Help Me Choose A Good Plot

Hey guys. Which plot is better for me to use, it is a good thing that i wanted a review on my story to see what people think of it. So, which plot is better, and not confusing. My story is already published.

    1. Charlotte has been kidnapped by her lovers brother. Will Meier rescue her in time? Will Alaric force himself to kill Charlotte once again?
    1. Meier finds out that Charlotte has ben taken by his brother. Will he rescue her in time, and will Alaric force himself to kill Charlotte once again?

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Thx

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I’m a little confused. Aren’t they the same plot?

Maybe they meant which description for their story sounds better? :thinking:

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Of course. Silly me :joy: I just woke up!

Lol

Yep.