Help Needed With This Wedding Scene!

I need this wedding scene corrected with two characters added!

INT. RUSTIC HOME ALTAR - NIGHT
music music_dreamwalk
@ELI changes hair into Long Down Wavy Princess Braid
@ELI changes mouthColor into Pink Deep Gloss
@cut to zone 2
@PEACE moves to layer 0
@PEACE spot 0.542 159 366 AND PEACE faces right
@ELI stands screen center AND ELI faces left AND ELI is rear
@ELI walks to spot 0.551 207 353 in 5 AND ELI is walk_neutral_rear
@ELI spot 0.551 207 353 AND ELI faces left AND ELI is idle_happy_loop
@ANNA spot 0.470 106 -54
@ANNA walks to spot 0.542 106 352 in 5 AND ANNA is walk_neutral_rear
@ANNA spot 0.542 106 352 AND ANNA faces right AND ANNA is flirt_shy
@zoom on 473 363 to 184% in 5
@ELI is blush_shy AND ANNA is blush_shy
music off
PEACE (talk_smile_happy_loop)
We all gathered here today to join Eli Abe and Anna Wright in holy metronome.
PEACE
Do you two have your own vows?
ANNA (talk_agree_happy)
We do.
@ELI is idle_happy_loop
ANNA (talk_agree_happy)
I’ll go first.
PEACE (talk_neutral)
Very well.
ANNA (talk_smile_happy_loop)
Eli…
ANNA
We may not have been together for too long. But I can honestly say, you’re may soulmate.
ANNA
You have my heart.
ANNA
And if I’m being honest, all the heartache I’ve experienced in my life is worth it. Because it led me to you.
ANNA
I know you’re always going to protect me.
ANNA
You will love me in sad and happy times.
ANNA
And will support me through anything. No matter how important. I love you Eli. From the bottom of my heart.
@ELI is cry_sniff_sad_loop
@pause for 3
ELI (talk_smile_happy_loop)
On this day…
ELI
I give you my heart.
ELI
I promise that I will walk with you hand-in-hand.
ELI
Wherever our journey leads us.
ELI
Living, learning, loving, together forever.
PEACE (talk_agree_happy)
Do you Eli Abe, take Anna Wright to be your lawfully wedded wife?
ELI (talk_flirt_coy)
I do.
PEACE (talk_agree_happy)
And do you Anna Wright, take Eli Abe to be your lawfully wedded wife?
ANNA (talk_excited_happy)
I do!
PEACE (talk_smile_happy_loop)
I now pronounce you wife and wife.
PEACE
You may kiss.
@ANNA moves to layer 0
@ELI spot 0.542 143 355
@ELI faces right AND ELI is kiss_makeout_loop_rear AND ANNA is kiss_makeout_loop
@pause for .5
NARRATOR (ANNA)
At the moment our lips touched…
NARRATOR (ANNA)
It felt as if I was floating on air.
NARRATOR (ANNA)
I’m married to the love of my life.
@transition fade out black
@zoom reset

When ELI walks down the alter a character named JAY needs to be walking with her
And when ANNA walks down the alter a character named DAD needs to be walking with her!

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So basically you want the character eli and jay will walk together and anna with the dad

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Yep. And maybe have Anna’s spot changed so she doesn’t look tiny. And add the start and stop to the kiss.

I have this for the beginning:

INT. RUSTIC HOME ALTAR - NIGHT
music music_dreamwalk
@ELI changes hair into Long Down Wavy Princess Braid
@ELI changes mouthColor into Pink Deep Gloss
@cut to zone 2
@PEACE moves to layer 0
@PEACE spot 0.542 159 366 AND PEACE faces right
@ELI enters from right to screen center in 4 AND ELI faces left AND DAD enters from right to upscreen right in 5 AND DAD faces left THEN DAD is rear AND ELI is rear
@ELI walks to spot 0.551 207 353 in 5 AND ELI is walk_neutral_rear AND DAD walks to spot 0.551 253 356 in 5 AND DAD faces right AND DAD is walk_neutral_rear THEN DAD faces left
@ELI spot 0.551 207 353 AND ELI faces left AND ELI is idle_happy_loop
@ANNA spot 0.470 106 -54 AND JAY spot 0.470 64 -20
@ANNA walks to spot 0.542 106 352 in 5 AND ANNA is walk_neutral_rear AND JAY walks to spot 0.542 52 355 in 6 AND JAY faces left AND JAY is walk_neutral_rear THEN JAY faces right
@ANNA spot 0.542 106 352 AND ANNA faces right AND ANNA is flirt_shy
@zoom on 473 363 to 184% in 5
@ELI is blush_shy AND ANNA is blush_shy

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Eli walks with Jay & Anna with Dad

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Then just change Jay to Dad and Dad to Jay

For the kiss
I suggest you to give a long pause like for
2 second and replace is with starts like this

@elli starts kiss AND Anna starts kiss
@pause for 2

Change name and animation according :sweat_smile:

And for the walking cheris script will do its great

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In your opinion, should I zoom in on the kiss?

Yeah I would zoom in.

I have coded this for the kiss:

PEACE(talk_smile_happy_loop)
I now pronounce you wife and wife.
PEACE
You may kiss.
@ANNA moves to layer 0
@ELI walks to spot 0.542 143 355 in zone 2 in 3
@ELI faces right AND ELI is kiss_makeout_loop_rear AND ANNA is kiss_makeout_loop
@pause for .5
&zoom on 436 378 to 597% in 15
NARRATOR (ANNA)
At the moment our lips touched…
@pause for 2
NARRATOR (ANNA)
It felt as if I was floating on air.
@pause for 5
NARRATOR (ANNA)
I’m married to the love of my life.
@pause for 8
@transition fade out 3

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I know this isn’t of any help, but I stumbled across this post and this particular scene honestly sounds really adorable. :blush:

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Hey, this is actually a post I made for my story so if you’re talking about the scene itself, thanks.

Guys! I need help with the first dance scene!

INT. RUSTIC WEDDING RECEPTION - NIGHT
@ELI moves to layer 0
@ANNA spot 0.650 152 298 AND ANNA faces left
@ELI spot 0.632 148 301 AND ELI faces left
@ANNA is dance_slow_neutral_loop_rear AND ELI is dance_slow_neutral_loop
@zoom on 187 297 to 171% in 5
&ANNA spot 0.650 152 298 AND ANNA faces left AND ANNA starts dance_slow_neutral_loop_rear
ELI (talk_dance_slow_neutral_loop)
I love you, Anna.
ANNA
I love you too, Eli.
@transition iris out black
@zoom reset

I want to add couples coming to start dancing in the background. Can anyone help? If you can, tell me and I’ll tell you the couples names and genders

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