Helene Reviews | Free Honest Episode Story Reviews

I know that a lot of you are writing Episode stories, and desires to have your stories read, and possibly get some feedback out of it
So this is what I’ll do:
I’ll read the first episode of your story (guaranteed). I might continue for a couple more, and might even become a fan and follow the story until it’s finished (if I fall in love with it).
Then I will write a review of the story and post it here. (On Instagram as well)

Reply and provide your story details:

  • Name of story
  • Your Episode username
  • (if not published) Link
  • Description of the story

Name: Out of the…box?!
You aren’t a superhero, nor have magical powers! Just a wrong wish of your’s , causes Fate of whole human race to be in your’s hands!!! Will you Succeed or face defeat?? (2 ends)
Thanks😊hope you enjoy

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I would love you to take a look at my story. It is my very first experience with Episode writing so any feedback is great!

Title: Teacher or Queen? (Drama)
Author: Mystique

Thank you!

That’s no problem with the cover and description, I know that it takes a while for the Episode Team to approve the images as well so keep an eye on that. I’ll go ahead and check the story out in a bit xx

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I’ve finished the review, here’s the link: Helene Reviews | Out of the...box?! by @ya

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Thank you already.:kissing_heart:
Name of story - I am Dating a Liar
Your Episode username Sandy_candy
(if not published) Link
Description of the story - Ava had horrible past so she is afraid to date anyone. She started working in new company where her boss try to get her so she lied to ignore her boss that she is already dating.

Hey, thnak you so much for creating this thread. I would love to get some feedback from you.:slight_smile:
Here’s the details to my story in case you want to check it out.
Author: S_Unique
Title: The Four Horsemen
Genre: Fantasy
Style: Ink
Description: 4 Sins. 4 Angels fell. 4 Horsemen rose. A curse was casted. And the battle of good vs evil is about to begin. CC/ Choices matter
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5482099054608384

Thank you, I would really appreciate some feedback!
Here’s mine:
Title: Dreams and Nightmares
Author: Dreamer
Genre: Romance
Style: Ink
Summary: Scarlet had a rough past and it looks like it’s not getting better after she was bought by some mysterious guy. Will she ever turn her life from a nightmare to a dream?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5452320906543104

I’d love if you could review our story :blush:

Title - Beautiful Broken Lies
Username - hannah & carly
Description - Elena’s life seems perfect. Partying, boys, friends, you name it. That is until a dark tragedy changes her life forever. What is the truth? Will it break her?

Thank you I would love a review!

Title: A Brush with Love
Genre: Romance (with comedy elements)
Style: Ink
Description: Sophie, a make up artist from the UK moves to LA after landing a job on hit TV show ‘Startstruck!’. A change of plan on her first day catapults her into the life of actor, Ben Holden.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5394078488723456

Name of story: Thrill of the Hunt
Your Episode username: azariasin
(if not published) Link
Description of the story: To find a serial killer hunting innocent women, you’re paired with someone unexpected! Will you navigate lust, betrayal and tragedy in this murder-mystery? CC! [MATURE]

I would really appreciate it if you could review what I have of the first 12 minutes of my unpublished story, the first episode isn’t done yet though, just letting you know :sweat_smile:
But, please, by all means, be as honest as you can! :grin:

Name: Providence
Author/Episode Username: A.D. Summers
Genre: Fantasy Adventure
Number of episodes: 1 (ignore the second I was messing around with something lol)
Description: “Why does God even deal with us?” I never thought I’d know his answer, until I went to that mysterious town. After all, Providence is a greater mystery than Revelation. Limited CC (??? still debating)

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@sandy_candy @S_Unique @RainbowCat @harly_episode @SG38
I’ve finished your reviews, you can read it under this main post ^ or check your notifs xx

As for @azariasin and @a.d.episode I’ll work on your reviews later
And don’t worry @a.d.episode, my story is also unpublished and unfinished with the first ep either XD


Title: Crossed Paths
Author: Dreamer
Description: Mindy’s life is filled with joy and laughter but is haunted by heartbreak. What happens when Derek comes crashing into her life changing the way she sees love?

I would like to get a review on my story.

Name of story: Life Without Jennifer
Episode username: Mia
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5397065844785152
Description of the story: An accident has Jennifer torn from the world. Her loved ones are now left to learn how to live without her.

Name of story: Amazing Inside (3 episode)
Your Episode username: AlessGluX
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5843577419464704
Description of the story:
Can Emma control her emotion when she realize they come out and talk to her? can she balance love, friendship and family before the mystery darkness power come and destroy everything that she love?

it would be amazing if you review my story <3

Hi @chhelene, thank you for this! I would love it if you read and gave some feedback on my story with @Loversdelight! :hugs:

Story Title: Soccer Moms: Blast to the Future
Author Name: Winter05 with Episode Royalty
Customization?: Limited
Style: INK
Genre: Drama
Episodes: 6 [COMPLETE]
Story Description: All it takes is one shot to change your whole life. Win or lose, nothing will ever be the same.
Instagram Names: @winter05.episode with @penroyalty
Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6395210318086144


Feel free to leave me fanmail! I hope you enjoy it!

~ Winter :snowflake:

Name of story Scars
My Episode username inxmyxeyes
Description of the story
The past created who she is right now.
The life never goes easy on her.
That’s why she became so ruthless for ayone she’s ever met.

I would love some feedback if you’re still doing it. :slight_smile:

  • In the Margins
  • cutlass
  • Surrounded by books it’s easy to get lost in their magic. Especially when the real world is anything but magical. A late night text might be the spark you’ve been searching for…
  • Name of story - KILL YOUR DREAMS
  • Your Episode username - Anna
  • Link- http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4905142231891968
  • Description of the story- Anne lives the same day again and in the end she gets killed. Now she tries to find the killer. Story is filled with drama and romance