This is what I have so far, but I know it’s not 100% gramatically correct.
Any suggestions on grammar, reordering or spelling are appreciated 
We are at Birgate Lake in Shortspring where last night a girl’s body was found.
Local police rule out suicide as cause of death.
Especially as foreign presence has been noticed in the past few days.
The victim is known to be a local high school student.
She was reported missing by her mother just two days ago.
The body was found by a runner who wishes to stay anonymous.
Further investigation details are not open to the public yet.
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We are at Birgate Lake in Shortspring where last night a girl’s body was found.
Local police ruled suicide as cause of death.
Foreign presence has been noticed in the past few days.
The girl was known to be a local high school student.
She was reported missing by her mother just two days ago.
The body was found by a runner, who wishes to stay anonymous.
Further investigation details are not open to the public yet.
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Edit!!!:
Tonight/today we are at Birgate Lake in Shortspring where a high school student’s body was found.
After deep investigating the police have ruled out suicide as cause of death.
Just two days ago the victim was filed missing by her mother.
The body was found by a runner who wishes to stay completely anonymous at this time.
Further investigation details are net yet open to the public.
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