Hey, you wonderful people! I’m planning on writing a story called ‘Be-witch-ed’ and I need some help with it.
PLOT: It’s about a high school girl who has weird nightmares/dreams about a mysterious queen. She ignores it and continues with her life. One day, her (foster) mom tells her that they’re moving away tomorrow and she needs to pack all her things. As some of her things from her childhood in the basement, she heads there. She, then, finds a secret doorway and enters it. She comes to a realm called ‘Arkya’. She finds out that she’s the incredible witch’s daughter and she is the only hope to save Arkya from their enemies…
The plot is really interesting, the only reason why I voted for “it’s ok” and not “it’s good” is because I’ve seen this a dozen times already. It’s not necessarily a bad thing, I’m a sucker for regular-girls-turned-heroes stories so I’ll probably read it anyway, but you have to keep in mind that you have a huge competition and that for being seen you really need to stand out!
This might offend you, so I apologize in advance 😅
Hello there, so I’m actually in for your story. However, I did not vote that it’s good. The plot is okay; but for me, the flow I saw in your latter above is… um, no offense but it’s kind of the plot that I would consider ‘overused’. Again, no offense please don’t be angry at me >-< I mean, your settlements are good but I have actually read books like this in Wattpad which are terribly written lel. So much for this, it’s not really something you should worry about as the author. I suggest making it as unique as you can, with plot twists going on that will keep your readers on the hook.
P.S. With your amazing title, I’m sure you can catch some readers there. Anyway, people (I) like that kind of fantasy I think xD