This is for episode to please give chance to new authors
There are a lot of new and young authors. who have more amazing plots than what episode’s popular authors are publishing All they need is a chance which they do not get here
First a new author full of hopes comes to this stage and give their best here in last what they always get no views and discouragement which laids them to stop writing please give a chance to them read their story who knows there stories have better plots than all these stories with zero plot still are in trending and having 3 4 million views I am not jealous but this is not fair I don’t understand a story with no plot still in trending with more than 60 episodes and a complete story with an amazing and unqiue plot with 100k or more views this is not fair
example… of those 2 3 million views stories
A school girl than there is Mr popular and bad boy A jealous queen and a teacher crush with she always get an awkward moment than fall in love with Mr popular and the bad boy she gets pregnant by Mr popular+bad boy than kidnapped by a gangster than fall in love with him again and don’t know how but she gets a miscarriage she is sad in last 3 men 1 girl groom choosing time Mr popular, teacher crush and the gangster The End 45 episode normal plot and guess what 40 million views
example of an amazing plot
Meet the adams an amazing and the most funniest story which really made me laugh amazing short ending 12 episodes and guess what 300k views which is wrong
I’m also one of those new authors who have amazing plot just all they need is a chance yesterday I published my story with a different plot i got 2 views by my friends this is hurting trust me the tickets you will lose in my story are worth it
If you agree this topic give a support
I didn’t mean to hurt anyone but this is wrong
just published a story.
Please read It and tell my what you think.
- Name : JACKPOT
- Genre : Mystery,Action,Romantic
- Description : Your life changes when you inherit the number one casino from your gradpnfather.Will you save a casino or will you givi it to your brother. (CC) (Choice matters) Two endings.
Episode 4 coming out very soom.
I think almost every person on this forum helped me with this story.Thank you for that.(At the end of epsode 2 you will see credits,find your name there.
I would love to give it a review and I think you should also try my story it’s perfect for summer trust me
Name Summer fling( I Hate Love Stories) try it
Hey I have already readed 1 episode of your story
Now I’m going to give you a honest review storyline is unique I like the plot but there are some problem in the story that need to be fix right away let me give you a advise if you are going to write a story for first time you should ask for a partner’s help who is better in directing and grammars now back to review
There were a lot of coma’ s without although they needed to be
There were Grammar mistakes that can ruin your whole story
Directing was wrong the character weren’t on there correct places and were entering from wrong side zones were a little bit wrong transition weren’t in there correct timing animations were not fitting with the dialogs and a lot other mistakes it’s your first time so it’s normal and there weren’t any choices in first episode and I think at least you should have add 2 choices in first episode that’s all for 1 episode
I’m not discouraging you but honest review are must I’m trying to help you
Oh yes,episode 1 is bad.I know but every other pisode is A LOT better.That was my first ever episode on web so I used only basic directing.Episode 2 and 3 are a lot better with directing,Idk about grammar,I need I do something about It.
I can help you with directing and grammar if you want and try to fix episode 1 because 1 episode is the first impression
If you need any help in directing or in grammar just dm me on Instagram
I have made Chapter 1 in my stroy Im still editing it but tell me what you think
Of course I’m gald you said
I dont know how it will come out on your becuase Im editing it so I dont know if it shows you my edits
Hey Diana so I have finished episode one and the story looks good and I like those plots which have mysteries now back to honest review
First of all BACKGROUNDS
In starting there is sea background which is not looking good because it’s blur and the splashes were good but they should be in starting when we start the story
Characters: the main character really looks good but her father is not fine in starting he was young but after she turns 16 her father should be a little old as now he looks like her brother
Directing: there were little mistakes in directing like the nurse scene was a bit confusing it was so fast I couldn’t understand and the necklace scene should be like only focus on the necklace there was need to show your man character or her father as I think the main character could have a better introduction like she is sleeping and her father comes to wakeup her but she is not in bed when her father tries to find her she is at balcony than we can see who is she slowly and the scenes after the nurse one should be after 16 years than the background of the new York city
So these were the mistakes I have found and if you want any help in directing or coding and if you like i can make splashes and some backgrounds for your story just dm me on my Instagram account Secretauthor.episode
I will take this into consideration thank you! but the nurse scene i really dont know how to change it idk
Hello @Secretauthor.episode can you tell me what you think about my story, please.
Story title: Rewinded life.
Author name: Lia Lopez.
My instagram: lia_lopez_episode
What would you do if a galactic being gives you the power to go back and change situations that escapes from your hands?
Genre: Fantasy, comedy, romance, life.
Episodes: 6 (Ongoing - Working on chapter 7.)