Hello, thanks you for this thread
My story has 8 chapters but only one is currently readable as a demo.
Tittle: Total Control: Blood Mist
Genre: Fantasy/musical/drama
Cover:
(Finished version)
Description:
A school ravaged by a former student is being brought back to former glory by a group of students. 8 other schools on an island struggle to maintain peace as a war wages between them. Help make alliances and obtain total control.
Style: LL
Read time: 10-12 mins
Has MC with limited CC
Choices in this chapter don’t matter but shows alternative routes
(Later chapters have extremely important measures)
Link:
Some things to note I’ve changed already.
- Added periods to end sentences
- Changed MC starting skin color to darker shade
- Removed “HELPER”
- Fixed loading of scenes
- Restyled dialog characters use when singing
- Other small stuff
Unfortunately those changes won’t be seen till I release the full season which will contain 9 chapters.
Also the story gets brutally realistic due to contrivercial topics involved in other chapters so it isn’t a story for everyone.
I’ve made a wiki page for those more interested in the title because there’s a lot to take in at once.
Total Control Wiki
Thanks in advance