ok here is episode 1
INT. WARNING - THEMES
@BECKY changes into BECKY_default
NARRATOR
Hey guys. Thanks for choosing to read this story.
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The first few stores is heavy on sexual child assault. But
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Most of them will either not go into them that deep or only for a brief moment
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Thanks for choosing to read this story.
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Just so you are aware, Anita Gandre is my version of Ariana Grande
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I can't use real celebs so I have to give them Aliases. I hope yall like this strory
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There will be more celebrities that I will use alias's for.
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Anyhoo, I hope yall like the story
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And please. Send me tips and comments
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And big thank yous to all of those who have followed me and read my other story
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Im still working on it
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Hope yall enjoy
INT. CLASSIC LIVING ROOM - DAY
@UNCLE HECTOR spot 1.280 88 69 AND UNCLE HECTOR faces right
UNCLE HECTOR (scream)
Becky! Get down here now you stupid piece of crud
@pause for a beat
@BECKY enters from right to spot 0.400 201 204 AND BECKY is run_athletic
@BECKY spot 0.400 201 204 AND BECKY is cry_weep_loop
UNCLE HECTOR (arms_crossed_angry)
Stop crying you stupid piece of crud. Its time to play the game
BECKY (cry_sob_loop)
Please Im begging you, please spare me it hurts.
UNCLE HECTOR (talk_angry_accuse)
Stop being a big drama queen. I want you undressed and
UNCLE HECTOR (talk_angry_accuse)
In my bed in five minutes. Do you understand?
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat
UNCLE HECTOR (scream)
Answer me!
@pause for a beat
@UNCLE HECTOR spot 1.280 88 69 AND UNCLE HECTOR is slap_face
@BECKY spot 0.400 201 204 AND BECKY is slap_face_receive
BECKY (cry_sob_loop)
Ok
@BECKY exits right AND BECKY is walk_sad
@transition fade out black
INT. YOUR BEDROOM - NIGHT
@BECKY enters from left to spot 0.355 240 211 AND BECKY is walk_sad
@BECKY faces right AND BECKY is cry_weep_loop
BECKY (cry_weep_loop)
(I just don't get it. Why does he do this to me. He is my uncle)
BECKY (idle_sad)
(I miss you mom and dad. I wish you were here)
NARRATOR
I am 4 years old. A month after my second birthday, my parents were killed
NARRATOR
In a car wreck. My Uncle was my only living relative. So he became my legal guardian
NARRATOR
No one knew he had become a violent man. He's been hurting me for 2 years now
@UNCLE HECTOR enters from left to spot 1.266 73 76 AND UNCLE HECTOR is walk_neutral
UNCLE HECTOR (talk_angry)
I told you to get undressed and in my bed
@BECKY faces left
BECKY (cry_sniff_loop)
Sorry
@UNCLE HECTOR faces right AND UNCLE HECTOR is punch_jab
@BECKY faces left AND BECKY is idle_wounded
UNCLE HECTOR (talk_angry_arms_crossed)
Do you want another one?
@BECKY faces left AND BECKY is talk_sad
BECKY
No
UNCLE HECTOR (talk_angry_accuse)
Then move your rotten self to the bed
@BECKY exits right
@pan to zone 4
@BECKY enters from left to spot 0.353 250 271 AND BECKY is walk_trudge
@BECKY faces right AND BECKY is dustoff_loop
@UNCLE HECTOR enters from left to back left
UNCLE HECTOR (talk_handsonhips)
Now then, lets do this
@transition fade out black
INT. BLACK - NIGHT
NARRATOR
It hurts so bad. But my uncle doesn't care
INT. YOUR BEDROOM - NIGHT
@pan to zone 4
@BECKY spot 0.353 250 271 AND BECKY is cry_weep_loop
@BECKY faces right AND BECKY is idle_wounded
@UNCLE HECTOR stands back left AND UNCLE HECTOR is talk_handsonhips
UNCLE HECTOR
That was some good stuff
@UNCLE HECTOR exits left AND UNCLE HECTOR is walk_neutral
BECKY (talk_neutral)
My uncle won't be back for 5 hours. I should get some time out of the house
BECKY (talk_shrug)
I guess I'll go to the
choice
“park”{
BECKY (idle_sad)
I can hide in the cave like place and gather myself
BECKY
Hopefully no one is there
@BECKY exits left AND BECKY is walk_trudge
gain chose_park
EXT. CAVE - DAY
@BECKY enters from left to spot 0.299 248 242 AND BECKY is walk_trudge
BECKY (idle_wounded)
Im so hungry. My uncle doesn't feed me reguarly
@BECKY faces left
BECKY (admire)
Oh my. God is being good to me. There is a piece of pizza over there
@BECKY walks to spot 0.337 70 213 AND BECKY is walk_neutral
@BECKY faces left AND BECKY is eat_pizza
@pause for a beat
@ANITA GANDRE enters from right to spot 0.732 232 143
ANITA GANDRE (talk_greet)
Hello
@BECKY faces right AND BECKY is idle_terrified
ANITA GANDRE (talk_reassure)
Don't be frightened. Im Anita Gandre. Im a singer
BECKY (talk_neutral)
Im a huge fan. I love your song wreckless lady. Actually i love all your songs
ANITA GANDRE (talk_gesture)
Aww thank you. Tell me, what's your name?
BECKY (idle_sad)
(I guess it can't hurt to tell her my name)
BECKY
Becky
ANITA GANDRE (admire)
I love that name
BECKY (idle_sad)
I have to go back home. My uncle will be upset if I am not back in time
ANITA GANDRE (talk_gesture)
Well it was nice to meet you
@ANITA GANDRE faces left AND ANITA GANDRE is reach_kneel_rear
ANITA GANDRE (talk_gesture)
My number is on it. Call me anytime
BECKY
Thank you
@BECKY exits left
ANITA GANDRE (idle_sad)
(Its kind of concerning that she was here all by herself)
ANITA GANDRE
(And i just noticed she had bruises on the back of her neck)
ANITA GANDRE
(I hope she comes back cause i wanna ask about that)
EXT. PHILLY CAFE - NIGHT
@BECKY enters from left to spot 0.319 241 215 AND BECKY is walk_neutral
BECKY (cry_sob_loop)
What is wrong with me, I had a chance to be free and I blew it
@UNCLE HECTOR enters from left to spot 0.840 94 148 AND UNCLE HECTOR is walk_neutral
UNCLE HECTOR (scream)
What the hell are you doing here?
@BECKY faces left AND BECKY is idle_terrified
UNCLE HECTOR (talk_angry_accuse)
How dare you leave the house
UNCLE HECTOR
You know you are not allowed to leave the house
UNCLE HECTOR
You are too ugly
UNCLE HECTOR (talk_angry)
You know what? Since you are ungrateful to the point you would try to run away
UNCLE HECTOR
I don't want you back. You aren't worth it
BECKY
I wasn't running away, I just wanted some fresh air
@UNCLE HECTOR faces right AND UNCLE HECTOR is punch_jab
@BECKY faces left AND BECKY is idle_wounded
NARRATOR
He continued to beat me till I fell to the ground, and could barely move
@UNCLE HECTOR faces right AND UNCLE HECTOR is idle_punch
@BECKY spot 0.463 356 194 AND BECKY faces left
@BECKY faces left AND BECKY is faint
@UNCLE HECTOR exits left AND UNCLE HECTOR is walk_neutral
NARRATOR
I could barely move. Any movement caused extreme pain
NARRATOR
Everything hurts.
NARRATOR
At this point I hope I die soon.
@pause for a beat
@ANITA GANDRE enters from left to spot 0.840 62 139 AND ANITA GANDRE is walk_neutral
ANITA GANDRE (dismayed)
Oh my God! Becky!
@ANITA GANDRE faces right AND ANITA GANDRE is idle_kneel
ANITA GANDRE (idle_kneel)
(She is hurt bad. I must get her to the hospital)
ANITA GANDRE (tinker_kneel_loop)
It's gonna be ok Becky. Lets get you to the hospital
gain chose_park
}
“lake”{
@BECKY exits left AND BECKY is walk_trudge
EXT. ROMANTIC LAKESIDE - DAY
@BECKY enters from left to spot 0.319 276 413 AND BECKY is walk_trudge
@BECKY faces right AND BECKY is idle_rear
@ANITA GANDRE enters from left to back left AND ANITA GANDRE is walk_neutral
ANITA GANDRE (talk_think)
(That's odd. That little girl is here all by herself. She looks too young)
ANITA GANDRE
(To be alone)
ANITA GANDRE (talk_call_out)
Hey sweetie, please come here
@BECKY faces left AND BECKY is idle_terrified
ANITA GANDRE (talk_reassure)
It's ok Im not gonna hurt you
@pause for a beat
@BECKY faces left AND BECKY is deepbreath
@BECKY walks to spot 0.319 192 298 AND BECKY is walk_exhausted
ANITA GANDRE (talk_neutral)
What are you doing here by yourself? You look pretty young.
BECKY (idle_sad)
(I can't tell her the whole truth)
BECKY (talk_sad_timid)
Um I live close by and my Uncle allows me to come here
ANITA GANDRE (talk_gesture)
How old are you?
BECKY (talk_sad_clutch)
Im um, four
ANITA GANDRE (idle_sad)
(Something tells me something worse is happening.)
ANITA GANDRE
(I have a hard time believing that any good parent/guardian would let a four year old)
ANITA GANDRE
(Go out all by themselves)
ANITA GANDRE (talk_gesture)
What's your name?
@pause for a beat
BECKY (talk_sad)
Becky
ANITA GANDRE (talk_reassure)
That's a beautiful name
NARRATOR
Becky's stomach growls
ANITA GANDRE (talk_gesture)
Oh you sound hungry.
ANITA GANDRE
I have some fruit in my car. I'll go get them
ANITA GANDRE (talk_reassure)
Wait here. I'll be right back
@ANITA GANDRE exits left AND ANITA GANDRE is walk_neutral
BECKY
(She's right. I am hungry. The last thing I had to eat was an apple.)
BECKY
(And that was 2 days ago)
@UNCLE HECTOR enters from left to spot 0.840 92 227 AND UNCLE HECTOR is walk_neutral
@BECKY faces left AND BECKY is idle_terrified
UNCLE HECTOR (talk_angry_accuse)
How dare you leave the house!
@UNCLE HECTOR faces right AND UNCLE HECTOR is punch_jab
@BECKY faces left AND BECKY is idle_wounded
@UNCLE HECTOR faces right AND UNCLE HECTOR is punch_jab
@BECKY faces left AND BECKY is idle_wounded
@UNCLE HECTOR faces right AND UNCLE HECTOR is punch_jab
@BECKY faces left AND BECKY is idle_wounded
@BECKY faces left AND BECKY is faint
@UNCLE HECTOR exits right AND UNCLE HECTOR is walk_neutral
@pause for a beat
@ANITA GANDRE enters from right to spot 0.840 211 296 AND ANITA GANDRE is walk_neutral
ANITA GANDRE (dismayed)
Oh my god! Becky
ANITA GANDRE (idle_kneel)
Everything is gonna be ok.
ANITA GANDRE
(I gotta get her to the hospital)
@transition fade out black
gain chose_lake
}
INT. BLACK - DAY
NARRATOR
5 hours later
INT. HOSPITAL BED - NIGHT
@ANITA GANDRE left AND ANITA GANDRE faces right
@DR GENIS right AND DR GENIS faces left
ANITA GANDRE (talk_neutral)
How is she Dr Genis?
DR GENIS (talk_neutral)
She is gonna be ok,
DR GENIS (talk_sad)
But she has much more damage then meets the eye
DR GENIS
While I was examining her, i found 500 wounds under her clothes
@ANITA GANDRE faces right AND ANITA GANDRE is dismayed
DR GENIS
And only a fourth of them look like they are brand new
DR GENIS
The rest of range from about a day old to 5 months old.
DR GENIS (deepbreath)
And when i weighed her, she was only 18 pounds
DR GENIS
And i also discovered she has been raped at least 30 times. Her small body couldn't handle that
DR GENIS
So she had a lot of internal damage. I had to do a small operation to fix the damage
ANITA GANDRE (cry_sniff_loop)
What was I thinking? I should've just taken her home the minute I saw her
DR GENIS (talk_gesture)
Dont be so hard on yourself. The majority of her wounds were either well hidden
DR GENIS
Or internal. You did the right thing to bring her here.
@ANITA GANDRE faces right AND ANITA GANDRE is deepbreath
DR GENIS
I also did some dna testing on her so I could get proof of who raped her
DR GENIS
Would you like to see her?
ANITA GANDRE (talk_neutral)
Yes.
@DR GENIS faces right AND DR GENIS is talk_gesture
DR GENIS
She's over there.
DR GENIS (talk_neutral)
Im gonna run those test through. Ill be back in a bit
@BECKY changes into BECKY_Hidden wounds
@pan to zone 3
@BECKY spot 0.319 10 500 AND BECKY is lay_asleep_loop
@pause for a beat
@ANITA GANDRE enters from left to spot 0.840 73 139 AND ANITA GANDRE is walk_neutral
ANITA GANDRE (dismayed)
I cant believe someone would be this cruel to someone. Especially a child
@ANITA GANDRE walks to spot 0.840 34 227 AND ANITA GANDRE is walk_neutral
@ANITA GANDRE faces right AND ANITA GANDRE is sit
ANITA GANDRE
Becky, I am so sorry I didnt do something sooner
ANITA GANDRE
I promise. You will be safe now. I will make sure whoever did this to you
ANITA GANDRE
Can never hurt you again
@pause for a beat
@DR GENIS enters from left to spot 0.840 190 194 AND DR GENIS is walk_neutral
@DR GENIS faces left
DR GENIS (talk_neutral)
The DNA test I took not only gives me an answer for who her rapist is, but also who
DR GENIS
Gave her these other injuries. It was all done by the same man.
DR GENIS
The data matches up to a man named Hector Wallace. When Becky wakes up, I will
DR GENIS
Need to ask a few questions
DR GENIS (talk_reassure)
The more we find out, the more we can help Becky
ANITA GANDRE
I have a strong feeling that she has been abused at home. I can't let her go back to that
ANITA GANDRE (talk_gesture)
I wanna adopt her
DR GENIS (talk_neutral)
You will have to talk to child protective services about that
ANITA GANDRE
I know, I just want her to be safe
DR GENIS
Well one thing is for sure is that she will not go back to her abuser.
@BECKY faces left AND BECKY is lay_awake_loop
ANITA GANDRE (admire)
Look, she's waking up.
@pause for a beat
@BECKY spot 0.319 116 472 AND BECKY is idle_terrified
DR GENIS (talk_neutral)
Hi Becky.
@BECKY faces left AND BECKY is cry_sob_loop
DR GENIS (talk_sad)
Poor thing is scared to death
@ANITA GANDRE faces right AND ANITA GANDRE is sit
ANITA GANDRE (talk_sit)
It's alright Becky.
DR GENIS (talk_reassure)
Everything is gonna be alright. I'm Doctor Genis. Im here to help.
DR GENIS (talk_neutral)
I need to ask you a few questions. Please answer as much as you can
ANITA GANDRE
And you are in a safe place so there is no need to be afraid
@BECKY faces left AND BECKY is nod_loop
@BECKY faces left AND BECKY is deepbreath
BECKY (cry_sniff_loop)
Ok
@BECKY faces left AND BECKY is idle_sad
DR GENIS
What was the last thing you had to eat?
BECKY (idle_sad)
I had a
if (chose_park) {
BECKY
A slice of pizza
DR GENIS (write_notepad)
I see. And where did you get this slice
BECKY (idle_sad)
Cave
DR GENIS (think)
Cave?
ANITA GANDRE (talk_gesture)
I think she means the one in the park. It's not actually a cave
DR GENIS (write_notepad)
I see. Becky, was the pizza good?
BECKY
No. I was hungry
}
elif(chose_lake) {
BECKY (idle_sad)
An apple. Found it in the attic
}
@DR GENIS faces left AND DR GENIS is write_notepad
DR GENIS (talk_gesture)
Can you tell me when you had your most recent full meal?
@BECKY faces left AND BECKY is idle_sad
BECKY
Dont know
DR GENIS (idle_sad)
Im not surpised. Her ribs are actually visible
ANITA GANDRE (dismayed)
She has been starved.
ANITA GANDRE (talk_neutral)
We have some vegetable soup left at my house. Could she eat that. I can
ANITA GANDRE
Call my mom and ask her to bring some
DR GENIS (nod_loop)
Yes. That would be good. She needs a meal thats small, but nutricious.
@DR GENIS faces left AND DR GENIS is idle
@ANITA GANDRE faces right AND ANITA GANDRE is text_phone_neutral_loop
@pause for a beat
@ANITA GANDRE faces right AND ANITA GANDRE is idle
ANITA GANDRE
My mom is on the way
DR GENIS (talk_neutral)
Excellent. Now Becky. I have one more question for your right now
@BECKY faces left AND BECKY is idle_sad
BECKY
Ok
DR GENIS (talk_neutral)
Can you tell us who Hector Wallace is?
@BECKY faces left AND BECKY is cry_sob_loop
ANITA GANDRE (talk_reassure)
Shh, it's ok Becky
DR GENIS (talk_neutral)
So you know him. Is he your Dad?
@pause for a beat
ANITA GANDRE (talk_gesture)
Will you whisper it to me?
@BECKY faces left AND BECKY is cry_sniff_loop
@BECKY faces left AND BECKY is nod_loop
@ANITA GANDRE faces right AND ANITA GANDRE is sit
@BECKY faces left AND BECKY is idle_kneel
NARRATOR
Becky whispers to her
ANITA GANDRE (idle_sad)
He is her uncle.
DR GENIS (talk_neutral)
Where are your parents?
NARRATOR
Becky whispers to Anita
ANITA GANDRE (idle_sad)
She said they died when she turned 2. She lives with her Uncle
DR GENIS (arms_crossed)
Not any more.
DR GENIS (talk_phone_neutral_loop)
Hello, yes Id like to report a child abuse case.
@pause for a beat
DR GENIS
Yes, I will send the testing results. Thank you
DR GENIS (talk_neutral)
That man will no longer harm her.
@BECKY is cry_weep_loop
ANITA GANDRE (talk_reassure)
Shh, You are safe now
@BECKY faces left AND BECKY is faint
@ANITA GANDRE faces right and ANITA GANDRE is dismayed
@transition fade out
INT. BASEMENT HALLWAY - NIGHT
@UNCLE HECTOR stands back left AND UNCLE HECTOR faces right
@UNCLE HECTOR faces right AND UNCLE HECTOR is punch_jab
@BECKY spot 0.292 224 270 AND BECKY is idle_wounded
@UNCLE HECTOR faces right AND UNCLE HECTOR is punch_jab
@BECKY spot 0.292 224 270 AND BECKY is idle_wounded
@BECKY faces left AND BECKY is cry_sob_loop
@transition fade out
INT. HOSPITAL BED - NIGHT
@cut to zone 3
@BECKY spot 0.319 10 500 AND BECKY is lay_asleep_loop
@pause for a beat
@ANITA GANDRE spot 0.840 39 229
@ANITA GANDRE faces right AND ANITA GANDRE is sit
ANITA GANDRE
Becky. Becky. Wake up sweetie
@BECKY spot 0.319 136 475 AND BECKY is cry_sob_loop
@pause for a beat
ANITA GANDRE (talk_reassure)
Shh. There there. Everything is alright
@DR GENIS enters from right to back right AND DR GENIS is walk_neutral
DR GENIS (talk_neutral)
I wanna take her temperature. Could you lay her down please
@ANITA GANDRE spot 0.840 147 225 AND ANITA GANDRE is tinker_loop_rear
ANITA GANDRE
Lie down Becky, It's alright
@BECKY spot 0.319 52 499 AND BECKY is lay_awake_loop
@ANITA GANDRE walks to spot 0.840 53 185 AND ANITA GANDRE is walk_neutral
@ANITA GANDRE faces right
@DR GENIS spot 0.840 125 184 AND DR GENIS is tinker_loop_rear
DR GENIS
Ok. We're just gonna keep that in there a few minutes. Just lay still and quiet
@DR GENIS walks to spot 0.840 222 169 AND DR GENIS is walk_neutral
@DR GENIS faces left
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat
@DR GENIS faces right AND DR GENIS is reach_kneel_rear
@pause for a beat
DR GENIS (talk_phone_neutral_loop)
Hey Nurse Lois. Could you bring me 2 damp cloths and a blanket please.
@pause for a beat
DR GENIS
Thank you
ANITA GANDRE (idle_sad)
What is her temperature?
DR GENIS (idle_sad)
105. Thats why she passed out
@BECKY faces left AND BECKY is idle_terrified
BECKY (cry_sob_loop)
Please don't hurt them Uncle Hector
DR GENIS
Uh oh, she's hallucinating. Her fever must be rising
@BECKY faces left AND BECKY is faint
@DR GENIS faces left
DR GENIS (talk_neutral)
Dont worry. She'll be alright.
@ANITA GANDRE faces right AND ANITA GANDRE is deepbreath
@ANITA GANDRE faces right AND ANITA GANDRE is idle
@DR GENIS faces left AND DR GENIS is idle
@NURSE LOIS enters from left to back left AND NURSE LOIS is walk_neutral
NURSE LOIS (talk_gesture)
Here you go Dr Genis. One blanket and some cool wash cloths
DR GENIS
Thank you
@NURSE LOIS exits right AND NURSE LOIS is walk_neutral
@DR GENIS walks to spot 0.840 119 218 AND DR GENIS is walk_neutral
DR GENIS (tinker_loop_rear)
Ok first im gonna get her head back on the pillow
@BECKY spot 0.319 10 500 AND BECKY is lay_asleep_loop
DR GENIS
Ok now I'll put the washcloth on her forehead and the blanket over her
DR GENIS (talk_neutral)
That should help bring the fever down. Im gonna go email that DNA sample.
@DR GENIS faces left AND DR GENIS is idle
ANITA GANDRE (talk_neutral)
If Becky wakes up and is scared again, can i hold her? I don’t care if I catch her fever
DR GENIS (talk_gesture)
Yes. By the way Im pretty sure her fever is caused by extreme stress. If that is so you cant catch it
@DR GENIS exits left
@ANITA GANDRE walks to spot 0.840 50 204 AND ANITA GANDRE is walk_neutral
@ANITA GANDRE faces right AND ANITA GANDRE is sit
ANITA GANDRE (talk_sit)
Rest easy Becky. You're safe now.