Help me please! It's my first story and I need help!

Ok. How could we do that? Sorry I’m still new to this stuff

You could just get rid of some of and “@” signs and names and I could put them where they’re suppose to go so that you can send me that section of your script.

Alright

Avatar - Limelight Female {

MC changes into Last Summer
&MC enters from left to screen center

Avatar - Limelight Female {

&MC enters from left to screen center

############################ AVATAR CREATOR ####################################
label avatar

zoom reset
MC starts think_rubchin
speechbubble reset

    NARRATOR
So, [FIRST NAME], what's your look?

choice
“Skin Tone” {
MC starts idle_happy_loop
goto bodyColor
}
“Hair” {

zoom reset
zoom on 150 350 to 165% in 0
MC starts idle_happy_loop

goto hair
}
“Eyes” {

MC starts idle
zoom reset
zoom on 150 350 to 165% in 0

goto eyes
}
“Eyebrows” {

zoom reset
zoom on 150 350 to 165% in 0
MC starts idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop

goto brows
}
“Face Shape”{

zoom reset
zoom on 150 350 to 165% in 0
MC starts idle_happy_loop

goto face
}
“Nose” {
zoom reset
zoom on 150 350 to 165% in 0
MC starts idle

goto nose
}
“Mouth” {

zoom reset
zoom on 150 350 to 165% in 0
MC starts idle

goto mouth
}
“This is perfect!” {
goto avatar_end
}

################################ SKIN COLOR ####################################
label bodyColor
zoom reset
#If MC has siblings or parents, place them off screen here EG:

SIBLING stands screen center in zone 4

#Then in each skin color, change their skin color as well
#Be sure to remove them at the end.

    NARRATOR
What skin color would you like?

choice [shouldPaginate:YES]
“Neutral” {
goto bodyColor_Neutral
}
“Rose” {
goto bodyColor_Rose
}
“Gold” {
goto bodyColor_Gold
}
“Copper” {
goto bodyColor_Copper
}
“Ash” {
goto bodyColor_Ash
}
“This looks good!”{
goto avatar
}

label bodyColor_Neutral

    NARRATOR
What skin color would you like?

choice [shouldPaginate:YES]
“Neutral 0” {
MC changes bodyColor into Neutral 00
goto bodyColor_Neutral
}
“Neutral 1” {
MC changes bodyColor into Neutral 01
goto bodyColor_Neutral
}
“Neutral 2” {
MC changes bodyColor into Neutral 2
goto bodyColor_Neutral
}
“Neutral 3” {
MC changes bodyColor into Neutral 03
goto bodyColor_Neutral
}
“Neutral 4” {
MC changes bodyColor into Neutral 04
goto bodyColor_Neutral
}
“Neutral 5” {
MC changes bodyColor into Neutral 05
goto bodyColor_Neutral
}
“Neutral 6” {
MC changes bodyColor into Neutral 06
goto bodyColor_Neutral
}
“Neutral 7” {
MC changes bodyColor into Neutral 07
goto bodyColor_Neutral
}
“Neutral 8” {
MC changes bodyColor into Neutral 08
goto bodyColor_Neutral
}
“Neutral 9” {
MC changes bodyColor into Neutral 9
goto bodyColor_Neutral
}
“Neutral 10” {
MC changes bodyColor into Neutral 10
goto bodyColor_Neutral
}
“More Colors” {
goto bodyColor
}
“This looks good!”{
goto avatar
}

label bodyColor_Rose

    NARRATOR
What skin color would you like?

choice [shouldPaginate:YES]
“Rose 0” {
MC changes bodyColor into Rose 00
goto bodyColor_Rose
}
“Rose 1” {
MC changes bodyColor into Rose 01
goto bodyColor_Rose
}
“Rose 2” {
MC changes bodyColor into Rose 02
goto bodyColor_Rose
}
“Rose 3” {
MC changes bodyColor into Rose 03
goto bodyColor_Rose
}
“Rose 4” {
MC changes bodyColor into Rose 4
goto bodyColor_Rose
}
“Rose 5” {
MC changes bodyColor into Rose 05
goto bodyColor_Rose
}
“Rose 6” {
MC changes bodyColor into Rose 06
goto bodyColor_Rose
}
“Rose 7” {
MC changes bodyColor into Rose 07
goto bodyColor_Rose
}
“Rose 8” {
MC changes bodyColor into Rose 08
goto bodyColor_Rose
}
“Rose 9” {
MC changes bodyColor into Rose 9
goto bodyColor_Rose
}
“Rose 10” {
MC changes bodyColor into Rose 10
goto bodyColor_Rose
} “More Colors” {
goto bodyColor
}
“This looks good!”{
goto avatar
}

label bodyColor_Gold

    NARRATOR
What skin color would you like?

choice [shouldPaginate:YES]
“Gold 0” {
MC changes bodyColor into Gold 00
goto bodyColor_Gold
}
“Gold 1” {
MC changes bodyColor into Gold 01
goto bodyColor_Gold
}
“Gold 2” {
MC changes bodyColor into Gold 02
goto bodyColor_Gold
}
“Gold 3” {
MC changes bodyColor into Gold 03
goto bodyColor_Gold
}
“Gold 4” {
MC changes bodyColor into Gold 04
goto bodyColor_Gold
}
“Gold 5” {
MC changes bodyColor into Gold 05
goto bodyColor_Gold
}
“Gold 6” {
MC changes bodyColor into Gold 6
goto bodyColor_Gold
}
“Gold 7” {
MC changes bodyColor into Gold 07
goto bodyColor_Gold
}
“Gold 8” {
MC changes bodyColor into Gold 08
goto bodyColor_Gold
}
“Gold 9” {
MC changes bodyColor into Gold 09
goto bodyColor_Gold
}
“Gold 10” {
MC changes bodyColor into Gold 10
goto bodyColor_Gold
} “More Colors” {
goto bodyColor
}
“This looks good!”{
goto avatar
}

label bodyColor_Copper

    NARRATOR
What skin color would you like?

choice [shouldPaginate:YES]
“Copper 0” {
MC changes bodyColor into Copper 00
goto bodyColor_Copper
}
“Copper 1” {
MC changes bodyColor into Copper 01
goto bodyColor_Copper
}
“Copper 2” {
MC changes bodyColor into Copper 02
goto bodyColor_Copper
}
“Copper 3” {
MC changes bodyColor into Copper 03
goto bodyColor_Copper
}
“Copper 4” {
@MC changes bodyColor into Copper 04
goto bodyColor_Copper
}
“Copper 5” {
@MC changes bodyColor into Copper 05
goto bodyColor_Copper
}
“Copper 6” {
@MC changes bodyColor into Copper 06
goto bodyColor_Copper
}
“Copper 7” {
@MC changes bodyColor into Copper 07
goto bodyColor_Copper
}
“Copper 8” {
@MC changes bodyColor into Copper 08
goto bodyColor_Copper
}
“Copper 9” {
@MC changes bodyColor into Copper 09
goto bodyColor_Copper
}
“Copper 10” {
@MC changes bodyColor into Copper 10
goto bodyColor_Copper
} “More Colors” {
goto bodyColor
}
“This looks good!”{
goto avatar
}

label bodyColor_Ash

    NARRATOR
What skin color would you like?

choice [shouldPaginate:YES]
“Ash 0” {
@MC changes bodyColor into Ash 00
goto bodyColor_Ash
}
“Ash 1” {
@MC changes bodyColor into Ash 01
goto bodyColor_Ash
}
“Ash 2” {
@MC changes bodyColor into Ash 02
goto bodyColor_Ash
}
“Ash 3” {
@MC changes bodyColor into Ash 03
goto bodyColor_Ash
}
“Ash 4” {
@MC changes bodyColor into Ash 04
goto bodyColor_Ash
}
“Ash 5” {
@MC changes bodyColor into Ash 05
goto bodyColor_Ash
}
“Ash 6” {
@MC changes bodyColor into Ash 06
goto bodyColor_Ash
}
“Ash 7” {
@MC changes bodyColor into Ash 07
goto bodyColor_Ash
}
“Ash 8” {
@MC changes bodyColor into Ash 08
goto bodyColor_Ash
}
“Ash 9” {
@MC changes bodyColor into Ash 09
goto bodyColor_Ash
}
“Ash 10” {
@MC changes bodyColor into Ash 10
goto bodyColor_Ash
} “More Colors” {
goto bodyColor
}
“This looks good!”{
goto avatar
}

################################ EYEBROWS #####################################
label brows

    NARRATOR
What eyebrow shape would you like?

choice [shouldPaginate:YES]
“Arched Natural”{
@MC changes eyebrows into Arched Natural
goto brows
}“Arched Thick”{
@MC changes eyebrows into Arched Thick Styled
goto brows
}“Arched Thin”{
@MC changes eyebrows into Arched Thin
goto brows
}“Round Medium”{
@MC changes eyebrows into Round Medium
goto brows
}“Round Thick”{
@MC changes eyebrows into Round Thick
goto brows
}“Round Thin”{
@MC changes eyebrows into Round Thin High
goto brows
}“Straight Medium”{
@MC changes eyebrows into Straight Medium
goto brows
} “Change color.” {
goto browsColor
} “Looks good!”{
goto avatar
}

label browsColor

    NARRATOR
What eyebrow color would you like?

choice [shouldPaginate:YES]
“Dark Black”{
@MC changes eyebrowsColor into Black Dark
goto browsColor
}“Jet Black”{
@MC changes eyebrowsColor into blackJet
goto browsColor
}“Dirty Blonde”{
@MC changes eyebrowsColor into Dirty Blonde
goto browsColor
}“Honey Blonde”{
@MC changes eyebrowsColor into Honey Blonde
goto browsColor
}“Medium Blonde”{
@MC changes eyebrowsColor into Blonde Medium
goto browsColor
}“Platinum Blonde”{
@MC changes eyebrowsColor into Platinum Blonde
goto browsColor
}“Strawberry Blonde”{
@MC changes eyebrowsColor into Strawberry Blonde
goto browsColor
}“Chestnut Brown”{
@MC changes eyebrowsColor into Chestnut Brown
goto browsColor
}“Dark Brown”{
@MC changes eyebrowsColor into Dark Brown
goto browsColor
}“Deep Brown”{
@MC changes eyebrowsColor into Deep Brown
goto browsColor
}“Light Brown”{
@MC changes eyebrowsColor into Light Brown
goto browsColor
}“Medium Brown”{
@MC changes eyebrowsColor into Medium Warm Brown
goto browsColor
}“Copper Red”{
@MC changes eyebrowsColor into Copper Red
goto browsColor
}“Ginger Red”{
@MC changes eyebrowsColor into Ginger Red
goto browsColor
}“Mint Green”{
@MC changes eyebrowsColor into Green Mint
goto browsColor
}“Light Pink”{
@MC changes eyebrowsColor into Pink Lt
goto browsColor
}“Lilac Purple”{
@MC changes eyebrowsColor into Purple Lilac
goto browsColor
}“Cool Gray”{
@MC changes eyebrowsColor into Cool Gray
goto browsColor
}“Gray”{
@MC changes eyebrowsColor into Gray
goto browsColor
}“White”{
@MC changes eyebrowsColor into Warm White
goto browsColor
}
“Change eyebrow shape.”{
goto brows
}
“Looks good!”{
goto avatar
}

################################# FACE #########################################
label face

    NARRATOR
What face shape would you like?

choice [shouldPaginate:YES]
“Defined Triangle” {
@MC changes face into Triangle Defined
goto face
}
“Defined Heart” {
@MC changes face into Heart Defined
goto face
}
“Diamond” {
@MC changes face into Diamond
goto face
}
“Long Diamond” {
@MC changes face into Diamond Long
goto face
}
“Soft Heart” {
@MC changes face into Heart Soft
goto face
}
“Soft Round” {
@MC changes face into Round Soft
goto face
}
“Mature Heart” {
@MC changes face into Heart Mature
goto face
}
“Mature Square” {
@MC changes face into Square Mature
goto face
}
“Mature Heart” {
@MC changes face into Heart Mature
goto face
}
“Looks good!” {
goto avatar
}

################################## EYES #######################################
label eyes

    NARRATOR
What eye shape would you like?

choice [shouldPaginate:YES]
“Mature Deepset” {
@MC changes eyes into Deepset Mature
goto eyes
}“Downturned Deepset” {
@MC changes eyes into Deepset Downturned
goto eyes
}“Slender Natural” {
@MC changes eyes into Female Generic
goto eyes
}“Slender Monolid” {
@MC changes eyes into Monolid Slender
goto eyes
}“Round Downturned Wide” {
@MC changes eyes into Round Downturned Wide
goto eyes
}“Round Medium” {
@MC changes eyes into Round Medium
goto eyes
} “Sharp Almond” {
@MC changes eyes into Sharp Almond
goto eyes
} “Deepset Almond” {
@MC changes eyes into Deepset Almond
goto eyes
}“Change Color.”{
goto eyesColor
}“Looks good!”{
goto avatar
}

label eyesColor

    NARRATOR
What color should your eyes be?

choice [shouldPaginate:YES]
“Aqua Blue”{
@MC changes eyesColor into Blue Aqua
goto eyesColor
}“Deep Blue”{
@MC changes eyesColor into Blue Deep
goto eyesColor
}“Black Brown” {
@MC changes eyesColor into Brown Black
goto eyesColor
} “Dark Brown” {
@MC changes eyesColor into Brown Dark
goto eyesColor
} “Light Brown” {
@MC changes eyesColor into Brown Light
goto eyesColor
}“Green”{
@MC changes eyesColor into Green Emerald
goto eyesColor
}“Red”{
@MC changes eyesColor into Red
goto eyesColor
}“Violet” {
@MC changes eyesColor into Violet
goto eyesColor
}“Hazel” {
@MC changes eyesColor into Hazel
goto eyesColor
}“Grey” {
@MC changes eyesColor into Grey Cool
goto eyesColor
} “Change eye shape.” {
goto eyes
}
“Looks good!”{
goto avatar
}

################################## MOUTH #######################################
label mouth

    NARRATOR
What mouth shape would you like?

choice [shouldPaginate:YES]
“Full Heart Pouty” {
@MC changes mouth into Full Heart Pouty
goto mouth
}“Medium Heart Natural” {
@MC changes mouth into Medium Heart Natural
goto mouth
}“Full Round Pouty” {
@MC changes mouth into Full Round Pouty
goto mouth
}“Medium Thin” {
@MC changes mouth into Medium Thin
goto mouth
}“Thin Heart” {
@MC changes mouth into Thin Heart
goto mouth
}“Small Heart” {
@MC changes mouth into Small Heart
goto mouth
}“Full Round Flat Top Skin” {
@MC changes mouth into Full Round Flat Top Skin
goto mouth
} “Change color.”{
goto mouthColor
}
“Looks good!”{
goto avatar
}

label mouthColor

    NARRATOR
What color lips would you like?

choice [shouldPaginate:YES]
“Beige Deep Neutral” {
@MC changes mouthColor into Beige Deep Neutral
goto mouthColor
}“Beige Gold Matte” {
@MC changes mouthColor into Beige Gold Matte
goto mouthColor
}“Beige Light Gold Matte” {
@MC changes mouthColor into Beige Light Gold Matte
goto mouthColor
}“Beige Rose” {
@MC changes mouthColor into Beige Rose
goto mouthColor
}“Brown Deep Gold”{
@MC changes mouthColor into Brown Deep Gold
goto mouthColor
}“Brown Deep Rose” {
@MC changes mouthColor into Brown Deep Rose
goto mouthColor
}“Brown Gold” {
@MC changes mouthColor into Brown Gold
goto mouthColor
}“Fair Gold Matte” {
@MC changes mouthColor into Fair Gold Matte
goto mouthColor
}“Peach Gloss” {
@MC changes mouthColor into Peach Gloss
goto mouthColor
}“Peach Matte”{
@MC changes mouthColor into Peach Matte
goto mouthColor
}“Pink Beige Gloss” {
@MC changes mouthColor into Pink Beige Gloss
goto mouthColor
}“Pink Beige Matte” {
@MC changes mouthColor into Pink Beige Matte
goto mouthColor
}“Pink Hot Matte”{
@MC changes mouthColor into Pink Hot Matte
goto mouthColor
}“Pink Medium Gloss”{
@MC changes mouthColor into Pink Medium Gloss
goto mouthColor
}“Pink Medium Matte”{
@MC changes mouthColor into Pink Medium Matte
goto mouthColor
}“Pink Peach Light Matte”{
@MC changes mouthColor into Pink Peach Light Matte
goto mouthColor
}“Pink Warm Gloss” {
@MC changes mouthColor into Pink Warm Gloss
goto mouthColor
}“Pink Warm Matte” {
@MC changes mouthColor into Pink Warm Matte
goto mouthColor
}“Purple Pastel Gloss” {
@MC changes mouthColor into Purple Pastel Gloss
goto mouthColor
}“Purple Pastel Matte” {
@MC changes mouthColor into Purple Pastel Matte
goto mouthColor
}“Black Gloss”{
@MC changes mouthColor into Black Gloss
goto mouthColor
}“Black Matte” {
@MC changes mouthColor into Black Matte
goto mouthColor
}“Brown Neutral” {
@MC changes mouthColor into Brown Neutral
goto mouthColor
}“Fair Neutral Matte” {
@MC changes mouthColor into Fair Neutral Matte
goto mouthColor
}“Fair Rose Matte” {
@MC changes mouthColor into Fair Rose Matte
goto mouthColor
}“Mauve Gloss”{
@MC changes mouthColor into Mauve Gloss
goto mouthColor
}“Mauve Matte” {
@MC changes mouthColor into Mauve Matte
goto mouthColor
}“Pink Deep Gloss” {
@MC changes mouthColor into Pink Deep Gloss
goto mouthColor
}“Pink Deep Matte” {
@MC changes mouthColor into Pink Deep Matte
goto mouthColor
}“Pink Hot Gloss” {
@MC changes mouthColor into Pink Hot Gloss
goto mouthColor
}“Pink Peach Light Gloss”{
@MC changes mouthColor into Pink Peach Lt Gloss
goto mouthColor
}“Plum Gloss” {
@MC changes mouthColor into Plum Gloss
goto mouthColor
}“Plum Matte” {
@MC changes mouthColor into Plum Matte
goto mouthColor
}“Red Deep Gloss” {
@MC changes mouthColor into Red Deep Gloss
goto mouthColor
}“Red Deep Matte” {
@MC changes mouthColor into Red Deep Matte
goto mouthColor
}“Red Gloss”{
@MC changes mouthColor into Red Gloss
goto mouthColor
}“Red Matte” {
@MC changes mouthColor into Red Matte
goto mouthColor
}“Rose Gloss” {
@MC changes mouthColor into Rose Gloss
goto mouthColor
}“Rose Matte” {
@MC changes mouthColor into Rose Matte
goto mouthColor
}“Tan Deep Gold” {
@MC changes mouthColor into Tan Deep Gold
goto mouthColor
}“Tan Deep Neutral” {
@MC changes mouthColor into Tan Deep Neutral
goto mouthColor
}“Violet Gloss”{
@MC changes mouthColor into Violet Gloss
goto mouthColor
}“Violet Matte” {
@MC changes mouthColor into Violet Matte
goto mouthColor
}“Change lip shape.”{
goto mouth
}“Looks good!”{
goto avatar
}

################################## HAIR #######################################
label hair

    NARRATOR
Which type of hair style would you like?

choice
“Short Hairstyles” {
goto MC
}
“Medium Hairstyles” {
goto hairMedium
}
“Long Hairstyles” {
goto hairLong
}
“Tied-up Hairstyles” {
goto hairUp
}“Change color.”{
goto label hairColor
}“This looks good!”{
goto avatar
}

label hairLong

    NARRATOR
Which long hair style would you like?

choice [shouldPaginate:YES]
“Beach Wave” {
@MC changes hair into Beach Wave Hair
goto hairLong
}“Long Braided”{
@MC changes hair into Long Braided
goto hairLong
}“Long Dreadlocks” {
@MC changes hair into Long Dreadlocks
goto hairLong
}“Long Faux Hawk” {
@MC changes hair into Long Faux Hawk Solid
goto hairLong
}“Long Feathered” {
@MC changes hair into Long Feathered
goto hairLong
}“Long Straight Bangs” {
@MC changes hair into Long Straight Loose Bangs Blunt Solid
goto hairLong
}“Long Straight Side Bangs” {
@MC changes hair into Long Straight Loose Bangs Sideswept Solid
goto hairLong
}“Long Straight” {
@MC changes hair into Long Straight Loose Solid
goto hairLong
}“Try other styles.”{
goto hair
}“Change color.”{
goto label hairColor
}“This looks good!”{
goto avatar
}

label hairMedium

    NARRATOR
Which hair style would you like?

choice [shouldPaginate:YES]
“Hair Flip” {
@MC changes hair into Hair Flip
goto hairMedium
}“Medium Braided”{
@MC changes hair into Medium Braided
goto hairMedium
}“Medium Curls” {
@MC changes hair into Medium Curly Solid
goto hairMedium
}“Medium Dreadlocks” {
@MC changes hair into Medium Dreadlocks
goto hairMedium
}“Medium Straight”{
@MC changes hair into Straight Medium
goto hairMedium
}“Wavy Ombre”{
@MC changes hair into Short Wavy Ombre
goto hairMedium
}“Braided” {
@MC changes hair into Medium Braided
goto hairMedium
}“Medium Dreadlocks” {
@MC changes hair into Medium Dreadlocks
goto hairMedium
}“Wavy Ombre” {
@MC changes hair into Short Wavy Ombre
goto hairMedium
}“Straight” {
@MC changes hair into Straight Medium
goto hairMedium
}“Medium Curly” {
@MC changes hair into Medium Curly Solid
goto hairMedium
}“Hair Flip” {
@MC changes hair into Hair Flip
goto hairMedium
}“Try other styles.”{
goto hair
}“Change color.”{
goto label hairColor
}“This looks good!”{
goto avatar
}

label MC

    NARRATOR
Which short hair style would you like?

choice [shouldPaginate:YES]
“Afro”{
@MC changes hair into Afro
goto MC
}“Classic Bob” {
@MC changes hair into Classic Bob
goto MC
}“Curly Bob” {
@MC changes hair into Curly Bob
goto MC
}“Punk Pixie” {
@MC changes hair into Punk Pixie
goto MC
}“Short Curly Fade” {
@MC changes hair into Short Curly Fade
goto MC
}“Short Pixie”{
@MC changes hair into Short Pixie
goto MC
}“Short Straight Bangs” {
@MC changes hair into Blunt Bangs Short
goto MC
}“Short Waves” {
@MC changes hair into Short Wavy Hair Solid
goto MC
}“Try other styles.”{
goto hair
}“Change color.”{
goto label hairColor
}“This looks good!”{
goto avatar
}

label hairUp

    NARRATOR
Which hair style would you like?

choice [shouldPaginate:YES]
“Braided Bun” {
@MC changes hair into Braided Bun
goto hairUp
}“Long High Ponytail” {
@MC changes hair into Long High Ponytail
goto hairUp
}“Morning Updo” {
@MC changes hair into Morning Updo
goto hairUp
}“Short High Ponytail” {
@MC changes hair into Short High Ponytail
goto hairUp
}“Punk Pixie” {
@MC changes hair into Punk Pixie
goto hairUp
}“Try other styles.”{
goto hair
}“Change color.”{
goto label hairColor
}“This looks good!”{
goto avatar
}

label hairColor

    NARRATOR
What hair color would you like?

choice [shouldPaginate:YES]
“Dark Black”{
@MC changes hairColor into Black Dark
goto hairColor
}“Jet Black”{
@MC changes hairColor into Black Jet
goto hairColor
}“Dirty Blonde”{
@MC changes hairColor into Dirty Blonde
goto hairColor
}“Honey Blonde”{
@MC changes hairColor into Honey Blonde
goto hairColor
}“Strawberry Blonde” {
@MC changes hairColor into Strawberry Blonde
goto hairColor
}“Medium Blonde”{
@MC changes hairColor into Blonde Medium
goto hairColor
}“Ash Blonde” {
@MC changes hairColor into Ash Blonde
goto hairColor
}“Platinum Blonde”{
@MC changes hairColor into Platinum Blonde
goto hairColor
}“Strawberry Blonde”{
@MC changes hairColor into Strawberry Blonde
goto hairColor
}“Chestnut Brown”{
@MC changes hairColor into Chestnut Brown
goto hairColor
}“Dark Brown”{
@MC changes hairColor into Dark Brown
goto hairColor
}“Deep Brown”{
@MC changes hairColor into Deep Brown
goto hairColor
}“Light Brown”{
@MC changes hairColor into Light Brown
goto hairColor
}“Medium Brown”{
@MC changes hairColor into Medium Warm Brown
goto hairColor
}“Burgundy” {
@MC changes hairColor into Burgundy Red
goto hairColor
}“Copper Red”{
@MC changes hairColor into Copper Red
goto hairColor
}“Ginger Red”{
@MC changes hairColor into Ginger Red
goto hairColor
}“Mint Green”{
@MC changes hairColor into Green Mint
goto hairColor
}“Light Pink”{
@MC changes hairColor into Pink Lt
goto hairColor
}“Lilac Purple”{
@MC changes hairColor into Purple Lilac
goto hairColor
}“Cool Gray”{
@MC changes hairColor into Cool Gray
goto hairColor
}“Gray”{
@MC changes hairColor into Gray
goto hairColor
}“Warm White”{
@MC changes hairColor into Warm White
goto hairColor
}“Hot Pink” {
@MC changes hairColor into Hot Pink
goto hairColor
} “Peach Blonde” {
@MC changes hairColor into Peach Blonde
goto hairColor
} “Rose Gold” {
@MC changes hairColor into Rose Gold
goto hairColor
}“Red Purple” {
@MC changes hairColor into Red Purple
goto hairColor
} “Purple Lilac” {
@MC changes hairColor into Purple Lilac
goto hairColor
} “Plum” {
@MC changes hairColor into Plum
goto hairColor
} “Purple” {
@MC changes hairColor into Purple
goto hairColor
}“Blue” {
@MC changes hairColor into Blue
goto hairColor
} “Cornflower Blue” {
@MC changes hairColor into Cornflower Blue
goto hairColor
} “Aqua Blue” {
@MC changes hairColor into Aqua Blue
goto hairColor
} “Blue Black” {
@MC changes hairColor into Blue Black
goto hairColor
}“Green” {
@MC changes hairColor into Green
goto hairColor
} “Lime Green” {
@MC changes hairColor into Yellow Green
goto hairColor
} “Mint” {
@MC changes hairColor into Mint
goto hairColor
} “Aqua Green” {
@MC changes hairColor into Aqua Green
goto hairColor
}“Orange” {
@MC changes hairColor into Orange
goto hairColor
} “Red” {
@MC changes hairColor into Red
goto hairColor
} “Copper Red” {
@MC changes hairColor into Copper Red
goto hairColor
} “Ginger Red” {
@MC changes hairColor into Ginger Red
goto hairColor
}“Aqua Gray” {
@MC changes hairColor into Aqua Gray
goto hairColor
} “Yellow” {
@MC changes hairColor into Yellow
goto hairColor
} “Change hair style.”{
goto hair
}
“Looks good!”{
goto avatar
}

################################### NOSE ######################################
label nose

    NARRATOR
What nose would you like?

choice [shouldPaginate:YES]
“Natural” {
@MC changes nose into Defined Natural
goto nose
}
“Grecian” {
@MC changes nose into Grecian Soft
goto nose
}
“Broad” {
@MC changes nose into Round Broad
goto nose
}
“Button” {
@MC changes nose into Round Button
goto nose
}
“Upturned” {
@MC changes nose into Round Button Upturned
goto nose
}
“Downturned” {
@MC changes nose into Round Downturned
goto nose
}
“Flared” {
@MC changes nose into Round Flared Upturned
goto nose
}
“Looks great!”{
goto avatar
}

label avatar_end
@zoom reset
&MC exits left

#}

Is that ok?

Yes! It may take me a few minutes to edit it. Thank you for being patient!

Thank you for being patient with me! Lol, I felt like I sounded dumb for not knowing any of this.

Don’t feel dumb! I’ll never forget how confused I was when I tried learning how to write on Episode, there are so many things to remember. Sometimes I still don’t know what I’m doing.

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Does your main character have any siblings/family that will need to be edited as well?

I am not exactly sure about that. I guess at most there might be a mom but I don’t know for sure

Okay, so if you’re changing skin tone or hair colour/face shape (or something else) don’t forget to change some of the parents physical attributes to match some of the characters.

So if the reader gets to choose their appearance how can I make the mom look like the Main Character?

You just place the parent/sibling off screen and change their appearance as you would the main character, ex:

@MOM changes mouthColor into Beige Rose

You can use the code
@MC becomes MOM

Then you can change certain things.

I didn’t find any errors whatsoever. All labels and goto’s do exist, and there are no “if/elif/else” that I could find. The problem may be that if you are making both male and female available, that you only have the female options available, ex: “Defined Heart” is a face shape only available for female characters. If you are trying to make both male and female characters available, you would also have to create all of the choices for a male character.

I would have sent back the script, but due to the fact that I copy and pasted the script, a bunch of things that are not errors popped up on my script. (I don’t know why, but when you copy and paste this, a bunch of errors show up)

Hey! Sorry I’m just writing back. I am only making a girl for this story so that eliminates that. And I do have a lot of errors showing up on my script also.

If you also copy and pasted that script from somewhere then that may be the problem, but other than that everything is good to go, all labels and goto’s are correct.