Hello there!
I’m having a lot of trouble creating a decent description, everything I write seems very generic or cliche to me, but with the allowed word limit there really isn’t much I can do.
So, I’m looking for help, I will give you credit!
Here is what I have:
“Amelia is the owner of a small cafeteria, she leads a normal and plain life until one night she meets Leone, a mysterious and attractive man with a big secret.”
Please tell me your honest opinion and what would you change of it!
Thanks in advance! <3
Amelia, the owner of a small cafeteria, has never known anything other than her quiet, plain life… until the day she meets the mysterious (and attractive) Leone (Last name.) Will his dark secret destroy the undeniable connection between them?
If this is too long try shortening some parts
Or:
Amelia, the owner of a small cafeteria, has never known anything other than her quiet, plain life… until the day she meets the mysterious (and attractive) Leone (Last name.) Love, lies, and dark secrets await.
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OMG, it’s perfect! How can I credit you?
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Is it too long…?
You can credit me with my forums username @juliewrites or my name on the app, Juliewrites (it’s the same but with a capital J)
I don’t use IG that much
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It is long, but with a few changes, it fits perfectly. Thank you so much! 
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No problem!
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