Help for story description / tips?

Anyone who want to help me get a good description for my story? I just can’t seem to get something that looks appealing

my description right now:
Dark,Light,Pain
I know it’s really bad :confused:

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whats yr story title? what genre is it going to be

Charlie
gerne Fanasty

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bit about the story:
you follow a MC named Charlie(Male). Who has lost his memory. He lives with his adopted parents he doesn’t know they are his adopted parent’s though. natural hair color Blue Light.

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i could help you if you wanna

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Sure ! so do you have idea’'s? if you need to know more about the story I can tell you?

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tell me a little more about the story

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Well it’s a fantasy story (obviously) about Charlie Hendriks. Age 19. He had lost his mermory when he was 5 years old and he can’t remeber a thing about his life before 5. this caused him to not know about his magic powers. he has blue light as natrual hair color. He will learn how to use magic. I can’t say a lot because then I will tell the whole story:sweat_smile:

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give me a minute I’ll think of something

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ok so u have description n title. U want a new description to fit with it and title? :thinking:

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yes she wants that, I’m trying to think of something

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well fit in with the story

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I agree. it does fit.

does it ? and my description is actually Dark, Light , Pain I don’t think that a good description so I anted something new

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maybe somethig like this: I have lost my mermory when I was 5 years old, I can’t remeber a thing about my life before 5, I thought it wasn’t that important but little did i know there was something special about me.

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thats a good one.

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yeah that one is really good thanks!

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no problem

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did it help @Minoesje with title.

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