Our Review(s) for the story A Christmas in Paris by @secrets.epi 
Nessya's Review
Overall:
I like the use of zooms. They gave the impression of the rush to settle everything in two weeks like we were in Ariana’s shoes.
It was a funny twist, the mix of Paris in France with Paris in Texas.
The whole friendly atmosphere and the maturity with which Mason and Ariana handled their first encounter is well done. Even when it was for the sake of winning the competition.
All these, while still keeping the rivalry. 
Some things I noticed:
When Leana starts to speak, it may be better to let the zoom finish before she does, as the speechbubble skidded in front of the two characters.
In that same scene, Leana stays at the end of talk_apathetic. And as I am slightly faster reading, my MC was still doing talk_shrug when Leana started talking.
In episode two, at the reception, the documents are in the layer above the MC.
In the over-the-shoulder scene, the MC is bigger than she should since she is standing farther away from the screen.
Loose means not tight is often confused with Lose that means to be defeated.
Thank you to @Nessya for the review 