Hey, hey! It’s me again, wanting to fix some writing and grammar. If you have a story in the works and would love a second opinion on your dialogue, narration, etc., I’m your gal! I look for misspelling, general grammar mistakes, and ways to make sentences flow easier.
If you want my help, just reply here and then shoot me a PM with your story! Thanks!
EDIT: If you saw a weird edit on here that made no sense, it’s because I edited the wrong post. I blame the fact that I’m awake at 5 AM.
Please arrest me, grammar police in general I think my grammar is pretty good, but I’d love to make it perfect! Here’s my story:
Magicka: The Shaper of Destiny
Instagram: @episodejulianne
Description: Iris is a Shaper - a messenger of destiny sent to earth by the Fates. She’s never questioned her role before… Until she meets Thalia, a human with some unusual abilities. LGBTQ, CC, choices matter (three endings).
Omg hahaha what a coincidence! No pressure to reread if you don’t feel like it I’m just so shocked people are actually reading my story without me having to beg them to read it I hope you enjoyed it!
Hello Grammar Police I nEeD yOuR hElP, I wAnT tO rEpOrT fILe aGaInSt grammar. Author: AnjitaD Title: Magicka : Master of elements Genre: Fantasy Episodes: 3(more coming soon Description: Will you and your friends able to save the world from darkness as you uncover secrets back 500 years ago ? ( MC: F, time choices points system, adventure, fantasy, mystery and action ) Style: Limelight
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5576198820528128