Hey guys!

This thread is for you guys to get some constructive criticism on your episode stories, to make it better and more enjoyable to read.


  • Every story that we review will have CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISMS and HELPFUL TIPS to maybe improve the story.
  • I’m honest and we won’t around stealing others’ reviews on your story. I will be ACTUALLY reading it and then, later on, criticise it.
  • This is a review thread- I’m not sure how you’d start drama anyway but just to be clear- DRAMA IS NOT PERMITTED
  • The chapters you’re asking me to review must be up at the time you request- otherwise, they’ll be turned down.


Book title ;
Genre ;
Number of chapters you want reviewed ;
Description ;
Author ;
Style ;
Link ;
Story Cover ;


  • The minimum number of chapters I will review is 3 while the maximum is 7
  • When I say style - I mean limelight or ink
  • All chapters you’re asking me to review must be published on the episode app
    *once you have requested, reviews will take typically 3 days as I’m currently on break for the next week but after I’ve got school and exams

Happy requesting!

waiting list ;

note! - All reviews will be on my drive- your request will be replied to once I have added it

My Drive


Book title ; Dirty Little Secret
Genre ; Drama
Number of chapters you want reviewed; 5
Description: Briella Hart, a native Californian, is the new girl in town. She finds herself in detention after crossing paths with hall monitor, Grayson Sanders. It’s time for payback!
Author ; Anongirl
Style : Ink.
**Link ;**http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5833300720615424
Story Cover ;image

Book title ; I made the devil cry
Genre ; Fantasy
Number of chapters you want reviewed ; 3
Description ; You’re a soldier. Are you able to save your kingdom from darkness and run away from your fate? Choices matter.
Author ; Šebule
Style ; LL
Link ;

Sorry, but I have terrible data connection, my cover won’t load, but I will try it in a while. Thank you!

Title: Back to back
Author: Hamnah.episode
Style: Limelight
Genre: Action/Romance
Amount of chapters you want reviewed: 3 but i don’t really mind.
Description: The mask. Who is she? Will you decide to find out, will you choose to let her go? You’re the best spy for your Dads agency. But along comes Jay. He stole your spot. You, his heart.
Thank’s so much xx

Hey there, I would love to take the possiblity to get a review about more than 3 chapters. I would really appreciate feedback - especially about any directing errors or, grammar/spelling mistakes you may notice. I bought a program to check up on my English Grammar/Spelling and also Punctuation, but I am still insecure… Maybe you could tell me the sentences I have to check again then :slight_smile:

My details:
My Story:
Author: May Laugh
Title: Trouble Twins
Instagram: maylaugh_episode
Genre: Adventure
Episodes : 8 (going on) - I would love to get a review about 7 episodes.
Style: Ink
Always standing up for each other through thick and thin, that is what these twins are all about. But can they really master every chaos together?
Link: [http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5334870588784640 ]

Small Cover:

Large COVER:

I would love a review

Title: The Star Necklace

Author: Mayah

Style: ink

Genere: Drama

Description: you are the most rich girl in your country in addition you’re famous but what happens when the Star Necklace uncovers your true identity

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6248660515487744

Episodes want to be reviewed: 7


Book title ; Adventurous: Project Humanity
Genre ; Adventure
Number of chapters you want reviewed ; 3
Description ; In a world without sadness, your father starts a little project. What happens when you take part in it? Will you find your place in a world with new possibilities, new feelings?
Author ; Dreamer
Style ; LL
Link ; http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5815192505614336
Story Cover ;

Title: Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane
Genre: Mystery, Romance, Comedy (Thriller)
Number to review: However many you would like to review until you get bored! :grin:
Summary: It’s a race against time as you and your friends try to escape the mysterious sleepover that you were invited to…
Author: Marshmallow O.
Style: Limelight
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6250660385652736


Book title ; Capture the Moment
Genre ; Comedy
Number of chapters you want reviewed ; 6
Description ; Takoda is a photographer who inspires to become freelance and expand his portfolio. Can he snapshot his way to success?
Author ; Karlon Artis
Style ; Limelight
Link ; http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5666941859397632
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Book title ; My Kalona
Genre ; Fantasy
Number of chapters you want reviewed ; 5 minimum (more if you are able)
Description ; Naomi desperately tries to bond with her estranged father, but becomes the prisoner of a Native-American curse that threatens all. Will her choices lead to freedom or failure?
Author ; Ray Edwin (pen name)
Style ; LL/SL
Link ; http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4559018983227392
Story Cover ;

NOTES; Chapter length will depend on choices through-out the game: character loss or gains, scene unlocks or locks, multiple paths etc…

This is mine -
Book title ; Stay
Genre ; Drama
Number of chapters you want reviewed ; As many as you’d like :joy: Obviously 7 would be fab but I totally understand if you’re busy or my story isn’t your thing.
Description ;
Trying to move on & worried about never forgetting. Can they accept what happened & carry on living or will it always be there to haunt them? Time to decide if it’s right to stay.
Author ; Kiki
Style ; Ink
Link ; https://www.episodeinteractive.com/s/5945673672884224
Story Cover ;


could you close this thread please? It’s too much stress

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