as overlays, and there are also Gossipporium tabloids. It’s a gossip magazine, and I use the photos of the characters in its news. (The first is shown in chapter 4.)
About explanation, sometimes I can extend the explanations. :sweat_smile: :sweat_smile: thanks for the warning! :hugs: :hugs:

I am still very new to this
Title :Head Held High
Author : Milly
Genre : Drama
Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6017598494539776

Thank you for this thread!
Please let me know if you see any errors, what you though and if you would continue to read it if you were a “normal” reader who found the story (obviously you don’t have to) I just want to see if my first 3 chapters are interesting enough because compared to the next few chapters I’m not sure :sweat_smile:

Story name:

High on Love and Formaldehyde

AUTHOR: Liz & Mar

GENRE: Romance/Drama

Chapters So Far: 15

STYLE: Limelight

IG: @ liz_mar.episode

DESCRIPTION: Working at a morgue is what Eliana loves but when her life gets darker than her job, she’ll need all the support she can get. Who’ll bring back the light in the dark?

CC, LL, Art

MATURE CONTENT

**Song recommendations to play while reading certain scenes are shown throughout the story **

Story Link

Personal link including playlist

Yesss review (if u have time)

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:blob_hearts: Title : Disingenuous
:blob_hearts: Genre: Comedy, Mystery, Drama
:blob_hearts: Author: ~Shania~
:blob_hearts:Chapters: 18 (ongoing)
:blob_hearts: Description: A crime you didn’t commit? Turns out rehab isn’t the answer. A
corrupt boarding school? Deadly rumors and dark scandals. Welcome to Furgwood, I guarantee you won’t enjoy your stay
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:blob_hearts: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6332916007895040]

Art By Vasira

Thanks for this thread! I would really love to get a review from you if you have the time!
Title: The Precarious Betrayal
Ig: __queen_episode
Genre: Romance
Author: Queen Jay
Style: Limelight
Chapter: 14 (on going)
Description: Queen Robinson thought that her life was falling apart. Trust was broken and it may be hard to build back. Will she be able to love another?A love story turned bitter. 2 LI CC


Link to The Precarious Betrayal