HELP! Does Anyone Know What I've Done Wrong?

ERROR : Unexpected Costume Change

SCRIPT :

JACKSON (talk_shrug_concerned)
Here, try these!

readerMessage New outfits have been added to your closet selection! Browse them now…

label outfit_choice

    YOU (dance_groove_happy_loop)
(What should I browse?)

choice
"Standard Outfits" {

NARRATOR
You are currently browsing STANDARD outfits.

choice
“Plain Pyjamas”

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Pyjamas
@pause for a beat
}
“Sporty Diva” {

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Sporty Diva
@pause for a beat

}
“Bold Babe” {

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Bold Babe
@pause for a beat

}
“Casual Cutie” {

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Casual Cutie
@pause for a beat

}
“Dazzling Sweetheart” {

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Dazzling Sweetheart
@pause for a beat

}
“Pretty Partier” {

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Pretty Partier
@pause for a beat

}
“Rising Star” {

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Rising Star
@pause for a beat

}
“(NEW) Juicy Beast” {

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Task2A
@pause for a beat

}
“(NEW) Wonderous Ambassador” {

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Task2B
@pause for a beat

}
“(NEW) Beauty Queen” {

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Task2C
@pause for a beat

}

    YOU (admire_happy)
(...)

choice
“Choose This!” {

@YOU is kiss_blow_happy_atcamera

}
“Keep Browsing…” {

goto outfit_choice

}
“Premium Outfits” {

readerMessage If you have bought any premium outfits, they will appear here.


if (premium_choice){

<PREMIUM>"(PREMIUM) Gorgeous V-Neck" {

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Adoring Angel
@pause for a beat

}

label end_closet

I would use a goto for the first one, and labels. It usually doesn’t work like that with a choice in a choice

OK ILL TRY That now

Can you show me what line the error refers to?
If you can add a photo of the script with the error

sure

There should be a { after the choice name
Add it just before the sentence that the error refers to (@YOU changes into…)
See if this works
If not i’ll check again whats wrong❤

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I changed my script to what the person earlier recommended by adding a goto. Now it says ERROR : PREMIUM PARAMETER

SCRIPT…

JACKSON (talk_shrug_concerned)
Here, try these!

readerMessage New outfits have been added to your closet selection! Browse them now…

label outfit_choice

    YOU (dance_groove_happy_loop)
(What should I browse?)

choice
“Standard Outfits” {

    NARRATOR
You are currently browsing STANDARD outfits.

goto standardoutfits_2

    YOU (admire_happy)
(...)

choice
“Choose This!” {

@YOU is kiss_blow_happy_atcamera

}
“Keep Browsing…” {

goto outfit_choice

}
“Premium Outfits” {

readerMessage If you have bought any premium outfits, they will appear here.

if (premium_choice){

“(PREMIUM) Gorgeous V-Neck” {

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Adoring Angel
@pause for a beat

}

label end_closet

label standardoutfits_2

choice
{“Plain Pyjamas”

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Pyjamas
@pause for a beat
}
“Sporty Diva” {

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Sporty Diva
@pause for a beat

}
“Bold Babe” {

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Bold Babe
@pause for a beat

}
“Casual Cutie” {

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Casual Cutie
@pause for a beat

}
“Dazzling Sweetheart” {

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Dazzling Sweetheart
@pause for a beat

}
“Pretty Partier” {

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Pretty Partier
@pause for a beat

}
“Rising Star” {

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Rising Star
@pause for a beat

}
“(NEW) Juicy Beast” {

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Task2A
@pause for a beat

}
“(NEW) Wonderous Ambassador” {

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Task2B
@pause for a beat

}
“(NEW) Beauty Queen” {

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Task2C
@pause for a beat

}

    YOU (admire_happy)
(...)

choice
“Choose This!” {

@YOU is kiss_blow_happy_atcamera

}
“Keep Browsing…” {

goto outfit_choice

}

ok i did what u said to do and now it’s referring to this line as the error…

if (premium_choice){

"(PREMIUM) Gorgeous V-Neck" {

@YOU changes into CLOSET_Adoring Angel
@pause for a beat

}

The bold line is the one it says the error to be

image

I’ve got links for it is it INK or ll your struggling with

Limelight

Okay I’ll send you the link

http://www.episodelife.com/2018/01/simple-dressing-game-script-template.html here you go @benaiah.episode

I did use the < and > , I added (PREMIUM) so the reader can see it’s a gem outfit.