Help me with my desc please!

How do I make this desc shorter but with the same context?:

Melody, a young poor girl, who’s life has taken turns for the worst. Or as it seems when she meets a handsome mafia leader, who offers her a job… Little did she know her life was going to change forever.

Also publishing my story sometime soon! It’s going to be called Sacrificing For You. If you would like to check it out I’ll post when its published but please help with the desc

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Melody, a young poor girl, who’s life has taken turns for the worst. Or as it seems when she meets a handsome mafia leader, who offers her a job… Little did she know her life was going to change forever.

Rescued from poverty by a handsome mafioso with a job offer, Melody knew her life would never be the same.

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O.m.g thank you so much I love it!

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Glad I could help!

Melody, a poor young girl, who’s life is at it’s worst. But suddenly it takes a turn when she meet’s a handsome mafia leader who offers her a job…