Help me with translate!


#1

Hi everyone!

I’m a French’ girl from Paris, and I start writing a Story! I’m pretty good in English but not that much. (I’m better for understanding than reading lol)
So, did someone want to help me writing the dialogue ? I feel like there’s a lot of fault, and I really want my story to be good…

Thanks for reading me and have a nice day!


#2

Me! English is my first lsnguage