Give me all of your opinions asap

So I am making this new simple story, mysterious, romantic. It’s about a known girl who moved to a new school because she believes she might find the murderer who killed her mom there, but when she gets there things start to get complicated. She doesn’t trust anyone easily, as she enjoys her life as her father told her to, she gets distracted by parties, people trying to be her friend, and of course love. Get this, she isn’t the new student. One of her roommates is hiding a secret too. The known girl suffers from anxiety and panic attacks, but no one knows. I need your opinion :slight_smile:

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pop off sis i would read that

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It’s interesting! Definitely seems like a cool mystery plot for sure
A little confused how a grown person would murder then be at a school unless it was a teacher or principle
If you got that link I’ll be head over heels for a good mystery plot like that !

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thats the mystery, it has a twist in the ending.

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Wow, I’d definitely read this!
I really like the idea so far! It seems unique!

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Hun, this looks so good, I would def read it :black_heart:

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