Dear @Danielle318,
I don’t find your story very enjoyable.
If you think about it in real life someone wouldn’t just jump off a cliff because it was a dare.
Mabye something like admitting your crush or kissing one of the girls to make it spicy.
Good Qualities:
Good idea (change cliff part)
Thriller
Bad Qualties:
Unrealistic
Not that adventurous.
Agrugement could improve.
More episodes.
Over rating:5/10
I will not be promoting this story I’m very sorry @Danielle318.