Your story looks very cool, I’ll check it out! I’ll be improving the animations on Planet X, everyone brought that up in their feedback which is good to hear so I can fix it. Thanks!
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I came back for the rest
Miles is such a gentleman 
And MC’s father?
Episodes 2,3 and 4
Some speechbubble in front of characters faces when they are travelling to Earth
Characters scale down when leaving the scene, you will find explanations here https://www.dara-amarie.com/spot-direction
This BG has a Builtin overlay use
EXT. OUTDOOR STREET OL - DAY with EXT. OUTDOOR STREET OL - DAY at layer 0
&ROWAN spot 1.28 -100 0 in zone 1 at layer 2
Also I feel she was a little to big in this scene.
On the roof top, the MC came from one side and Miles from the other and they walked over each, it was a little strange.
One last suggestion, change Mom’s and Adelina’s outfit to represent the passing days better
Basically how to become an Outlaw 101 
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More great feedback! I definitely have some kinks to work out in the directing, thank you.
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Happy to help 
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For anyone interested, I just released episode 5 of Planet X! That’s all for now, hopefully we can get some more participation on this thread.
That’s a great idea! Unfortunately I have to work on my own story right now but I’ll check out some stories posted here and then post mine. 
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I still have two episodes to read 4 and 5
I liked how protective the sisters were about each other. it was nice to have the information about the hotlines oral alternatives.
I saw some issues, but I am posting about tomorow