Help ! Please! Save Elsa


#1

Okay first of all I think I’ve told this a hundred times ,I’m new to this community n I’m working on my first story so when I created my first choice about what should I wear ,I had to write thesame things twice So my question is do we have to write the same things twice bcoz we created a choice about their outfits ? Please help me .


#2

Can I see your script?


#3

If I understand correctly, you don’t have to write the same things many times (as in in every choice to write the same narration etc).
Regarding the outfit choices, you can write something like:

label clothes
YOU (think)
(What should I wear today?)
choice
“Outfit1” {
@YOU changes into outfit1
}“outfit2” {
@YOU changes into outfit2
}“outfit3”{
@YOU changes into outfit3
}
YOU (idle)
(Should I wear this?)
choice
“Yes” {
YOU (talk_happy_smile)
This is perfect!
} “No” {
goto clothes
}

There are also many tutorials you can watch regarding choices. Hope I helped :slight_smile:


#4

No, you use a label. I normally use this template:

label choosing_outfit

    CHARACTER (think)
(What do I want to wear?)

choice “outfit1” {

@CHARACTER is dustoff_loop

@CHARACTER changes into outfit1

} “outfit2” {

@CHARACTER is dustoff_loop

@CHARACTER changes into outfit2

}

@pause for a beat

@pause for a beat

    CHARACTER (think)
(Do I want to wear this or try something else?)

choice “Wear this outfit” {

    CHARACTER (talk_shrug)
This will do.

} “Try something else” {

goto choosing_outfit

}


#5

Ooh thank u for ur help but I’m creating .y stories on my phone n I didn’t find any options like labels


#6

Creating on your phone is very limited.
I sugegst writing on the Writer’s Portal.


#7

Hmm


#8

Write on phone and then edit it by script , that’s how I do it☺