Help the newbie make it flow!

Hi guys,

I recently finished the first four Chapters of my story.
For the first time I really need some help with the plot. The story itself gets very complex and I try to make it slowly growing without taking away too much.
I need some fresh eyes to read Chapter 1 - 4 and tell me if it is to slow or if I should speed up the momentum.
Anybody willing to have a sneak peak?


I could also take a look.

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