Help I'm stuck!

So I’m writing a story and I got kinda stuck on a complicated choice and branching and stuff. I’ll put it on here and if anyone could give me some tips that would be great! An error doesn’t show when I save it but it doesn’t play properly.

@zoom reset
INT. WARNING - BOTH
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat
@zoom reset
INT. MALL BOUTIQUE - DAY
@pan to zone 3
@zoom on 960 133 to 75% in 3
@MANEQUIN1 changes into GABRIELLA_workdressupgame
@MANNEQUIN3 changes into GABRIELLA_workdressupgame2
@MANNEQUIN2 changes into LYDIA_workdressupgame
@MANNEQUIN4 changes into LYDIA_workdressupgame2
@NATHAN spot 1.150 278 101 in zone 3 at layer 1 AND NATHAN faces left
@MANEQUIN1 spot 0.692 242 325 in zone 3 at layer 0 AND MANEQUIN1 faces right
@MANNEQUIN2 spot 0.713 180 316 in zone 3 at layer 0 AND MANNEQUIN2 faces right
@MANNEQUIN3 spot 0.739 116 304 in zone 3 at layer 0 AND MANNEQUIN3 faces right
@MANNEQUIN4 spot 0.754 48 299 in zone 3 at layer 0 AND MANNEQUIN4 faces right
@MANEQUIN1 is selfie_pose AND MANNEQUIN2 is selfie_pose AND MANNEQUIN3 is selfie_pose AND MANNEQUIN4 is selfie_pose

@DELUCA enters from left to spot 1.057 140 110 AND DELUCA does it while walk_sing_energetic_loop
@GABRIELLA enters from left to spot 1.114 -24 112 AND GABRIELLA does it while walk_runway_loop
@LYDIA enters from left to spot 1.110 -62 108 AND LYDIA does it while run_athletic_neutral_loop AND LYDIA faces right

@DELUCA faces left AND DELUCA does it while rear
@pause for a beat
@DELUCA faces right AND DELUCA does it while rear
@pause for a beat
@DELUCA faces left

    DELUCA (talk_reassure_neutral)
It looks like Nathan can take it from here.
I'll see you girls after your makeover for your first assignment

@DELUCA exits left AND DELUCA does it while walk_sing_energetic_loop

    NATHAN (react_claphands_happy)
Let's get to work!!

@GABRIELLA is react_startled_embarrassed AND LYDIA is react_startled_embarrassed

label mannequin_game
@zoom on 660 389 to 214% in 3
@zoom on 659 282 to 214% in 3
@zoom on 640 322 to 180% in 2

    NARRATOR (NATHAN)
What do you think?

choice
“Try these”{
gain try1
@pan to zone 1
@MANNEQUIN4 changes into MANEQUIN1_default
@MANNEQUIN3 changes into MANEQUIN1_default
@LYDIA changes into LYDIA_workdressupgame2
@GABRIELLA changes into GABRIELLA_workdressupgame2
@transition fade in magenta in 3
INT. BOUTIQUE - DAY
@zoom reset
@LYDIA stands screen right AND LYDIA is selfie_pose AND GABRIELLA stands screen left AND GABRIELLA is selfie_pose

}“Next”{

    NARRATOR
Ok

}
if (try1){

    NARRATOR (NATHAN)
Do you like these?

choice
“Yes”{

    LYDIA (talk_excited_happy)
I love these!

}“No”{
if (CLOTHES1 is Pink & White){
@LYDIA changes into LYDIA_default
}elif (CLOTHES1 is Leggings){
@LYDIA changes into LYDIA_clothes
}elif (CLOTHES1 is Sparkles){
@LYDIA changes into LYDIA_clothes1
}elif (CLOTHES1 is Skirt){
@LYDIA changes into LYDIA_clothes2
}elif (CLOTHES1 is Black){
@LYDIA changes into LYDIA_clothes3
}else{
@LYDIA changes into LYDIA_work1
}
@GABRIELLA changes into GABRIELLA_default
goto mannequin_game
}

}else{

    NARRATOR (LYDIA)
I wanna see the other ones.

INT. MALL BOUTIQUE - DAY
@pan to zone 3
@zoom on 960 133 to 75% in 3
@MANEQUIN1 changes into GABRIELLA_workdressupgame
@MANNEQUIN3 changes into GABRIELLA_workdressupgame2
@MANNEQUIN2 changes into LYDIA_workdressupgame
@MANNEQUIN4 changes into LYDIA_workdressupgame2
@NATHAN spot 1.150 278 101 in zone 3 at layer 1 AND NATHAN faces left
@MANEQUIN1 spot 0.692 242 325 in zone 3 at layer 0 AND MANEQUIN1 faces right
@MANNEQUIN2 spot 0.713 180 316 in zone 3 at layer 0 AND MANNEQUIN2 faces right
@MANNEQUIN3 spot 0.739 116 304 in zone 3 at layer 0 AND MANNEQUIN3 faces right
@MANNEQUIN4 spot 0.754 48 299 in zone 3 at layer 0 AND MANNEQUIN4 faces right
@MANEQUIN1 is selfie_pose AND MANNEQUIN2 is selfie_pose AND MANNEQUIN3 is selfie_pose AND MANNEQUIN4 is selfie_pose
goto mannequin_games
}

label mannequin_games
NARRATOR (NATHAN)
Right this way.

@NATHAN spot 0.891 76 249 AND NATHAN does it while walk_neutral
@NATHAN faces right AND NATHAN is idle_happy_loop
@zoom on 882 395 to 238% in 2
@zoom on 887 268 to 238% in 3
@zoom on 897 329 to 192% in 3
NARRATOR (NATHAN)
How 'bout these?

choice
“Try this”{
gain try2
@pan to zone 1
@MANEQUIN1 changes into MANEQUIN1_default
@MANNEQUIN2 changes into MANEQUIN1_default
@LYDIA changes into LYDIA_workdressupgame
@GABRIELLA changes into GABRIELLA_workdressupgame
@transition fade in magenta in 3
INT. BOUTIQUE - DAY
@zoom reset
@LYDIA stands screen right AND LYDIA faces left AND GABRIELLA stands screen left AND GABRIELLA faces right

    NARRATOR (NATHAN)
Do you like these?

choice
“Yes”{

    LYDIA (talk_excited_happy)
I love these!

    GABRIELLA (talk_agree_happy)
Me too!

}“No”{
if (CLOTHES1 is Pink & White){
@LYDIA changes into LYDIA_default
}elif (CLOTHES1 is Leggings){
@LYDIA changes into LYDIA_clothes
}elif (CLOTHES1 is Sparkles){
@LYDIA changes into LYDIA_clothes1
}elif (CLOTHES1 is Skirt){
@LYDIA changes into LYDIA_clothes2
}elif (CLOTHES1 is Black){
@LYDIA changes into LYDIA_clothes3
}else{
@LYDIA changes into LYDIA_work1
}
@GABRIELLA changes into GABRIELLA_default
goto mannequin_game
}

}“Previous”{
goto mannequin_game
}

Thanks!!

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