Help & Suggestions for my story - Honest Opinions Wanted

Hello everyone, please could you help a friend in need?

I’ve started writing my own story Out Of Your League, is anyone able to read my first 3 chapters to see if there are any mistakes or anything it’s lacking? I would really really appreciate it, I haven’t published it yet but it’s my first story so I am a bit nervous. If you would like to help & give feedback, please click on the below link. I am aware that my story won’t be everyones cup of tea. Thank you so much :two_hearts:

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I’d love to help you out! :blush: that cover is AMAZING btw! :heart_eyes:

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Thank you so much! Please could you read the first 3 chapters and share any advise or anything you liked or disliked? It’s mostly character building in the first 3 episodes. Thank you! My friend drew the people and I just messed around with the rest of it :joy:

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