Help Please! Script error possibly


#1

The script below isn’t working on my phone screen. Is there something I did wrong?

INT. TOWNHOUSE ATTIC - NIGHT with EFFECT DIM 60
@zoom on 126 281 to 250% in 0
&ANDRES starts kiss_passionate_loop_rear AND YOU starts kiss_passionate_loop
&ANDRES spot 0.537 150 313 in zone 1 at layer 1 AND ANDRES faces left AND YOU spot 0.523 119 308 in zone 1 at layer 0 AND YOU faces right
@transition fade in white 2

@zoom on 133 279 to 395% in 2.7


#2

I don’t think you can put ‘at layer1’ at the end. Try putting these lines above the transition, saying:

&ANDREAS moves to layer 1
&YOU moves to layer 0


#3

Thanks for the suggestion but it’s still acting the same. You see, the characters aren’t doing their action. Their layering is correct but their just standing there. I don’t know how to fix that.


#4

Try is instead of starts?


#5

Try putting the spot positioning line before the line with the actions


#6

Thank you both for your suggestions! I did what you said @random_life and it worked!

This was my conclusion:

INT. TOWNHOUSE ATTIC - NIGHT with EFFECT DIM 60
&zoom on 126 281 to 250% in 0
&ANDRES spot 0.537 150 302 in zone 1 at layer 1 AND ANDRES faces right AND YOU spot 0.523 119 308 in zone 1 at layer 0 AND YOU faces right
@ANDRES starts kiss_passionate_loop_rear AND YOU starts kiss_passionate_loop
@transition fade in white 2

@zoom on 123 275 to 395% in 2.9


#7