This is my profile, I’ve had an account for about two days now, I’ve spent that time coding my own story online, I’ve read some stories which are absolutely fantastic, and I fear that I’ve written something which is quite poor.
I’ve completed three episodes, but slowly tweaking the last two here and there.
I loved writing stories when I was younger, and have grown up to study computing which involves a lot of programming and coding anyway, so I thought why not give it a shot!
It’d be really wonderful if you could give me feedback based on these points:
• I’m aware of many clichés that users are tired of, is mine too similar to those?
• Would you honestly want to see more of this story?
• Are my episodes long enough, and with enough content (choices, characters, dialog).
• Would you recommend to a friend or on your profile?
Honesty is the best policy, I won’t be offended!
Thank you all so much!
P.S, if you’re like me and can’t be bothered to open the app and manually type in the name of the story, here’s the direct link: Tiffany’s Tale - https://episode.app.link/OjUQUxzGTL .