Happy to read and give feedback on your stories/character design!

[StormWolf]

My story
Title: The AvenTeens
Author: stormwolf
Style: Limelight
Genre: comedy/action
Read, review,both: Both
Chapters: 3 (not out yet, wanted review before !)
Description: You’ve just recently learned that you have to share your room with two alien allies as well as training to be the next superhero of your planet to save the earth. CC*
Instagram: stormwolf.epi
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5334761423110144
** I don’t mind you messaging me a review or writing it here or doing so on instagram**
Cover:

[IChooseMyStory]

Awesome! I had a feeling some of it was just my end (eg bugs) and the randomiser can come up with some really… interesting characters sometimes. I’ll be sure to message you when I’ve read them!

[Tsukino_94]

Thanks! Can’t wait for your next review!

[IChooseMyStory]

Hi all. I was caught ill for the last week so I’ve not been able to get back to you all. I am still happy to do feedback and will be PMing you all info on your episodes- I just ended up being bedridden for a week (not covid-19 but a bit of a flu x)

[AnonymousAuthor1]

hey, you still open?

if so, here’s my story!

could i receive mine over PM and have a ‘formal’ review?

The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: Hale Huna

[IChooseMyStory]

Yes that’s absoloutely fine, I’ll add you to my list x

[AnonymousAuthor1]

thank you so much

[Bertha]

Thank you for doing this!!
-Name of story: Betwen me and the sea
-Author name: Bertha
-Story Description: This story narrates how Ana’s little brother Matthew was drowned to death during their parent’s wedding. Even though everybody was present in the crime scene, nobody saw anything. The police closed the case considering it a suicide or just an accident. Ana dosen’t buy it, so she’ll try to find clues by herself. Things get complicated when Ana becomes the first suspects of a private investigator her parents hired. Fin love, find clues, and, find the responsible.
-How many episodes it has: 3 for now
-Genre: Mystery
-Style: LL
-Link of story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6673764627316736
-Story cover

[harly_episode]

I’d love some feedback

Title - beautiful broken lies
Author - Hannah & Carly
Link - http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6662026650320896

[AnonymousAuthor1]

can i ask how long it’ll take? are you very busy?

[IChooseMyStory]

I have about 7 on my list now and I’ve been reading a chapter of each so everyone gets their feedback equally (no one is waiting too long). It’ll just be funnelling in over the next few days x

[AnonymousAuthor1]

that’s fine, thanks

[julianne7]

Wow, I love the detailed feedback you give people I don’t mind criticism so please feel free to go as in-depth/picky as you want. I’d love your help to make my story better. Here’s the info:

• Magicka: The Shaper of Destiny
• Instagram: @episodejulianne
• Description: Iris is a Shaper - a messenger of destiny sent to earth by the Fates. She’s never questioned her role before… Until she meets Thalia, a human with some unusual abilities. LGBTQ, CC, choices matter (three endings).
• Style: LL
• Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5977216496369664