INT. CONNERCLOSET
label choosing_outfitt
KATHERINE (idle_happy_pose)
...
choice (PARTYOUTFIT)
"Pretty in Pink" {
@KATHERINE changes into KATHERINE_party2
}
“Devil wears Prada”{
@KATHERINE changes into KATHERINE_party3
}
“Retro in Neon”{
@KATHERINE changes into KATHERINE_party4
}
KATHERINE (talk_neutral_atcamera_loop)
Is this the one?
choice
“That’s The One.” {
KATHERINE (deepbreath)
(Here we go.)
}
“Not At All.” {
goto choosing_outfitt
}
INT. PROTAG ROYAL BEDROOM - NIGHT
@cut to zone 3
NARRATOR
Katherine walks out of the closet dressed in her new outfit.
SEATTLE (talk_exclaim_yes_happy)
Oh my god YES!
CONNER (talk_excited_happy)
Girl you look amazing. I didn't say look better than me in my own clothes.
KATHERINE (talk_neutral)
Thanks you all.
NARRATOR
They all walk back downstairs.
INT. CONNERPARTY - NIGHT
NARRATOR
Several people stare at Katherine as she grabs a drink.
@GRAYSON is react_startled_subtle
@DEANNA is admire_happy
EXT. CONNERYARD - NIGHT
@pan to zone 3
NARRATOR
Katherine, Seattle, and Conner all sit down on a couple lounge chairs next to the pool.
CONNER (talk_neutral)
So no pressure but someone keeps looking over here at you.
KATHERINE (talk_apathetic)
It’s probaby because some bimbo over there has my name in her mouth.
SEATTLE (talk_neutral)
Yeah I don’t think so. He’s not paying her any attention.
CONNER (talk_doubtful)
Why would he? They’re not even together. She’s a stalker you’d see in a movie.
KATHERINE (talk_neutral)
How about we just drop this because I’m not even interested in him anyways.
@add Can Beer Aluminum Blue White to KATHERINE
@KATHERINE is sip_cup_neutral_loop
NARRATOR
Gunner then appears behind Katherine.
GUNNER (talk_armscrossed_angry_loop)
Katherine, a word?
KATHERINE (talk_shrug_concerned)
Uh yeah okay. Be right back guys.
NARRATOR
They walk away from the party until they’re alone. Katherine catches Coralee and some of her friends whispering and laughing.
@pan to zone 1
KATHERINE (talk_shrug_concerned)
What’s going on, you okay?
GUNNER (talk_armscrossed_angry_loop)
No I’m not. I’m not okay seeing my sister dressed so provocative.
KATHERINE (talk_startled_neutral)
Are you serious? That’s what this is about?!
if (PARTYOUTFIT is “Pretty in Pink”) {
GUNNER (talk_argue_angry)
The Montgomery’s do not dress like this!
Your skirt is way too short and practically see through!
KATHERINE (talk_argue_defensive)
This is no where near innapropriate or see through!
And if you have a problem with what I wear, take it up with mom. She’s the one who moved us here
We are not going to fit in here with ruffles and loafers!
GUNNER (talk_angry)
Who cares what people think here??
KATHERINE (talk_argue_defensive)
I do Gunner!
} elif (PARTYOUTFIT is “Devil wears Prada”) {
GUNNER (talk_argue_angry)
You look like a cheap stripper! Your bra is handing out! If mom saw this she’d have a fit.
@KATHERINE is react_gasp_dismayed
KATHERINE (talk_argue_defensive)
First of all, you will never call me a stripper ever again.
Second, mom made us move here. My closet isn’t going to cut it here!
Third, mind you own business. I actually like this outfit. And it’s not a bra.
KATHERINE (talk_armscrossed_condescending_loop)
It’s called a bandeau.
GUNNER (talk_angry)
I’m glad you think this is a joke.
KATHERINE (talk_angry)
I’m glad you think you can play dad.
} else (PARTYOUTFIT is “Retro in Neon”) {
GUNNER (talk_argue_angry)
You have more holes in your jeans than a bee hive and you might as well not even wear a shirt.
KATHERINE (talk_argue_defensive)
This is the style Gunner! And I personally think it looks fun!
GUNNER (talk_angry)
And what if mom found out!
KATHERINE (talk_armscrossed_angry_loop)
She would actually have to be around for that to happen.
}
NARRATOR
By now, everyone could hear them yelling.
Here’s my script. Please tell me what I’m doing wrong. Remembering determines her brothers reaction to what she’s wearing…
