HELP ME I AM SO CONFUSED WRITE NOW (lmao get it write? since I'm- eh you get it)

Instead of start put is maybe

If you click the error text in the script tools area (left-hand side of the screen) it should jump up to the error

I know where it is… But I don’t understand. :stuck_out_tongue:

@GIZELLE changes into red ruler

Error: Expected character or scene change…

I have been asking for day but no answer has come up! I have an error saying there was an unexpected character or scene and that it had something to do with the line of dialog “What is this lecture for again?” but the error is marked on several lines before… Here is the script:

EXT. ISLAND BEACH - DUSK FLIPPED
@KAYLA enters from left to screen left
@KAYLA faces right
KAYLA (talk_arms_crossed_loop)
I got your backs, This is your chance to re-customise!
@pause for a beat
@KAYLA is flirt_wink_forward
@pause for a beat
@KAYLA exits right and KAYLA is talk_notepad_neutral
@GIZELLE enters from right to screen center
@GIZELLE faces right
@GIZELLE starts think
@speechbubble reset
label avatar_0
NARRATOR
So, GIZELLE, what’s your look?
choice
“Skin Tone” {
goto bodyColor_0
}
“Hair” {
goto hair_0
}
“Eyes” {
goto eyes_0
}
“Eyebrows” {
goto brows_0
}
“Face Shape”{
goto face_0
}
“Nose” {
goto nose_0
}
“Mouth” {
goto mouth_0
}
“This is perfect!” {
goto avatar_end
}

label bodyColor_0
@zoom reset

    NARRATOR
What skin color would you like?

choice
“Beige” {
@GIZELLE changes bodyColor into Beige
@GIZELLE starts idle_happy
goto bodyColor_0
}
“Olive” {
@GIZELLE changes bodyColor into Olive
@GIZELLE starts idle_happy
goto bodyColor_0
}
“Taupe”{
@GIZELLE changes bodyColor into Taupe
@GIZELLE starts idle_happy
goto bodyColor_0
}
“Mocha” {
@GIZELLE changes bodyColor into Mocha
@GIZELLE starts idle_happy
goto bodyColor_0
}
“Sable” {
@GIZELLE changes bodyColor into Sable
@GIZELLE starts idle_happy
goto bodyColor_0
}
“This looks good!”{
@GIZELLE starts cheer_loop
goto avatar_0
}“Last Page”{
goto bodyColor_2
}“Next Page”{
goto bodyColor_1
}

label bodyColor_1

    NARRATOR
What skin color would you like?

choice
“Ivory” {
#Remember to change family skin, mouth, and hair to match in each area!
@GIZELLE changes bodyColor into Ivory
@GIZELLE starts idle_happy
goto bodyColor_1
}
“Fair” {
@GIZELLE changes bodyColor into Fair
@GIZELLE starts idle_happy
goto bodyColor_1
}
“Caramel”{
@GIZELLE changes bodyColor into Caramel
@GIZELLE starts idle_happy
goto bodyColor_1
}
“Toffee” {
@GIZELLE changes bodyColor into Toffee
@GIZELLE starts idle_happy
goto bodyColor_1
}
“Dark” {
@GIZELLE changes bodyColor into Dark
@GIZELLE starts idle_happy
goto bodyColor_1
}
“This looks good!”{
@GIZELLE starts cheer_loop
goto avatar_0
}“Last Page”{
goto bodyColor_0
}“Next Page”{
goto bodyColor_2
}

label bodyColor_2

    NARRATOR
What skin color would you like?

choice
“Dune” {
#Remember to change family skin, mouth, and hair to match in each area!
@GIZELLE changes bodyColor into Dune
@GIZELLE starts idle_happy
goto bodyColor_2
}
“Light” {
@GIZELLE changes bodyColor into Light
@GIZELLE starts idle_happy
goto bodyColor_2
}
“Honey”{
@GIZELLE changes bodyColor into Honey
@GIZELLE starts idle_happy
goto bodyColor_2
}
“Umber” {
@GIZELLE changes bodyColor into Umber
@GIZELLE starts idle_happy
goto bodyColor_2
}
“Chestnut” {
@GIZELLE changes bodyColor into Chestnut
@GIZELLE starts idle_happy
goto bodyColor_2
}
“This looks good!”{
@GIZELLE starts cheer_loop
goto avatar_0
}“Last Page”{
goto bodyColor_1
}
“Next Page”{
goto bodyColor_0
}

label brows_0
@zoom reset
@zoom on 150 350 to 165% in 0
@GIZELLE starts idle_arms_crossed

    NARRATOR
What eyebrow shape would you like?

choice
“Classic Natural”{
@GIZELLE changes eyebrows into Classic Natural
goto brows_0
}“Defined Natural”{
@GIZELLE changes eyebrows into Defined Natural
goto brows_0
}“Mature Round”{
@GIZELLE changes eyebrows into Mature Round
goto brows_0
}“Seductive Arch”{
@GIZELLE changes eyebrows into Seductive Arch
goto brows_0
}“Seductive Round”{
@GIZELLE changes eyebrows into Seductive Round
goto brows_0
}“Thick Flat”{
@GIZELLE changes eyebrows into Thick Flat
goto brows_0
}“Thin Round”{
@GIZELLE changes eyebrows into Thin Round
goto brows_0
} “Looks good!”{
goto avatar_0
}

label face_0
@zoom reset
@zoom on 150 350 to 165% in 0
@GIZELLE starts idle_happy

    NARRATOR
What face shape would you like?

choice
“Defined Heart” {
@GIZELLE changes face into Defined Heart
goto face_0
}
“Defined Round” {
@GIZELLE changes face into Defined Round
goto face_0
}
“Diamond” {
@GIZELLE changes face into Diamond
goto face_0
}
“Oval” {
@GIZELLE changes face into Oval
goto face_0
}
“Round” {
@GIZELLE changes face into Round
goto face_0
}
“Soft Heart” {
@GIZELLE changes face into Soft Heart
goto face_0
}
“Square” {
@GIZELLE changes face into Square
goto face_0
}
“Looks good!”{
goto avatar_0
}

label eyes_0
@GIZELLE starts idle
@zoom reset
@zoom on 150 350 to 165% in 0

    NARRATOR
What eye shape would you like?

choice
“Mature Round” {
@GIZELLE changes eyes into Mature Round
goto eyes_0
}
“Round Luxe” {
@GIZELLE changes eyes into Round Luxe
goto eyes_0
}
“Slender Natural” {
@GIZELLE changes eyes into Slender Natural
goto eyes_0
}
“Upturned Bold” {
@GIZELLE changes eyes into Upturned Bold
goto eyes_0
}
“Upturned Feline” {
@GIZELLE changes eyes into Upturned Feline
goto eyes_0
}
“Upturned Luxe” {
@GIZELLE changes eyes into Upturned Luxe
goto eyes_0
}
“Select a color.”{
goto eyesColor_0
}
“Looks good!”{
goto avatar_0
}

label eyesColor_0
@GIZELLE starts idle

    NARRATOR
What color should your eyes be?

choice
“Auburn”{
@GIZELLE changes eyesColor into Auburn
goto eyesColor_0
}“Black”{
@GIZELLE changes eyesColor into Hickory
goto eyesColor_0
}“Blue” {
@GIZELLE changes eyesColor into Blue
goto eyesColor_0
}
“Brown” {
@GIZELLE changes eyesColor into Brown
goto eyesColor_0
}
“Green” {
@GIZELLE changes eyesColor into Green
goto eyesColor_0
}“Grey” {
@GIZELLE changes eyesColor into Black
goto eyesColor_0
}
“Looks good!”{
goto avatar_0
}

label mouth_0
@zoom reset
@zoom on 150 350 to 165% in 0
@GIZELLE starts idle

    NARRATOR
What mouth shape would you like?

choice
“Blossom Lips” {
@GIZELLE changes mouth into Blossom Lips
@GIZELLE starts shush
goto mouth_0
}“Classic” {
@GIZELLE changes mouth into Classic
@GIZELLE starts shush
goto mouth_0
}“Classic Slender” {
@GIZELLE changes mouth into Classic Slender
@GIZELLE starts shush
goto mouth_0
}“Full Round” {
@GIZELLE changes mouth into Full Round
@GIZELLE starts shush
goto mouth_0
}“Mature Medium” {
@GIZELLE changes mouth into Mature Medium
@GIZELLE starts shush
goto mouth_0
}“Thick” {
@GIZELLE changes mouth into Thick
@GIZELLE starts shush
goto mouth_0
}“Select color.”{
goto mouthColor_0
}
“Looks good!”{
goto avatar_0
}

label mouthColor_0

    NARRATOR
What color lips would you like?

choice
“Blush” {
@GIZELLE changes mouthColor into Blush
goto mouthColor_0
}“Champagne” {
@GIZELLE changes mouthColor into Champagne
goto mouthColor_0
}“Olive” {
@GIZELLE changes mouthColor into Olive
goto mouthColor_0
}“Toffee” {
@GIZELLE changes mouthColor into Toffee
goto mouthColor_0
}“Taupe”{
@GIZELLE changes mouthColor into Taupe
goto mouthColor_0
}“Looks good!”{
goto avatar_0
}“Change lip shape.”{
goto mouth_0
}“Next Page.”{
goto mouthColor_1
}

label mouthColor_1

    NARRATOR
What color lips would you like?

choice
“Mocha” {
@GIZELLE changes mouthColor into Mocha
goto mouthColor_1
}“Rosewood” {
@GIZELLE changes mouthColor into Rosewood
goto mouthColor_1
}“Dark” {
@GIZELLE changes mouthColor into Dark
goto mouthColor_1
}“Chestnut” {
@GIZELLE changes mouthColor into Chestnut
goto mouthColor_1
}“Sable”{
@GIZELLE changes mouthColor into Sable
goto mouthColor_1
}“Looks good!”{
goto avatar_0
}“Change lip shape.”{
goto mouth_0
}“Next Page.”{
goto mouthColor_2
}

label mouthColor_2

    NARRATOR
What color lips would you like?

choice
“Bubblegum Pink” {
@GIZELLE changes mouthColor into Bubblegum Pink
goto mouthColor_2
}“Orange Crush” {
@GIZELLE changes mouthColor into Orange Crush
goto mouthColor_2
}“Rose”{
@GIZELLE changes mouthColor into Rose
goto mouthColor_2
}“Raspberry”{
@GIZELLE changes mouthColor into Raspberry
goto mouthColor_2
}“Cherry Red”{
@GIZELLE changes mouthColor into Cherry Red
goto mouthColor_2
}“Looks good!”{
goto avatar_0
}“Change lip shape.”{
goto mouth_0
}“Next Page.”{
goto mouthColor_3
}

label mouthColor_3

    NARRATOR
What color lips would you like?

choice
“Dusty Rose”{
@GIZELLE changes mouthColor into Dusty Rose
goto mouthColor_3
}“Bordeaux” {
@GIZELLE changes mouthColor into Bordeaux
goto mouthColor_3
}“Wine” {
@GIZELLE changes mouthColor into Wine
goto mouthColor_3
}“Scarlet” {
@GIZELLE changes mouthColor into Scarlet
goto mouthColor_3
}“Plum” {
@GIZELLE changes mouthColor into Plum
goto mouthColor_3
}“Looks good!”{
goto avatar_0
}“Change lip shape.”{
goto mouth_0
}“Next Page.”{
goto mouthColor_4
}

label mouthColor_4

    NARRATOR
What lip color would you like?

choice
“Lavender”{
@GIZELLE changes mouthColor into Lavender
goto mouthColor_4
}“Sea Foam” {
@GIZELLE changes mouthColor into Seafoam
goto mouthColor_4
}“Sky Blue” {
@GIZELLE changes mouthColor into Sky Blue
goto mouthColor_4
}“Emerald” {
@GIZELLE changes mouthColor into Emerald
goto mouthColor_4
}“Azure” {
@GIZELLE changes mouthColor into Azure
goto mouthColor_4
}“Looks good!”{
goto avatar_0
}“Change lip shape.”{
goto mouth_0
}“First Page.”{
goto mouthColor_0
}

label hair_0
@zoom reset
@zoom on 150 350 to 165% in 0

    NARRATOR
Which hair style would you like?

choice
“Buzzed”{
@GIZELLE changes hair into Buzzed Hair
@GIZELLE starts primp_condescend
goto hair_0
}“Short Shaved Sides” {
@GIZELLE changes hair into Shaved Sides
@GIZELLE starts primp_condescend
goto hair_0
}“Messy Pixie” {
@GIZELLE changes hair into Messy Pixie
@GIZELLE starts primp_condescend
goto hair_0
}“Slicked Back” {
@GIZELLE changes hair into Long Slicked Back Hair
@GIZELLE starts primp_condescend
goto hair_0
}“Twist Hair” {
@GIZELLE changes hair into Twist Hair
@GIZELLE starts primp_condescend
goto hair_0
}“This looks good!”{
goto avatar_0
}“Change Color.”{
goto label hairColor_0
}“More Styles.”{
goto hair_1
}

label hair_1

    NARRATOR
Which hair style would you like?

choice
“Bed head” {
@GIZELLE changes hair into Shaggy Long Hair
@GIZELLE starts primp_condescend
goto hair_1
}“Faux Hawk”{
@GIZELLE changes hair into Long Faux Hawk
@GIZELLE starts primp_condescend
goto hair_1
}“Classic Bob” {
@GIZELLE changes hair into Classic Bob
@GIZELLE starts primp_condescend
goto hair_1
}“Dreadlocks” {
@GIZELLE changes hair into Long Dreadlocks
@GIZELLE starts primp_condescend
goto hair_1
}“Straight Bob” {
@GIZELLE changes hair into Straight Bob
@GIZELLE starts primp_condescend
goto hair_1
}“This looks good!”{
goto avatar_0
}“Change Color.”{
goto label hairColor_0
}“More Styles.”{
goto hair_2
}

label hair_2

    NARRATOR
Which hair style would you like?

choice
“Layered Hair” {
@GIZELLE changes hair into Layered Hair
@GIZELLE starts primp_condescend
goto hair_2
}“Long Feathered” {
@GIZELLE changes hair into Long Feathered
@GIZELLE starts primp_condescend
goto hair_2
}“Long Straight Hair” {
@GIZELLE changes hair into Long Straight Hair
@GIZELLE starts primp_condescend
goto hair_2
}“Straight” {
@GIZELLE changes hair into Straight
@GIZELLE starts primp_condescend
goto hair_2
}“Long Braids” {
@GIZELLE changes hair into Long Braids
@GIZELLE starts primp_condescend
goto hair_2
}“This looks good!”{
goto avatar_0
}“Change Color.”{
goto label hairColor_0
}“More Styles.”{
goto hair_3
}
label hair_3

    NARRATOR
Which hair style would you like?

choice
“Natural Curls”{
@GIZELLE changes hair into Natural Curls
@GIZELLE starts primp_condescend
goto hair_3
}“Beach Wave” {
@GIZELLE changes hair into Beach Wave Hair
@GIZELLE starts primp_condescend
goto hair_3
}“Diva Curls” {
@GIZELLE changes hair into Diva Curls
@GIZELLE starts primp_condescend
goto hair_3
}“Long Curly Hair” {
@GIZELLE changes hair into Long Curly Hair
@GIZELLE starts primp_condescend
goto hair_3
}“Rebel Half Shaved” {
@GIZELLE changes hair into Rebel Half Shaved Hairstyle
@GIZELLE starts primp_condescend
goto hair_3
}“This looks good!”{
goto avatar_0
}“Change Color.”{
goto label hairColor_0
}“More Styles.”{
goto hair_4
}

label hair_4

    NARRATOR
Which hair style would you like?

choice
“Casual Braided Pigtails” {
@GIZELLE changes hair into Casual Braided Pigtails
@GIZELLE starts primp_condescend
goto hair_4
}“Styled Corn Rows” {
@GIZELLE changes hair into Styled Corn Rows
@GIZELLE starts primp_condescend
goto hair_4
}“Messy Back Bun” {
@GIZELLE changes hair into Messy Back Bun
@GIZELLE starts primp_condescend
goto hair_4
}“Pulled Back”{
@GIZELLE changes hair into Monday Morning Updo
@GIZELLE starts primp_condescend
goto hair_4
}“Urban Punk Ponytail”{
@GIZELLE changes hair into Urban Punk Ponytail
@GIZELLE starts primp_condescend
goto hair_4
}“This looks good!”{
goto avatar_0
}“Change Color.”{
goto label hairColor_0
}“More Styles.”{
goto hair_5
}

label hair_5
NARRATOR
Which hair style would you like?

choice
“Cornrow Bun” {
@GIZELLE changes hair into Cornrow Bun
@GIZELLE starts primp_condescend
goto hair_5
}“High Ponytail” {
@GIZELLE changes hair into High Ponytail
@GIZELLE starts primp_condescend
goto hair_4
}“Suburban Bubble” {
@GIZELLE changes hair into Suburban Bubble
@GIZELLE starts primp_condescend
goto hair_1
}“Short Curly Hair” {
@GIZELLE changes hair into Short Curly Hair
@GIZELLE starts primp_condescend
goto hair_3
}“Ponytail Locks”{
@GIZELLE changes hair into Ponytail Locks
@GIZELLE starts primp_condescend
goto hair_5
}“This looks good!”{
goto avatar_0
}“Change Color.”{
goto label hairColor_0
}“First Styles.”{
goto hair_0
}

label hairColor_0

    NARRATOR
What hair color would you like?

choice
“Auburn” {
@GIZELLE changes hairColor into Auburn
goto hairColor_0
}“Black” {
@GIZELLE changes hairColor into Charcoal
goto hairColor_0
}“Blond” {
@GIZELLE changes hairColor into Blond
goto hairColor_0
}“Chestnut”{
@GIZELLE changes hairColor into Chestnut
goto hairColor_0
}“Fawn” {
@GIZELLE changes hairColor into Fawn
goto hairColor_0
}“Looks good!”{
goto avatar_0
}“Back To Styles.”{
goto hair_0
}“More Colors”{
goto hairColor_1
}

label hairColor_1

    NARRATOR
What hair color would you like?

choice
“Mint” {
@GIZELLE changes hairColor into Mint
goto hairColor_1
}“Blue” {
@GIZELLE changes hairColor into Blasting Blue
goto hairColor_1
}“Pink” {
@GIZELLE changes hairColor into Pop Pink
goto hairColor_1
}“Grey”{
@GIZELLE changes hairColor into Grey
goto hairColor_1
}“Purple” {
@GIZELLE changes hairColor into Punky Purple
goto hairColor_1
}“Looks good!”{
goto avatar_0
}“Back To Styles.”{
goto hair_0
}“More Colors”{
goto hairColor_0
}

label nose_0
@zoom reset
@zoom on 150 350 to 165% in 0

    NARRATOR
What nose would you like?

choice
“Bulb” {
@GIZELLE changes nose into Bulb
@GIZELLE starts idle
goto nose_0
}
“Elven” {
@GIZELLE changes nose into Elven
@GIZELLE starts idle
goto nose_0
}
“Grecian” {
@GIZELLE changes nose into Grecian
@GIZELLE starts idle
goto nose_0
}
“Mature Round” {
@GIZELLE changes nose into Mature Round
@GIZELLE starts idle
goto nose_0
}
“Refined” {
@GIZELLE changes nose into Refined
@GIZELLE starts idle
goto nose_0
}
“Roman” {
@GIZELLE changes nose into Roman
@GIZELLE starts idle
goto nose_0
}
“Round” {
@GIZELLE changes nose into Round
@GIZELLE starts idle
goto nose_0
}
“Looks great!”{
goto avatar_0
}

label avatar_end
@zoom reset
&GIZELLE exits left AND GIZELLE is walk_neutral_offset
@transition fade out black
INT. PROTAG ROYAL BEDROOM - DAY
@transition fade in black
&cut to zone 2
&GIZELLE stands at screen left
if (uni_form is “Red Ruler” {
&GIZELLE changes into Red Ruler
gain Red Ruler
}
elif (uni_form is “Golden Glory”{
&GIZELLE changes into Golden Glory
gain Golden Glory
}
elif (uni_form is “Blue Beauty”{
&GIZELLE changes into Blue Beauty
gain Blue Beauty
}
&LADY ALGROVE stands screen center and LADY ALVIRA stands screen right
&GIZELLE is talk_shrug and GIZELLE faces right
&LADY ALGROVE is talk_handsonhips and LADY ALGROVE faces left
&LADY ALVIRA is talk_sheepish and LADY ALVIRA faces left

    GIZELLE (talk_think)
What is this lecture for again?

@LADY ALVIRA is laugh_giggle
LADY ALGROVE (talk_airquotes)
This “lecture” is themed around ettiquete!

@GIZELLE is laugh_crack_up and LADY ALGROVE is shocked and LADY ALVIRA is dismayed
@LADY ALVIRA is laugh_giggle and LADY ALGROVE is eyeroll_subtle
GIZELLE (talk_sheepish)
That was awful wasn’t it?

    LADY ALGROVE (talk_awkward)
Yes, A little bit emmalyn..

    GIZELLE (disappointed)
Okay, let's start already!

    LADY ALGROVE (talk_handsonhips)
Alright

    LADY ALGROVE (talk_gesture)
How would you like to be adressed if you were announced?

label lecture
NARRATOR
Choose wisely
choice “Princess Emmalyn” {
GIZELLE (talk_primp_condescend)
I would be announced as “Princess Emmalyn”
I want people to know who I am without having to think about it…

    LADY ALGROVE (talk_flirt)
Smart and pretty..
Is there anything your not?

@zoom on GIZELLE to 200% in 1
GIZELLE (talk_gossip)
Fake.
@GIZELLE is kiss_blow
@pause for a beat
@zoom on LADY ALGROVE to 400% in 1

    LADY ALGROVE (idle_jawdrop)
DAMMMMMNNN!

@zoom reset
GIZELLE (laugh_chuckle)
Okay, Enough messing around…

@LADY ALGROVE is curtsey and LADY ALVIRA is curtsey and GIZELLE is dustoff_loop

    LADY ALGROVE (talk_handsonhips)
Are you sure this is the title you wish to be adressed as?

choice “Yes” {
GIZELLE (talk_gesture)
Yes, I wish to be Princess emmalyn!
GIZELLE (talk_handsonhips)
This is what I know

gain Princess_emmalyn
} “No” {
GIZELLE (talk_awkward)
No… I need to rethink!
goto lecture
}

} “The Forgotten queen” {
GIZELLE (talk_primp_condescend)
I would be announced as “The Forgotten queen”
I want people to have to think for a second when they hear me… I shall always be remembered…

    LADY ALGROVE (talk_flirt)
Creative and Inspiring..
Is there anything your not?

@zoom on GIZELLE to 200% in 1
GIZELLE (talk_gossip)
Boring…

@GIZELLE is kiss_blow
@pause for a beat
@zoom on LADY ALGROVE to 150% in 1

    LADY ALVIRA (idle_jawdrop)
Damn, Someone call the fire fighters...
    LADY ALGROVE (idle_jawdrop)
Yeah, Cause I just got roasted!

@zoom reset
GIZELLE (laugh_chuckle)
Okay, Enough messing around…

@LADY ALGROVE is curtsey and LADY ALVIRA is curtsey and GIZELLE is dustoff_loop

    LADY ALGROVE (talk_handsonhips)
Are you sure this is the title you wish to be adressed as?

choice “Yes” {
GIZELLE (talk_gesture)
Yes, I wish to be The forgotten queen!
GIZELLE (talk_handsonhips)
This is what I know

gain The_forgotten_queen
} “No” {
GIZELLE (talk_awkward)
No… I need to rethink!
goto lecture
}
} “Her royal highness” {
GIZELLE (talk_primp_condescend)
I would be announced as “Her royal highness”
I just want something classic.

    LADY ALGROVE (talk_flirt)
Classy and regal
Is there anything your not?

@zoom on GIZELLE to 200% in 1
GIZELLE (talk_gossip)
Trash…

@GIZELLE is kiss_blow
@pause for a beat
@zoom on LADY ALGROVE to 150% in 1

    LADY ALVIRA (idle_jawdrop)
Oh my...
    LADY ALGROVE (idle_jawdrop)
Well of course not your highness, uh Emmalyn..

@zoom reset
GIZELLE (laugh_chuckle)
Okay, Enough joking around…

@LADY ALGROVE is curtsey and LADY ALVIRA is curtsey and GIZELLE is dustoff_loop

    LADY ALGROVE (talk_handsonhips)
Are you sure this is the title you wish to be adressed as?

choice “Yes” {
GIZELLE (talk_gesture)
Yes, I wish to be Her Royal highness!
GIZELLE (talk_handsonhips)
This is a fact!

gain Her_Royal_highness
} “No” {
GIZELLE (talk_awkward)
No… I need to rethink!
goto lecture
}
} “Emmalyn” {
GIZELLE (talk_primp_condescend)
I would be announced as “Emmalyn”
I like people having a small secret reminder of my lineage…

    LADY ALGROVE (talk_flirt)
Thoughtful as ever..
Is there anything your not?

@zoom on GIZELLE to 200% in 1
GIZELLE (talk_gossip)
Inconsiderate

@GIZELLE is kiss_blow
@pause for a beat
@zoom on LADY ALGROVE to 150% in 1

    LADY ALVIRA (idle_jawdrop)
Someone give LADY ALGROVE a book and pencil..
    LADY ALGROVE (idle_jawdrop)
Yeah, Cause I just got schooled..

@zoom reset
GIZELLE (laugh_chuckle)
Okay, Enough roasting…
GIZELLE (talk_airquotes)
for now!

@LADY ALGROVE is curtsey and LADY ALVIRA is curtsey and GIZELLE is dustoff_loop

    LADY ALGROVE (talk_handsonhips)
Are you sure this is the title you wish to be adressed as?

choice “Yes” {
GIZELLE (talk_gesture)
Yes, I wish to just be Emmalyn!
GIZELLE (talk_handsonhips)
This is what I know

gain Emmalyn
} “No” {
GIZELLE (talk_awkward)
No… I need to rethink!
goto lecture
}
} “I need no title” {
GIZELLE (talk_primp_condescend)
I would be announced as however they shall please…
For years, The people went without a name of their forgotten princess…
GIZELLE (talk_sheepish)
The least I could do is make sure they feel safe around me…
GIZELLE (talk_handsonhips)
That starts with my name!

    LADY ALGROVE (talk_flirt)
Thoughtful, Considerate and sweet!
Is there anything your not?

@zoom on GIZELLE to 200% in 1
GIZELLE (talk_gossip)
Strict

@GIZELLE is kiss_blow
@pause for a beat
@zoom on LADY ALGROVE to 150% in 1

    LADY ALVIRA (idle_jawdrop)
Wow, Your amazing emmalyn!
    LADY ALGROVE (idle_jawdrop)
You only just realised that Alvira?

@zoom reset
GIZELLE (laugh_chuckle)
Okay, Enough messing around…
GIZELLE (talk_gossip)
For now…
@LADY ALVIRA is laugh_chuckle and LADY ALGROVE is laugh_crack_up and GIZELLE is laugh_giggle
@pause for 3
@LADY ALGROVE is curtsey and LADY ALVIRA is curtsey and GIZELLE is dustoff_loop

    LADY ALGROVE (talk_handsonhips)
Are you sure this is the title you wish to be adressed as?

choice “Yes” {
GIZELLE (talk_gesture)
Yes, I wish to be announced however!
GIZELLE (talk_handsonhips)
This is what I know

gain No_title
} “No” {
GIZELLE (talk_awkward)
No… I need to rethink!
goto lecture
}
} “Her grace” {
GIZELLE (talk_primp_condescend)
I would be announced as “Her grace”
I want it short and simple…

    LADY ALGROVE (talk_flirt)
Time efficient and gorgeous..
Is there anything your not?

@zoom on GIZELLE to 200% in 1
GIZELLE (talk_gossip)
A waste of space…

@GIZELLE is kiss_blow
@pause for a beat
@zoom on LADY ALGROVE to 150% in 1

    LADY ALVIRA (idle_jawdrop)
Damn! Algrove do you need an icepack?
    LADY ALGROVE (idle_jawdrop)
Yes and DAMMMMMMMMNNNNN is right!

@zoom reset
@GIZELLE is laugh_chuckle and LADY ALGROVE is laugh_guffaw and LADY ALVIRA is laugh_giggle
GIZELLE (laugh_chuckle)
Okay, Enough messing around…

@LADY ALGROVE is curtsey and LADY ALVIRA is curtsey and GIZELLE is dustoff_loop

    LADY ALGROVE (talk_handsonhips)
Are you sure this is the title you wish to be adressed as?

choice “Yes” {
GIZELLE (talk_gesture)
Yes, I wish to be Her grace!
GIZELLE (talk_handsonhips)
This is what I know

gain Her_grace
} “No” {
GIZELLE (talk_awkward)
No… I need to rethink!
goto lecture
}
} “The first princess” {
GIZELLE (talk_primp_condescend)
I would be announced as “The First princess”
I want people to know who I am without having to think about it…

    LADY ALGROVE (talk_flirt)
Creative and Inspiring..
Is there anything your not?

@zoom on GIZELLE to 200% in 1
GIZELLE (talk_gossip)
Boring…

@GIZELLE is kiss_blow
@pause for a beat
@zoom on LADY ALGROVE to 150% in 1

    LADY ALVIRA (idle_jawdrop)
Damn, Someone call the fire fighters...
    LADY ALGROVE (idle_jawdrop)
Yeah, Cause I just got roasted!

@zoom reset
GIZELLE (laugh_chuckle)
Okay, Enough messing around…

@LADY ALGROVE is curtsey and LADY ALVIRA is curtsey and GIZELLE is dustoff_loop

    LADY ALGROVE (talk_handsonhips)
Are you sure this is the title you wish to be adressed as?

choice “Yes” {
GIZELLE (talk_gesture)
Yes, I wish to be The first princess!
GIZELLE (talk_handsonhips)
This is what I know

gain The_first_princess
} “No” {
GIZELLE (talk_awkward)
No… I need to rethink!
goto lecture
}

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Hi sorry I can’t help you I will tagg people who maybe can help ^^

@Teahwalker @JemU776 @meadowh @DEACTIVATED

Okay… Thankyou…

Which part have the error?

&GIZELLE changes into red ruler

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Use @ instead of &:
@CHARACTER changes into outfit
I don’t think that you can use this sign with this code :thinking:

It has worked before… And I need her already changed… :stuck_out_tongue:

But you can try this and see if this works :wink::
Use @ instead of & :
@CHARACTER changes into outfit

Didn’t work

at the 816 line try to change “lecture” into ‘lecture’

and maybe your red ruler outfit wasn’t saved?

Nope…

wait, did you put background? cause at the 807 line you placed your characters but i can’t see a background

Yeah…

INT. ROYAL BEDROOM - DAY is the one I used…