Help me with my script please!

[Archangel2]

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[24aya]

You forgot to put is for dad action
@DAD is/starts walk_offset

[Shahara]

Or for line 10 you can also do this:

@DAD walks to screen center in zone 2 AND DAD is walk_exhausted

You also forgot to add is

@DAD is walk_offset or DAD exits right/left AND DAD is walk_offset

[Archangel2]

Thanks! Also, another question, my first screen shot the warning for that says it has to much values or something like that. And the characters won’t appear

[Shahara]

Can you send me another screenshot of that warning and script, please?

[Archangel2]

Sure!

[Archangel2]

[Shahara]

@add Handgun to COLE

@COLE walks to spot… in zone 1 AND COLE is run_athletic

@COLE is draw_gun

@pause for 0

@add Handgun to MILES

@MILES walks blah blah

@MILES is draw_gun

@pause for 0

@CIARA blah blah

@CIARA is scream AND COLE is shoot_loop AND MILES is shoot_loop

[Shahara]

You have to make sure to pause for a beat or 0, because there is so much going on in the script.
However, an easier way would be to make both characters enter at the same time. Then have the female character enter later,

[Archangel2]

Okay, thank you so much!

[Shahara]

Np!