Give your opinion on my story description :)

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#1

Hi,
Could you tell me what you think about my story description? Would it make you want to read my story? Feel free to give suggestions, too! :blush:

It was supposed to be a great summer. But things took an unexpected turn when one of your best friend was found dead, and you have the feeling that maybe it wasn’t an accident


#2

You might want to replace the word “the” in “the feeling” with the word “a” so it’s “a feeling.”
Other than that, it seems well written. I think I would read it. :slight_smile:

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#3

I will! Thank you :blush:

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#6

Sounds interesting!

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#7

Thank you!

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#9

I’d be interested in reading! :two_hearts:

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#10

Like it, it would catch my eye.

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