Hi,
Could you tell me what you think about my story description? Would it make you want to read my story? Feel free to give suggestions, too!
It was supposed to be a great summer. But things took an unexpected turn when one of your best friend was found dead, and you have the feeling that maybe it wasnât an accidentâŠ
You might want to replace the word âtheâ in âthe feelingâ with the word âaâ so itâs âa feeling.â
Other than that, it seems well written. I think I would read it.