Hey, I have some questions, only 3 for now though
I am pretty new to directing and everything and very bad so would love some help.
I have a story idea I wanna do but I have difficulty finding out how to break the news from a nurse to the girl who got her loved one in an accident and explain to her that her boyfriend is in a coma. I’ve been stuck a lot on that every time haha. I’ll show you how bad the dialogue is.
JESSICA (talk_confused_mindblown)
Thank god, someone finally came.
@NURSE G is idle_awkward_uneasy_loop
JESSICA (talk_afraid)
How is he?!
NURSE G (talk_awkward_loop)
He is stable and everything is normal.. But I'm sorry...
@NURSE G is idle_awkward_uneasy_loop AND JESSICA is cry_sob_sad_loop
NURSE G (talk_awkward_loop)
Don't misunderstand, he is alive, but he is in a coma...
JESSICA (talk_repulsed)
What...?
NURSE G
He is alive, but he is not responsive. His heart beats but his brain is in sleep mode.
JESSICA (talk_deny_neutral)
But, wait. He was opening his eyes when we where in the ambulance!
JESSICA (talk_argue_defensive)
He |bold|HELD|reset| my hand back on the way here!
NURSE G
Yeah, he was conscious but,-
JESSICA (talk_complain_angry)
I REFUSE TO HEAR THIS, LET ME TALK TO A DOCTOR!
NURSE G (talk_awkward_loop)
Yes, I will go and fetch a doctor for you. I am sorry...
@NURSE G is idle_awkward_uneasy_loop AND JESSICA is cry_sob_sad_loop
I can’t word it correct so it comes out weird like that
Info - They were on their way to the airport, but got into a car accident. Her boyfriend ended up in a coma, sadly. As you see, my wording is horrible and I have no idea how to make it better. Would love some help to make the dialogue better!
Also. I wondered if I could have two effects on at the same time?
I want smoke effect together with rain or snow, does that work at the same time or not? I tried adding both but it didn’t work so hope somebody could help me if it does work.
AND
Also, if you have a person in zone 1, you have zoomed in on a person in zone 2, how can you smoothly go back to the person in zone 1 and focus on them instead without the camera doing a weird twirl at the end when going to zone 1 at the first person?