Continuing the discussion from Helene Reviews | Free Honest Episode Story Reviews:
Review: A Brush With Love by @SG38
What I like:
Sometimes the conversations are funny too, especially between the roommate and Sophie
The episode isn’t too long nor is it too short.
You might want to look into:
- Lengthy transitions
The transitions are a little dragged out, especially the beginning.
During the part when Suki tells Sophie about the actors/actresses, it would be great if we a take a look on how they look like. Overall, I enjoyed playing and I might continue it.
Good luck and happy writing! xx