Harsh Reviews: SHARE YOUR STORIES WITH ME!

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#1

Hiii, I’m looking for new stories, I like EVERY kind of story, I mean I read everything and I will give you a feedback of your story! Feel free to publish as much as you want!

I’ll do it if you read my best friend’s story, send me the proof on a message (at least the first chapter) and of course I do it! You really won’t regret, her story is the best and she’s very good at coding!
Here’s the link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6435647390351360


#2

Thanks for doing these😊
Title—> Choose!!!
Author—>@ya
Genra—>adventure (sci-fi)
Description—>
You aren’t a superhero, nor have magical powers! Just a wrong wish of your’s , causes Fate of whole human race to be in your’s hands!!! Will you Succeed or face defeat?? (2 ends)
Link—>


Hope you enjoy it😉 feel free to leave fanmail if you like it


#3

Hey I have an unpublished story would you mind giving me feedback on the first three episodes? :blush: thanks
Tears between smiles * Romance * Ink


#6

Hey, @Marie.M! Thank you for creating this thread! I’d love a (harsh) review on my story. Here are the details:

Title: Fantastical: Silhouettes
Author: aprilish
Genre: Fantasy/Romance
Style: Ink
Blurb: Arion’s ready to risk it all to make her dreams come true. Leslie sees him every day, yet fails to recognize who he is. Watch them fall in love…without ever meeting each other.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6116658762874880
My Instagram: @aprilish.episode

Thank you so much! Looking forward to hearing your feedback! :two_hearts:


#7

Hi. Thank you! I’d love a review on these stories or just reads. :blush:

You could read my stories:

Or you could read my group @Episode-Royalty’s stories:

  • Surviving Love
  • Thorns
  • Fantastical: Falling From Grace

~ :snowflake:


#8

Hi, @Marie.M!

Thank you very much for creating this thread, this is very kind of you! Constructive criticism is exactly what I am looking for!

If you are interested in reading a story with several mini-games and where CHOICES REALLY MATTER then, please, give my story a try. It has 4 different endings and it is really animated! All the backgrounds are custom and there is a special art scene as well. I promise, the plot will also keep you hooked :blush:

Here is the video trailer I made so that you can get a better idea what the story is about:

My story details:

Name of story: Fantastical: Black Shadow
Author: Alex Af
Genre: Fantasy
Episodes: 3
Summary of story: Having women on board is considered bad luck? Well, as the most wanted pirate captain, you’ll certainly bring the worst luck to anyone who dares cross your path. CC, choices matter
Link to story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6081182347689984
Instagram: @episode.alex.af


#9

Name: The Ember Moon Pack
Description: You’re an average highschool girl. What’ll happen to your life when you get kidnapped by a pack of Hybrids that claim that you are their sacred Queen? CC, ChoicesMatter, 5Endings
Chapters: technically 3 bc ch 2 is customization
Genre: Fantasy
Style: Limelight
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5387476824358912
Instagram: emberpackepisode :smile:


#10

Hey @Marie.M! Thanks for creating this thread! I would like a review of my story!!! :heart:

Story title : Sandy and her Quadruplets
Author : R.J.
Episode Count : 11 (ongoing)
Genre : Comedy
Description : How can she survive with noisy and disobedient quadruplets? Will she finally find the father of her sons ? Here’s the crazy life of Sandy and her quadruplets!
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5337323130716160


#11

Hi and thank you for this!

Title: Revival
Author: Grace S
Style: Ink
Episodes: 10
Genre: Action
Description: Lillian Hayes is a professional criminal in a futuristic society. What happens when a mysterious boy challenges everything she’s ever known?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4762507897602048
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#12

Hi! I’d love a review of one or all of my stories. I believe there’s always room for improvement :joy:. (Hopefully all my coding kinks have resolved themselves :laughing:.)

I have four different stories that I have published. I have included all four of them so you have options to see if anything is of interest to you!

Title: Agent 99 ( planning on changing the title)

Genre: Action/Spy Romance

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4820219350089728

Description: A train ride goes awry when you’re suddenly caught in the middle of a terriorist attack. You’re saved by a sexy British spy but the danger has only just begun.

Cover: (planning on changing the cover)


Title: A Summer To Remember

Genre: Msytery Romance

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5182146054062080

Description: Play as both Rebecca and Lindsey as romance, mystery and adventure follow you during your summer vacation.


Title: Quiz: What Element Are You?

Genre: Paranormal Fantasy

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4516402677809152

Description: Are you an earth, air, water, fire or metal element? Find out by taking this quiz and unlock a code that gives you a hidden scene in Elemental Season 1


Title: Elemental- Season 1

Genre: Paranormal Fantasy

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4708334966145024

Description: Customize Your Character! Save the world with your newly discovered power as an unexpected romance blooms.


#13

Hi! I’d just like a review to see if there’s anything that I should fix!
title: Gifted
genre: Fantasy
link http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4728686032322560
Author: Jay
Description: You’re a top celebrity with a huge secret…you see Ghosts! it seems fun at first, but then becomes more dangerous than you anticipated.
Note: I’m still working on it so I only have one episode finished, I just want to know if I’m going in the right direction with this.


#14

Hey! This is so nice of you to do :slight_smile: if you could read the first four chapters that would be great :blush:

Title - Beautiful Broken Lies
Author - Hannah & Carly
Genre - Drama (also a comedy, romance & mystery)
Link - http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6662026650320896
Instagram - harly_episode
Style - ink
Description - Elena’s life seems perfect. Partying, boys, friends, you name it. That is until a dark tragedy changes her life forever. What is the truth? Will it break her?

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Thank you so much :kissing_heart:


#15

You may try my story here! :smile:

Title: Puppy Love
Author: Lou
Style: Limelight
Genre: Romance w/ a touch of Fantasy (but i put it in the fantasy section)
Episodes: 4 ongoing
Link: https://www.episodeinteractive.com/s/i/5630801559027712
IG: @authorlou.episode

Why should you give this story a read?
Well I know it’s title appears to be so cliche but don’t be fooled 'cause it’s beyond what you expected. Find out what it feels like to be in a dog’s feet by reading Alli’s thoughts. Will Jason be able to admit his true feelings for Alli after finding out she’s his puppy?


#16

That’s so cool! Please review mine.

Story Name: Simple to Chaos
Description: Two Best friends take a turn for the worst when a school shoot-out happens and they’re the names a gang member is calling for.

Genre: Action/Adventure
Sub-genre: Mystery, Thriller, Comedy,
Some tags: CC, Choices, LGBTQ+, Trailblazer, Cliche-breaker

Instagram : @lee.lee_26
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6065730015199232

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#17

Hey there! I’d love a review! :grin:


#19

**Hey, can you please review my story? ** :blush:
Title: Fantastical: Mysterious Investigation
Author: Lаwful Evil
Genre: Fantasy
Style: limelight
Description: People are missing in Innsmoot, the monster lives in the forest. Who’s behind all this? ~
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4814855314997248


#20

Heyy would you like to review my story? :blush:

Story name: Plan B
Author: Madalynn
Chapters: 4 (4th is character customization)
Genre: Drama
Style: INK
Description: You have a past with prison break planning but now you’ve left that life behind. Until you meet a cocky but charming Braiden Duane, who asks your help. Will you be able to say no?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5679276948062208 1
Instagram: madalynn.episode
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#21

Hey! Would you please review my new unpublished story?

*FIRST CHAPTER IS DONE, AND I’M HALFWAY DONE THE SECOND

Description:
Being the daughter of Zeus isn’t easy. Add responsibilities and your mother having cancer topped on with a forbidden temptation to a boy who can rock your world , literally.

LINK:

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