Give your feedback on my story please!

Hi! My name is Ray and I am recently working on my second story. I was hoping if anyone would be able to read my first chapter and give me their feedback? I would really appreciate it.
Story Title: Dear Diary LL
Author: RayRay
Genre: Thriller
Style: LimeLight
Description: The high school gossip queen had dirt on everyone. She kept all of their secrets in a diary. It’s how she basically controlled people. Until one night she was found DEAD.

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