Help! awkward pause that idk how to get rid of in my story

In my story a girl runs into a guy. The guy is running but then falls. In my story though he runs to the spot, pauses idle for a second or two, then falls. It looks really awkward. how to fix this?

Here is my code…

&JULIA is think_rubchin
@KEVIN1 enters from right to upscreen right in 1 and KEVIN1 is run_athletic_neutral_loop THEN KEVIN1 is fall
&JULIA is react_startled_subtle
@KEVIN1 is standup_neutral

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Send me the link in a PM so I can see what’s wrong

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What do you mean? i posted the code right there

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Your code can look right, but it doesn’t mean it is right, so I don’t know how I can help you with that if I don’t see it

Replace the “is” with “starts”.

&JULIA is think_rubchin
@KEVIN1 enters from right to upscreen right in 1 and KEVIN1 does it while run_athletic_neutral_loop THEN KEVIN1 is fall << That should fix your problem.
&JULIA is react_startled_subtle
@KEVIN1 is standup_neutral

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