Help to scene, please

My MC was puss out from a balcony but was saved last second, and well I made choice on how she reacted but I dont feel like her reaction in any of them is good or realistic, any advice people?

    SONJA (talk_sit_shrug_neutral)
[JANE] are you okay?

choice
“I am fine” {
@zoom on 368 304 to 298% in 0
&OBERON is idle_awkward_uneasy_loop
JANE (talk_awkward_loop)
I am fine…I think

    JANE (talk_sad)
How about you?

@zoom on 593 136 to 298% in 0
ARIWIS (talk_sit_legsup_neutral_loop)
Your voice is cracing

&ARIWIS is idle_sit_legsup_neutral_loop
@zoom on 368 304 to 298% in 0
JANE (talk_confused_mindblown)
Okay I am not fine, I was puss out from a freaking balcony

@JANE is deepbreath

    JANE (talk_sad_exhausted)
But I am not hurt either, so I will be fine

    JANE (talk_baby_worried_atbaby)
As soon as I calm dowm.
I think I need to sit down

@JANE is transition_stand_to_squat_neutral
@JANE spot 0.673 138 184 in zone 2
@JANE faces left
@OBERON spot 0.697 49 244 in zone 2
@zoom reset
@JANE is idle_sit_sad_loop
@pause for 2

}
“no f-ing way”{
@zoom on 368 304 to 298% in 0
@JANE moves to layer 1
@OBERON moves to layer 2
&JANE is talk_exclaim_no_worried THEN JANE is talk_confused_mindblown AND OBERON is react_gasp_dismayed
JANE
No fukcing way, how can you even ask that

@OBERON faces left
@OBERON spot 0.697 75 232 in zone 2

    OBERON (hug_neutral_rear)
[JANE] calm dowm, look at me I got you

@JANE faces left
OBERON (hug_talk_neutral_loop_rear)
Try and take a deep breath
You are safe now, there is no danger
@JANE is deepbreath
JANE (talk_sad)
Your right I am gonna be fine

    JANE (talk_baby_worried_atbaby)
As soon as I calm dowm.
I think I need to sit down

@JANE is transition_stand_to_squat_neutral
@JANE spot 0.673 138 184 in zone 2
@JANE faces left
@zoom reset
@OBERON faces right
@OBERON spot 0.697 45 234 in zone 2
@JANE is idle_sit_sad_loop AND OBERON is idle
@pause for 2

}

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    JANE (talk_unsure)
How about you?

@zoom on 593 136 to 298% in 0
ARIWIS (talk_sit_legsup_neutral_loop)
Your voice is cracking

&ARIWIS is idle_sit_legsup_neutral_loop
@zoom on 368 304 to 298% in 0
JANE (talk_confused_mindblown)
Okay I am not fine, I literally passed out from a freaking balcony

@JANE is deepbreath

    JANE (talk_sad_exhausted)
But it didn't hurt me that bad so I'm okay

    JANE (talk_baby_worried_atbaby)
I think I need to calm down and sit down for a while
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