So I’m working on something I’m really excited about and it has ‘remembering past choices’. So, I’m really confused because when I save it gets no errors or anything, but it doesn’t show what I added in the brackets for a choice. I went through and replayed the entire story, and selected the choice that had what I wanted to see and it just never showed up. I’ll show it to you guys: (I haven’t added any other bracket/'if’s and I had to delete the ‘@’ signs because they won’t let me have it)
INT. BLACK - NIGHT
CHERRY enters from left to screen center
zoom on CHERRY to 200%
CHERRY (talk_explain_neutral)
Due to some script complications, I just need to ask you guys a couple questions.
CHERRY (talk_think_neutral)
How was your relationship with Ray? AND BE HONEST, THIS IS HIGHLY REQUIRED FOR THE STORY!
choice (relationship)
“Romantic.”{
CHERRY (talk_excited_happy)
Awesome, thanks.
gain romantic_ray
}
“Average.”{
CHERRY (talk_excited_happy)
Awesome, thanks.
gain average_ray
}
“Not good at all.”{
CHERRY (talk_excited_happy)
Awesome, thanks.
gain bad_ray
}
CHERRY (talk_sheepish_rubneck)
Last questions, were you able to get his number?
CHERRY (scream_angry)
ONCE AGAIN, BE HONEST OR YOU WILL RUIN THE STORY FOR YOURSELF!
choice (number)
“No.”{
CHERRY (talk_smile_happy_loop)
Thanks for being honest, now let's continue!
gain number_ray
}
“Yes.”{
CHERRY (talk_smile_happy_loop)
Alright, let's get on with the story now!
gain no_number_ray
}
zoom reset
music music_softhouse1
EXT. KC CAFE - DAY
YOU spot 1.280 248 -77
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YOU is deepbreath
if (coffee){
YOU (sip_cup_sad)
And then there was one.
}
if (donut){
YOU (eat_food_hand_sad)
And then there was one.
}
if (bagel){
YOU (eat_food_hand_sad)
And then there was one.
}
YOU is text_phone_neutral_loop and YOU faces left
if (coffee){
remove Coffee Cup To Go from YOU
}
if (donut){
remove Donut Pink Sprinkle from YOU
}
if (bagel){
remove Bagel Cream Cheese from YOU
}
RAY changes into RAY_casual
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RAY enters from left to spot 1.280 109 3
RAY (talk_read_phone_neutral_loop)
Hey, can I bother you for some salt?
RAY (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
I don’t have an-
YOU is react_shocked_awe AND RAY is react_shocked_gasp
RAY (talk_afraid)
You?!
YOU is idle_armscrossed_awkward_loop
if (number_ray){
YOU (talk_greet_shy)
Oh. Hi.
RAY (talk_flirt_coy)
Yeah, hi.
YOU (talk_flirt_charming)
What a small world, huh?
RAY (laugh_chuckle)
Practically microscopic.
RAY (talk_shrug_concerned)
But maybe that isn't such a bad thing...
YOU is blush_shy
YOU
...
choice
“Flirt (Sweet)”{
YOU (talk_flirt_charming)
From the looks of it, it may actually be an exceptionally good thing.
RAY is laugh_chuckle
}
“Flirt (Steamy)”{
YOU (talk_explain_neutral)
Maybe not, but if you're only here for salt,
YOU (talk_shrug_neutral)
I guess we'll never know if your presumption is true.
RAY is laugh_chuckle
}
RAY (talk_explain_neutral)
I’m Ray.
YOU (talk_explain_neutral)
[FIRSTNAME].
RAY (talk_greet_neutral)
Nice to meet you again, [FIRSTNAME].
YOU (talk_flirt_charming)
The pleasure is all mine.
RAY (talk_sheepish_rubneck)
Maybe I could call you sometime?
YOU (talk_think_neutral)
Hmm...
choice
“I’d like that.”{
YOU (talk_flirt_coy)
I'd really like that.
RAY (talk_flirt_charming)
Okay then, see you around.
YOU (talk_flirt_charming)
See ya.
}
“We’ll see.”{
YOU (talk_think_neutral)
We'll see, Ray.
RAY (laugh_chuckle)
That's a shame, huh?
YOU (laugh_giggle)
A big shame.
RAY is laugh_giggle
RAY (talk_greet_neutral)
See you around.
YOU
If you're lucky.
}
}
Does anyone know if I did something wrong?
Thanks!
