Help need your opinions!

So I’m writing this story where a bad girl and a boy who practically hate each other. And I’m currently writing episode 4, where the two gets a bit drunk and kissess each other without feelings involved. Will ppl say that it escalated too quickly?

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I’m not sure… but they were drunk. So that makes sense.

By the way, I liked the plot of your story :smile:

Hahaha thank u so much for the reply
I was literally dying waiting

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That happens to me sometimes… :wink:

Hey, I agree with @Gabalho, they were drunk so :woman_shrugging:t3:
I have a drunken kiss in ep 2 too, either with a boy the MC has known for a few years or with a boy she met that night, and my opinion is that drunken kisses happens all the time, however I recieved in some reviews that it was moving too quickly :woman_shrugging:t3:

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Also, is it published? I would love to read it, the plot sounds great :blush:

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Here! Thanks for the advice btw :heartpulse:
And can I know your thoughts after u read this story?

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Of course, should I write it in here or PM you? :blush:

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I want to read it but I’m on the computer…

haha you can write in here :blush:

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ahh I know that feeling

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:grin:

I’ve just finished the third chapter and I’m hooked. Overlays are on point, directing is on point, and I laughed so much through the three chapters :grin: I totally love it, amazing job

Omg thank you so much​:heartpulse::heartpulse:
And since you read my story, will it be okay to let them have a drunk kiss in episode4??

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It’s a good lot so I suggest you go for it!

I think it is :blush: I mean even now I can tell that there is a lot of chemistry between them, so it’s pretty normal that they will kiss when they are drunk :smile:

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