Help with choices


#1

INT. ISLAND BEDROOM - NIGHT
@YOU moves to layer 1 and NICK moves to layer 2
@cut to zone 2
@YOU changes into YOU_HERAUN
@NICK faces right and YOU faces right
&YOU spot 1.600 85 -236 and NICK spot 1.600 181 -237
@NICK starts idle_rear
NICK (talk_gesture_rear)
I’m so happy you’re pregnant with me.
NARRATOR
So [NAME] what you have in your belly?
choice
“A boy”{
YOU (talk_handsonhips)
I’m so happy I have your boy inside me.
goto Second_choice
label Second_choice
}
“A girl”{
YOU (talk_handsonhips)
I’m so happy I have your girl inside me.
}
goto continue_story

What is wrong with this code?


#2

I think you don’t need to label anything, it should be fine like this:

NARRATOR
So [NAME] what you have in your belly?
choice
“A boy”{
YOU (talk_handsonhips)
I’m so happy I have your boy inside me.
}
“A girl”{
YOU (talk_handsonhips)
I’m so happy I have your girl inside me.
}
#beat ends
#beat starts


#3

Hi,
Your problem is most likely that you have a label within the choice. you can’t do that, since a label always needs to be available no matter what choice the reader has done.

INT. ISLAND BEDROOM - NIGHT
@YOU moves to layer 1 and NICK moves to layer 2
@cut to zone 2
@YOU changes into YOU_HERAUN
@NICK faces right and YOU faces right
&YOU spot 1.600 85 -236 and NICK spot 1.600 181 -237
@NICK starts idle_rear
NICK (talk_gesture_rear)
I’m so happy you’re pregnant with me.
NARRATOR
So [NAME] what you have in your belly?
choice
“A boy”{
YOU (talk_handsonhips)
I’m so happy I have your boy inside me.
goto Second_choice
label Second_choice <— can’t have labels within choices.
}
“A girl”{
YOU (talk_handsonhips)
I’m so happy I have your girl inside me.
}
goto continue_story

Also - probably just happened here at the forum, but still going to mention it - and has to be with capital letters. AND

<3


#4

You should use “gain” because this story is going to affect the story somehow


#5

You can’t use labels inside brackets.

And you should gain the options in case later you’ll want to use them in the story.
It sounds like something that might come back later, even though I don’t know, it can be nothing, some people do imaginary flashback and it could mean nothing, I honestly have no idea lol.


#6

Closing due to one month of inactivity :slight_smile:


#7