Help me improve my story (pls)

I was wondering if anyone was interested in reading my story and offering advice cuz I desperately need it.

Title: Dead
Genre: Mystery
Style: Limelight
Status: Ongoing (episodes 1 to 3 are out)
Description: After a series of eerie dreams and visions, Charlie and Alex are on a mission to figure out what happened to their memories. Hopefully they don’t end up dead…
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Link:
https//bit.ly/EpisodeHere episode Episode Writer Portal

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