:blob_hearts: Hell Queen's Review Tent! :blob_hearts:

Hello, thanks you for this thread :raised_hands:t5:
My story has 8 chapters but only one is currently readable as a demo.

Tittle: Total Control: Blood Mist
Genre: Fantasy/musical/drama
Cover:
(Finished version)

Description:
A school ravaged by a former student is being brought back to former glory by a group of students. 8 other schools on an island struggle to maintain peace as a war wages between them. Help make alliances and obtain total control.

Style: LL
Read time: 10-12 mins
Has MC with limited CC
Choices in this chapter don’t matter but shows alternative routes
(Later chapters have extremely important measures)
Link:

Some things to note I’ve changed already.

  • Added periods to end sentences
  • Changed MC starting skin color to darker shade
  • Removed “HELPER”
  • Fixed loading of scenes
  • Restyled dialog characters use when singing
  • Other small stuff

Unfortunately those changes won’t be seen till I release the full season which will contain 9 chapters.

Also the story gets brutally realistic due to contrivercial topics involved in other chapters so it isn’t a story for everyone.

I’ve made a wiki page for those more interested in the title because there’s a lot to take in at once.
Total Control Wiki

Thanks in advance :wave:t5: