Help! error - Choices must follow after dialogue immediately, not after a branch

Hello! I hope your having the best day, and sorry to ruin it but- I’m stuck with this error and I’ve been trying to fix it 30 mins ago, can you help?


Thank you so much

From what I noticed, you might want to remove that curly bracket preceding the choice. I’ve noticed this same problem, too and you can’t put anything other than a character’s dialogue coming before the choice.

Try…
choice
“Oh sorry mom, have fun wherever you are!” {

AMBER (talk_afraid)
Oh sorry mom, have fun wherever you are!
}

choice
“I AM YOU’RE DAUGHTER! YOU SHOULD TELL ME WHAT YOU’RE DOING!” {

AMBER (talk_accuse_angry)
I AM YOU’RE DAUGHTER! YOU SHOULD TELL ME WHAT YOU’RE DOING!
}

choice
“Uh- Sorry?” {

AMBER (idle_awkward_uneasy_loop)
Uh-
}

So all you should need to of changed is the bracket placement :laughing:

if its only suppouse to be one choice, meaning have all options togheter

it needs to be done like this

choice
“”{

}
“”{

}

only choice above the first option

im sorry but its your :sob: im a grammar freak

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Remove the second “choice”, you don’t need to add it twice.
Like this:

Amber
(What should I tell her?)
Choice “Sorry Mom, have fun wherever you are. ”{
Text
}
“I am your daughter, you should tell me what you’re doing!” {
Text
}

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Thank you so much! ill make sure you read the story first! its called Dear Sarah with by catsforlife (me)