Give your opinion on my story description :)

Hi,
Could you tell me what you think about my story description? Would it make you want to read my story? Feel free to give suggestions, too! :blush:

It was supposed to be a great summer. But things took an unexpected turn when one of your best friend was found dead, and you have the feeling that maybe it wasn’t an accident…

You might want to replace the word “the” in “the feeling” with the word “a” so it’s “a feeling.”
Other than that, it seems well written. I think I would read it. :slight_smile:

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I will! Thank you :blush:

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Sounds interesting!

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Thank you!

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I’d be interested in reading! :two_hearts:

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Like it, it would catch my eye.

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