Give me your stories and i will review them!

currently, i’m very bored sooo…
give me your stories and i will tell u what i think, maybe i can help you improve? :stuck_out_tongue:


Do you offer the same for unpublished stories?

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My story is: Ring Of Life
I know some mistakes of directing, I am still working on becoming better at it. But could you do it about the plot?

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Thank you for this!
I revamped the first three chapters of my story, so I can use some feedback! :star_struck:

Information about my story
Story title: Forbidden Love
Name author (so me): Lili Star
Genre: Romance and comedy
Story style: INK
Story caption: Princess Amanda never thought that she would have feelings for a girl, which is forbidden. Until she met Vanessa, the gorgeous sister of prince Roberto who she has to marry.
Episodes: 11, but more are coming soon!
Important information: This is my first story, so it is not the best, but you can still enjoy it. There is no CC and not many choices.
Here is the link:

My Instagram: @lili_on_episode
If you follow me, I will follow back :two_hearts:

Small cover:

Large cover:*

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Title: Dance Party
Author: Karlon Artis
Genre: Drama
Description: Akira Arakaki has been a professional dancer for several years, but a few subpar dance performances make him lose confidence in his talent. Can he restore his confidence?

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yes of course!

Well, I won’t say no to a free read :rofl:
Title: Josephine (LL)
Author: Matilda
Genre: Romance
Episodes: 16 (more coming)
Description: Josephine catches her fiance in an affair. Will she seek comfort in an unlikely lover or find happiness in the one right before her? Limited CC 2LI

The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: Josephine (LL)

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Hey, here’s my story:
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The Gifted
Genre: Fantasy/Romance
Author: Anyi E. / @episode.anyi.e
Style: Limelight
Length: 3 chapters out (more episodes coming soon)
Story description:
Being gifted or not decides whether you live a sheltered life or struggle getting from one day to another. What happens when these worlds are mixed up? (Choices/4LI/LGBT+/limited CC)


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i’m on it! should i private message you after reading your story?

Yes, I would love to!

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Thank you, here’s mine :blush:

Title: Blackbird
Author: Licorice
Genre: Action
Summary: Being her personal assistant isn’t the only thing Chase’s new boss has in mind for him. Secrets of the underworld begin to unveil, and not everything is exactly as it seems. (Male & female MC, point system, impactful choices)
Style: Limelight
Episodes: 5 (more coming soon)

Instagram: @licorice.ep

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Thanks for the thread!
Here’s mine…

Title: Shado
Author: Roy
Description: After tragedy, Roy returns to civilization a changed women. She begins her crusade, determined to put things right, with the help of her trusted people,waging a one-woman on crime
Instagram : roy_episode
Style: Ink
Chapters: 7 and ongoing


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Hey thank you for creating this thread.:slight_smile:
I would love to Get a review.:blush:
Here’s the details to my story in case you want to check it out.

Author: S_Unique

Title: The Four Horsemen

Genre: Fantasy

Style: Ink

Description: 4 Sins. 4 Angels fell. 4 Horsemen rose. A curse was casted. And the battle of good vs evil is about to begin. CC/ Choices matter



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Hey, thank you for doing this😊
If you are interested then there is my story:
Title: Craving chaos
Genre: Drama, Romance
Style: LL
Description: Looking into his eyes again 3 years later is hard enough. But knowing that he belongs to someone else now? Even harder. LL, CC

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I would love that, here’s mine, thanks!

Hey, I’d love to get your honest review :smiling_face_with_three_hearts::heart:
So here’s my story:
Title: Reality behind Glasses
Genre: Drama, Romance
Episodes: 5 (more coming soon)
Description: Layla returns back home to reunite with her childhood friends - disguised as a guy! But on her first day in school, she’s exposed by one of her classmates! [LL,CC, Art,Choices M]
Style: Limelight


Hello! If you’re interested, here is my story:)

Title: The Green Line
Episodes: 8
Genre: Mystery/ Romance
Description: Investigate with a brooding billionaire to find your long-lost twin who has cheated many powerful and dangerous people…people who might just come after you instead. CC* Romance*

Hey there! If you’re interested in Greek mythology, then here is the perfect story for you… :slight_smile: :heart:

Name: The Curse of the Island (COMPLETE)
Genre: Fantasy/Romance
Style: Limelight
Plot: Based off of the Greek myth - Calypso lives a curse, bound to heartbreak on an island named Ogygia. Will she find the one to set her free?

What’s special: Full CC, Greek mythology characters, lots of choices, advanced directing, complete, art scenes

I’d be really grateful if anyone checks it out and gives me some feedback! Thank you for this thread x


Here’s my story! Let me know what you think of it! :blush:

Title: A New World
Author: Darcy
Description: Amanda had rough times in her life due to her anxiety and depression. She tries to find out who she really is and free herself from the negativity with a little help from a friend.
Genre: Adventure
Chapters: 3 (more are coming soon)
Instagram: @darcy.nudi_episode


Message me your review feedback in private message.

Title: A Prince’s Curse
By: lanafrazer_episode
Instagram: lanafrazer.episode
Genre: Fantasy
Episodes: 3
Style: Limelight
Description: Cursed for eternity, shocked by his betrothed, he will not stop until he finds a solution to end his curse. What will become of his betrothed? Will he find a cure or love?