HELP! Does Anyone Know What I've Done Wrong?

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#1

ERROR : Unexpected Costume Change

SCRIPT :

JACKSON (talk_shrug_concerned)
Here, try these!

readerMessage New outfits have been added to your closet selection! Browse them now…

label outfit_choice

    YOU (dance_groove_happy_loop)
(What should I browse?)

choice
"Standard Outfits" {

NARRATOR
You are currently browsing STANDARD outfits.

choice
“Plain Pyjamas”

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Pyjamas
@pause for a beat
}
“Sporty Diva” {

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Sporty Diva
@pause for a beat

}
“Bold Babe” {

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Bold Babe
@pause for a beat

}
“Casual Cutie” {

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Casual Cutie
@pause for a beat

}
“Dazzling Sweetheart” {

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Dazzling Sweetheart
@pause for a beat

}
“Pretty Partier” {

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Pretty Partier
@pause for a beat

}
“Rising Star” {

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Rising Star
@pause for a beat

}
“(NEW) Juicy Beast” {

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Task2A
@pause for a beat

}
“(NEW) Wonderous Ambassador” {

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Task2B
@pause for a beat

}
“(NEW) Beauty Queen” {

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Task2C
@pause for a beat

}

    YOU (admire_happy)
(...)

choice
“Choose This!” {

@YOU is kiss_blow_happy_atcamera

}
“Keep Browsing…” {

goto outfit_choice

}
“Premium Outfits” {

readerMessage If you have bought any premium outfits, they will appear here.


if (premium_choice){

<PREMIUM>"(PREMIUM) Gorgeous V-Neck" {

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Adoring Angel
@pause for a beat

}

label end_closet


#3

I would use a goto for the first one, and labels. It usually doesn’t work like that with a choice in a choice


#4

OK ILL TRY That now


#5

Can you show me what line the error refers to?
If you can add a photo of the script with the error


#6

sure


#7


#8

There should be a { after the choice name
Add it just before the sentence that the error refers to (@YOU changes into…)
See if this works
If not i’ll check again whats wrong❤


#9

I changed my script to what the person earlier recommended by adding a goto. Now it says ERROR : PREMIUM PARAMETER

SCRIPT…

JACKSON (talk_shrug_concerned)
Here, try these!

readerMessage New outfits have been added to your closet selection! Browse them now…

label outfit_choice

    YOU (dance_groove_happy_loop)
(What should I browse?)

choice
“Standard Outfits” {

    NARRATOR
You are currently browsing STANDARD outfits.

goto standardoutfits_2

    YOU (admire_happy)
(...)

choice
“Choose This!” {

@YOU is kiss_blow_happy_atcamera

}
“Keep Browsing…” {

goto outfit_choice

}
“Premium Outfits” {

readerMessage If you have bought any premium outfits, they will appear here.

if (premium_choice){

“(PREMIUM) Gorgeous V-Neck” {

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Adoring Angel
@pause for a beat

}

label end_closet

label standardoutfits_2

choice
{“Plain Pyjamas”

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Pyjamas
@pause for a beat
}
“Sporty Diva” {

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Sporty Diva
@pause for a beat

}
“Bold Babe” {

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Bold Babe
@pause for a beat

}
“Casual Cutie” {

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Casual Cutie
@pause for a beat

}
“Dazzling Sweetheart” {

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Dazzling Sweetheart
@pause for a beat

}
“Pretty Partier” {

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Pretty Partier
@pause for a beat

}
“Rising Star” {

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Rising Star
@pause for a beat

}
“(NEW) Juicy Beast” {

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Task2A
@pause for a beat

}
“(NEW) Wonderous Ambassador” {

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Task2B
@pause for a beat

}
“(NEW) Beauty Queen” {

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Task2C
@pause for a beat

}

    YOU (admire_happy)
(...)

choice
“Choose This!” {

@YOU is kiss_blow_happy_atcamera

}
“Keep Browsing…” {

goto outfit_choice

}


#10

ok i did what u said to do and now it’s referring to this line as the error…

if (premium_choice){

"(PREMIUM) Gorgeous V-Neck" {

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Adoring Angel
@pause for a beat

}

The bold line is the one it says the error to be


#13

image


#14

I’ve got links for it is it INK or ll your struggling with


#15

Limelight


#16

Okay I’ll send you the link


#17

http://www.episodelife.com/2018/01/simple-dressing-game-script-template.html here you go @benaiah.episode


#18

I did use the < and > , I added (PREMIUM) so the reader can see it’s a gem outfit.