Gracie's Walk-In Reviews!

Hello! My name is Gracie, I previously had a review thread but I wanted to make a new thread for reviews!


  1. This thread is called walk-in reviews, so just come in with your story’s information and link, then I’ll read it!
  2. I’ll try and read at least one chapter, the maximum is three.
  3. If I see any issues or backgrounds needed, I’ll pm you because I can provide you with the help you need!
  4. Be patient for your review, it takes a while!

Come on in and walk in with your stories!


Hey @epi.alyssaa ! I would like a review of my story! Hope you will like it :heart:

Story title : Sandy and her Quadruplets
Author : R.J.
Genre : Comedy
Description : How can she survive with noisy and disobedient quadruplets? Will she finally find the father of her sons ? Here’s the crazy life of Sandy and her quadruplets!
Link :

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Hey there! Would love a review from you :blue_heart:

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Okey dokey, send in your story information :heart:

Thanks you!!

Author: TheBigMystery
Title: Fantastical: Regnum Fortes
Genre: Fantasy / Action / Thriller / Romance
About: You’re a set of twins which were suddenly zapped into a realm you never even knew about. What now?
What to expect:

  • This story uses a point system! (Choices actually matter.)
  • This story has a wide variety of Love Interests! Even options for the LGBT community!
  • Some pretty rad effects! (50+ overlays and backgrounds were used!)
  • Fighting scenes!
  • Plot twists you never saw coming!
  • Diverse characters!
  • Text effects!
  • + Many more features!

Episodes: 3 (on-going)
Instagram: @thebigmystery.episode

Ah this is awesome! I would love it if you reviewed my story! Here’s the info!
Title: Bye Bye Bad Boy
Author: Katpphic
Genre: Drama (with some comedy and mystery mixed in)
Style: Limelight
Description: How did you go from a nobody to the prom queen to an accidental murderer? Well, it involves revenge schemes, makeovers, fake dating, real falling in love, and one really bad boy.

Story: Fantastical: Falling From Grace
Author: Episode Royalty

Hey, @epi.alyssaa! Thank you for creating this thread! I’d love a review for my story. Here are my story details:

Title: Fantastical: Silhouettes
Author: aprilish
Genre: Fantasy/Romance
Style: Ink
Blurb: Arion’s ready to risk it all to make her dreams come true. Leslie sees him every day, yet fails to recognize who he is. Watch them fall in love…without ever meeting each other.
Link: 1 1
My Instagram: @aprilish.episode

Thank you so much! Looking forward to hearing your feedback! :slightly_smiling_face::two_hearts:

Hi @epi.alyssaa!! Please read & review @S.Dsana and I’s newly published story, when you get time! :blush:

Story title: Quiet Confidence
Author’s Name: Winter05 with S.Dsana
Genre: Drama
Story style: INK
Description of the story: People don’t talk to you, but not because of your status. What will happen when a billionaire sets his eyes on you to take you to the top?
Number of episodes: 3 [ONGOING]
Instagrams: @winter05.episode with @princesssana_sa

We hope you enjoy it!! :heart:

~ Winter :snowflake:

Hey, I would like review of my story
Title—> Choose!!!
Author —>@ya
Genra —>adventure
Description —> you always wanted a chance!! Ting-ding!!! You get one , but will you succeed or face defeat???
Link —>

Hope you like it :slightly_smiling_face:

Hi, @epi.alyssaa!

Thank you very much for creating this thread, this is very kind of you! Constructive criticism is exactly what I am looking for!

If you are interested in reading a story with several mini-games and where CHOICES REALLY MATTER then, please, give my story a try. It has 4 different endings and it is really animated! All the backgrounds are custom and there is a special art scene as well. I promise, the plot will also keep you hooked :blush:

Here is the video trailer I made so that you can get a better idea what the story is about:

My story details:

Name of story: Fantastical: Black Shadow
Author: Alex Af
Genre: Fantasy
Episodes: 3 (Since it’s a contest entry I would as you to kindly review 3 episodes so that it doesn’t affect my reader retention. Please, let me know if that’s ok with you)
Summary of story: Having women on board is considered bad luck? Well, as the most wanted pirate captain, you’ll certainly bring the worst luck to anyone who dares cross your path. CC, choices matter
Link to story:

Title: Cupid’s Arrow: Love Gone Wrong
Author: GirlLykAnn
Genre: Romance, Drama and Fantasy
Style: Ink
Description: Your love life is in the hands of Cupid, are you doomed?


Hi, I would love to get a review of my story!

An accident has Jennifer torn from the world. Her loved ones are now left to learn how to live without her.

Hi Gracie! Here’s my story info:

Title: Cruelty of Ice
Author Name: Miranda Lynn
Style: Ink
Genre: Drama
Description: Lies, envy, betrayal, love and drama… Savannah is the new girl at Sierra High, but what happens when she meets an old enemy? You decide!
Episodes: 6, fully released, but I’m working on 2-9 right now (7-9 are unreleased)



Thank you for starting this thread! Whenever you get a chance, I would love a review. :slight_smile:

Here is my story

Title: The Essentia Chronicles
Author: Tldax913
Style: Ink
Genre: fantasy
Description: Kadence is a powerful essence with a troubled past. Will she be able to embrace her power in time to save her realm or will darkness consume her?
Link: HTTP://
Thank you :slightly_smiling_face:


Hey, I’d love to get a review!
Title: Over Before You Know It
Author: Lizard
Description: You and your best friend make a suicide pact to go to the Grand Canyon and end it all together. Will you both really do it? Or will it be over before you know it?
My instagram: @lizard.episode

Name: The Ember Moon Pack
Description: You’re an average highschool girl. What’ll happen to your life when you get kidnapped by a pack of Hybrids that claim that you are their sacred Queen? CC, ChoicesMatter, 5Endings
Chapters: technically 3 bc ch 2 is customization
Genre: Fantasy
Style: Limelight
Instagram: emberpackepisode :smile::heartbeat:

Hey! Thank you for this thread!


Title: Fantastical: Flora
Author: Mina
In-app description: In a world where magic is banned, Flora finds herself sacrificing everything to help a group of rebels to overthrow a ruthless and tyrannical king.
Full summary: Flora has lived in the palace her whole life, working as a handmaiden for the princess. The only thing she knows about the world beyond the city gates is that it is beautiful - and dangerous. For a hundred years, magic folk have been ostracised and killed by laws enforced by the cruel king and his ancestors, and people are starting to fight back. When an opportunity arises for Flora to leave the city for the first time, she is immediately drawn into the battle for justice and equality, and discovers the truth about her estranged father while fighting for her life.

Hey! I`d love to get a review!

Story : Let the demon inside
Gender: Supernatural romance
Description: You have to move back to Dimwood because of your brother. What will you find there? Love, death or supernatural friends?

Thank you so much Gracie! :slight_smile:
Title: Revival
Author: Grace S
Genre: Action
Episodes: 10
Style: Ink