(Help!) POLL: Which story description?

My Squad contest entry is near done! Now I’m deciding on a description that fits the cover and my fantasy story!

Title: The Split Kingdom


Which description hooks you and makes you want to read?


The Ice Queen declared war on your kingdom, In retaliation, your king has a plan. 5 citizens will infiltrate the Ice kingdom, with one goal. To assassinate the Ice Queen.


The King of Landyce has selected 5 assassins for an important mission. Assassinate the queen of the Ice Kingdom and if they fail, An all-out war is heading their way.


On their final job, a group of Assassins is caught. Their king provides a choice. Assassinate the Ice Queen or die. The problem? the Ice Queen isn’t going down without a fight.

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Please let me know why you chose your option! :slightly_smiling_face:

(Link to my Instagram where I promote the story)

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the first is definitely the most engaging !! however if your plan for the story is for the mc to be one of the five infiltrators then i advise you to add this in the description (: that gives the reader a concrete reason to begin reading

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