Give a feedback on my story, guys!


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Any feedback, positive or negative, is appreciated. I’m a new author!
I have revised my story over and over and over again until I became mad :stuck_out_tongue: and I can’t really see any mistakes at this moment :slight_smile:
Thank you so much! You are awesome!



Moved to Share Feedback since you’re looking for feedback on the story. If you have questions about anything, feel free to PM me and make sure to check out our Forum Tutorial for more info about where to correctly create topics. :wink:


Thank you very much! I really had some trouble finding a good way to promote my story!
Thank you again!